Gangsta|FanFic#2 - Discontinued On IF - Link Added - Page 19

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome update loved his interview a lot

abb geet band bajayae gi iska hahahaha

eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: punam2712

SO HE KNOWS KHURANA CONSTRUCTION

BUT THEN WHY IS HE CALLED GURMEET CHOUDHRY

Originally posted by: misssmily

Saddie Bonjour ! ;) Bonjour 😃

How u doing sweety, yeaah i know i didnt comment the previous chap, got a bit lazy 🥱 😳 sorrry ! It's Okay

But hey what an exellent chap, i sooo loved it, and yeaaah well i agree with you don't spend too much time on other characters, focus on guru/geet, them, only them, again them, just 100% them 😉 just kidding ! Thank You No it's just that I end up dedicating one update one damn scene! Need to get the story moving so will have to skip some details.

Possessive guru, am drooling ! "Don't show ur ninja moves" and the last part was just too funny 😆. Bdw loved the way geet thought abt her relationship with gurmeet, it was nice having her point of view, i know that maan is a man of few words, but i will b good if we have a part with only his point of view and the way his perceive things ! But not now, later on. I will put his POV But not now

Abi to geet guru ki class legi 😈, am eager to know her reaction and guru's as well, how will he handle a crazy/yelling geet 😆 Haha 😆 Let's See😛

Hayyye we are at an interesting point of the story, i think i unerderstood, guru is his name as a mechanic and maan is his name as owner of khurana construction, and as if it was too simple for saddie's twisted mind he is gangster at his spare time lol, but still the question is : why ? 🤣 🤣 🤣 Keep wondering on that I ain't saying anything😆

Well I have lots of question right now, but i guess i'll just have to wait ^^

Anyway nice part dear, keep it up ! Thank You 😳

Oh and how did i forget, meera such a niiice friend, she left poor geet when she needed her most 😆. LOL I Know such a loyal friend😆

Waiting for the next part !
With lots of love
Zubi

Originally posted by: Thabs

aaar ek baat batoun khurana and gurmeet ..soochkay hi maera

sir ghom rahah hai 😆

khair aisaen pagal sooch sirf thery hi ho sakthein hai...

lol...

so bold guru ...haath mangliya ...lets wait and watch for more

nice update sadu

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Sadie, saalo baad uska naam suna. The name is Chaudhary, Gurmeet Chaudhary. Man, loved it. Maan ki entry kab hogi? Finally, concentrating on the character.

GC kum tha ki uski lovey dovey Geet turned into ninja. Gosh, poor guys. Meera, that much despo. Rishab, who exactly you are? The whole sasur-damaad scene was mazedaar. Geet, get a control girl. Khurana baap aur Chaudhary son and Maan yet not come? Ho kya raha hai? Overall, superb.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

Updating

Already Typed Up Half of the update. Will be posted tomorrow. I'm gonna be giving long updates because I ..just have to😆

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..

Updating

Already Typed Up Half of the update. Will be posted tomorrow. I'm gonna be giving long updates because I ..just have to😆

Sadiie x

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..

Updating

Already Typed Up Half of the update. Will be posted tomorrow. I'm gonna be giving long updates because I ..just have to😆

Sadiie x

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

omg i loved the update. . . from beginning to end!

though my mind is spinning as to where the twist is going to come and GC turns dark. . .but will wait and see what u have planned.

as for now i am loving the hot maaneet moments!

isn't GC just hungry for her lips 😉😆

fabulous update twinnie!

poor Meera though 🤣

update soon!

<3

~Zee