Maaneet ff Envious Romance THREAD 1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 1 - 3

A bang-on start to the FF...

A too possessive Maan...No wonder Geet doesn't want to stay with him...

Geet's behavior is oscillating from a terrified cat to a wildcat!!

EDITED: Prt 4 -5

Sameera is with Maan just for money...He knows that but is still with her..

So Geet is an orphan..And my guess is that Dadima tied her to Maan to correct his ways...But Maan being The Arrogant Spoiled MSK; used to having his own way ,didn't acknowledge her and crushed her innocent heart...

EDITED: Prt 6 - 8

Poor Geet..She loves to play her violin...And this Maan is threatening her with this and that; so that she doesn't shun him..

My God!! Daadi wants to make Geet her bahu at any cost...Either Maan or Vicky...😊

So Daadi is indeed responsible for forcing Dev out of Geet's life and making her marry Maan..

EDITIED: Prt 9 - 10

Geet just wants to run away from him...What has Maan done that Geet fears him to this extent..?

Sameera has really corrupted Maan...😡

Edited by pearl_warrior - 12 years ago

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pearl_warrior

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Finished this thread...

Maan is truly smart...He found Geet in his own way..

And Geet also knew without looking, that Maan was in her apartment..

This MAan is very scary..Poor Geet..She doesn't have a carefree life...His made a life a living hell...

Loved the way you wrote the present as well as past and connected it perfectly...You have beautifully portrayed Maan's scary possesiveness and Geet's gentle innocence-now turned fear perfectly...

I don't know how it is going to end but Maan needs to chenge...Otherwise I can't see the possibility of Geet never fearing him..forget loving him..