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part 21
nice part...
so Maan is the owner of KC?
cont soon dear...

Saddie Bonjour ! ;)

How u doing sweety, yeaah i know i didnt comment the previous chap, got a bit lazy 🥱 😳 sorrry !

But hey what an exellent chap, i sooo loved it, and yeaaah well i agree with you don't spend too much time on other characters, focus on guru/geet, them, only them, again them, just 100% them 😉 just kidding !

Possessive guru, am drooling ! "Don't show ur ninja moves" and the last part was just too funny 😆. Bdw loved the way geet thought abt her relationship with gurmeet, it was nice having her point of view, i know that maan is a man of few words, but i will b good if we have a part with only his point of view and the way his perceive things ! But not now, later on.

Abi to geet guru ki class legi 😈, am eager to know her reaction and guru's as well, how will he handle a crazy/yelling geet 😆

Hayyye we are at an interesting point of the story, i think i unerderstood, guru is his name as a mechanic and maan is his name as owner of khurana construction, and as if it was too simple for saddie's twisted mind 😛 he is gangster at his spare time lol, but still the question is : why ?

Well I have lots of question right now, but i guess i'll just have to wait ^^

Anyway nice part dear, keep it up !

Oh and how did i forget, meera such a niiice friend, she left poor geet when she needed her most 😆.

Waiting for the next part !
With lots of love
Zubi

Sadie, saalo baad uska naam suna. The name is Chaudhary, Gurmeet Chaudhary. Man, loved it. Maan ki entry kab hogi? Finally, concentrating on the character.

GC kum tha ki uski lovey dovey Geet turned into ninja. Gosh, poor guys. Meera, that much despo. Rishab, who exactly you are? The whole sasur-damaad scene was mazedaar. Geet, get a control girl. Khurana baap aur Chaudhary son and Maan yet not come? Ho kya raha hai? Overall, superb.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update she is going to kill him for hiding things from her loved how she fought with those guys awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Very short part...but loved it...geet being dare devil to bachao a abla girl was good...funny...afterall GC was there to save her...lol...

GC ...ufff ...(bar bar Maan ka hi naam mu pe aata hai...GC naam kyu rakha...) caught questioning by her father...what...KC is owned by GC...khurana is her father's name...then where from Chaudahry came from...😕 waitng to unfold the mystery

But I LOVED the last line...geet pushing maan against the wall...😉

T4pm

UPDATE SOON😆

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Lovely update...
loved the questioning section a lot..
seems like geet GC ki baand bajne waali hain... 😆

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

They are in India or London...

Rishab (Geet's father) took his interview and he told him that he is owner of KC...Geet is shocked...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: sanjh89

I luvd the interrogation part...

Typical Daddy...

Fuming GEEt...

Dhamaka s on way!!!

love

SANJH