Maaneet ff Envious Romance THREAD 1

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Awesme update as always..ha ha u made use of my dialogue..lol
hmm my maanu makng many attempts to make her feel comfortable bt only hs devil was taming her..so that kabab mein haddi that gadha dev(shory i hate any1 betwn maaneet) gifted that violin..cha maan would hav broken it..ha ha dnt kil me iam too posessive like maan..btw iam li'l cnfused part5 mein chudail sam ki story chal rahi thi na that was just a scene frm past?
Waiting for next i.e ahem ahem ahaan nt gopi wala yucky ahem bt my maaneet's passonate ahem..

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angelwords

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

wonderful story,
one of the best i read,
sorry for late reply
very busy...
do continue soon

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namita25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

nice update...

loved Geet n Dev's scene...haiii...I don't believe I am saying this...

n I really don't wanna see Maan forcing Geet...

waiting for he next part...

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

nyv update...

geet so scared of maan...

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

lovely update..😃
w8ing 4 update😍

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: ZAHRAN99
Will update here today...

WILL BE WAITING.

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: ZAHRAN99
Will update here today...

wow me waiting

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

waw!!loving it soo very much!pls cont the story!!i hope u can do ur very best at the admission xam and can get admitted to med school.
can't wait for the next part.pls give me a pm whenever u update the nxt part.

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shineel310

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

awsme update...jst waitng desprtly for the next update...n all d very best fr ur admissn prcess...tke cre n pls pls give us the update jaldi jaldi...u c m addicted to ur udates nw...lol...:)

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P0K0

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Present

at night...Maan was in deep sleep...but in his deep sleep he felt two hands on his chest above his shirt...he immediately knew...it's geet's hand...he kept quiet... actually controlled to respond back...

Maan felt her hands started unbuttoning his shirt...it was off his body...suddenly he felt her warm lips on his chest...maan jolted hard with her lips on his skin...it was impossible for him to control...impossible for him not to love her back...but he didnt want to panic her with his overflowing passion...so he was pretending hard to show her he is asleep...

Her slow kisses traveled from his abs to the crook of his neck...like looking for something...he was laying with his eyes closed...but clearly not sleeping...he was breathing heavyly...and busy feeling her soft and warm lips...closing his eyes...

Suddenly...geet bit on his jaw...

That's it...he couldnt controll more...he groaned like a hungry wild animal...got up in a sitting position taking her in his arms tightly...to devour her...to make her his forever...

Maan jerked up in a sitting position...sweating and panting heavily...he was hell aroused...he looked at geet...she was in deep sleep...just beside her...then he realised...HE WAS DREAMING...

He looked at her...panting...her angelic sleeping figure was enough to make him more and more helpless in his burning passion...but he cant break his promise to geet...they cant make love unless she wants it...it's their first step to their marriage...and how can he deny his wife's demand...how can he...

He jerked away from her and rushed to the washroom...he stood under the shower...drenching completely...

...the feelings of those lips...he groned...he tried to forget it...but at the same time he was trying hard to remember the feeling of her lips...her smooth soft hands...shiver ran through him...

He came out of the shower after controling himself...he changed into new tracks and laid down beside her...he didnt dare to face her...as he knew if he did then he wouldnt be able to control himself any more...he clenched his jaw to control himself from looking back at her...he was helplessly trying to think about any topic not related to her...but failed...badly...cause no one exists in his lfe now...except geet...it's only her now...it's only her...he felt a sharp pain in his heart...

Feeling helpless...he got up and rushed to his study...

Past

After having launch with maan, saavitri rushed there...she mentally cursed herself for not talking to her that day...she was feeling excited to see her again...

She entered there...only to see geet playing with kids...she was carring a little boy and running and jumping and laughing with them...

Savitri saw her and and thought she is just like natasha's nature...her heart overjoyed to get a glimps of her late daughter-in-law in this cute girl...

Natasha was more than a d-I-L to her...she was her friends daughter and as she never had a daughter she always claimed her to be her daughter...Rajveer,Maan's father was totally latto over her...for that she happily get them married.having maan,anwasha and vickey their life was going like a happy story...but when maan was 26 her mother died in a plane crash and not able to tolarate the truth Rajveer died of heart attack.since then maan had to take all the responsibilities.sending anni and vicky abroad to study he got busy with business...and gradually made KC the largest company ever.but with great success and with that B**** sam , he slowly started to lose his morals...although he never let the business get hampered even a little bit but still...he was not the same maan she knew...soft,shy and off course ...kind hearted.

Seeing geet she couldnt control the tears...she wiped them soon...controling herself...she went to her...she was sitting on a bench with the kid on his lap...taking a deep breath she stood near her...

Geet was laughing with that kid who was about 4 or 5 years old...tickling him...suddenly she notices they older lady from yesterday afternoon standing next to her...smiling...

She got up immediately taking him in her arms...he was sucking his thumb and gaping at dadima...

''Aapka naam kya hai beta?''SD asked

The baby boy (ishaan) said in his cute voice ''Geet didi''

Geet smiled at ishaan and noded at SD.

''aap violin bauhot acchi play karti ho...it's very nice beta...''

''Didi ne thanks kaha...didi 12 saal se seekh lahi hai...hai na didi...?''

''Lagta hai...aapki PA cum advertising manager aapko kuch bolne nehi dena chahte...hai na...?...by the way...what's U'r name beta?''SD asked smiling

''mela naam ishaan hai...aul didi kya bolegi...didi can't talk...''

''matlab...?''SD's smile faded as she started to sense that ishaan would say something horrible now...

''didi can't talk means didi can't talk...didi,mujhe neeche utaaalo i have to pee...'' ishaan said suddenly getting impaitient...coming down from her lap he started to pull her dress...''didi...mujhe susu kalado...plz''

Geet smiled apologeticly said to SD in sign language(mai abhi ayi...u must be looking for the office...it's on 1st floor 3rd door to u'r left..,,)

Saying this geet rushed with ishaan as he starting hopping making a face...

SD looked at her shocked...a tear dropped from her eye...she came with such happiness and...

She is a MUTE!!!

She couldn't control her tears and left there as fast as possible...

Part-8

Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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