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Shefali16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

Geet is confusd...
dnt want dev to create problems...let him jst divorce nd leave maaneet alone..hehe
maan is restles
luvd it :)

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nayyariqbal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

The re-org here is a bit more smooth/subtle (in Geet's favor) as opposed to pink slip!

Also leaving out the salary package etc. where she got same as Meera was better - that way it is not Maan who is "taking care" of her which she doesn't like later in the story.

Loved the taffy part - she has to do something awkward every time!!

I doubt if Dev will fly over to NY - even if he does, it might not be pretty...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Lord! I feel too dorky posting this...Why on earth did I write this? Don't mind leaving your honest opinions here.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

Waiting eagerly for the karvachauth

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: had2bu
Waiting eagerly for the karvachauth

But I'm not writing Karwa Chauth...

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

Part 24... what must I say many revelations in it...

Beautiful description of her angst, how she's torn between her dreams & reality or to say morals instilled in her... Her deleting the song itself shows how much she's shaken within cause of the dreams, trying to see physical changes in apperance as such in childhood where we used to believe that once we do a mistake there would be some kind of distortion in us so people could know about what we've done...

Dev says he's coming...😕 , I think its just so that he can pacify her on temporary basis as he feels guilty post hearing her voicemsg she left the night before, the desperation in her tone must have caused him to make her feel that still he's there to be with her, wherein he too must be trying his best to deliver the blow to her.

The whole avoidance drama that she wanted to put forth against Maan, yet wants to be in his vicinity& wants him to initate conversation with her --- totally gives her away that she's been unsuccessful to negate his presence in her life... she's trying hard to believe that if its not visible to her the whole world also can't see it.

She's a queen in getting embarassed in front of him, the whole taffy scene was 😆😆

He's already promoted & he's even made her permanent or is it so?... so early, I think in the earlier version it was much later... is it his 6th sense already working or a pure coincidence that he's preparing her towards self-independence since now itself, unlike in the earlier version where he has to always be her saviour, where she needed to distinguish her feelings from it not being gratitude... just a thought...

..."I'm glad... That way everything will be more simple around you..." - I doubt its going to anything but simple...

The last paragraph was 👏... loevd it , it conveyed all about them that he too is in the same boat only that at present her emotions are being the most dealt with as its not much easy on him too... he too is venturing on unsure grounds...

Edited by Onir - 13 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

No...This is Pink Slip..Remember? I just moved it ahead. Also I didn't see any point in her fighting that he'd personally favored her when he'd also recommended two other people.

But thought this step is needed from Maan to hint at something..You will know in waning moon...

Oh so you've already cleared my one query ... good

Oh is there a hint... will be waiting for the "waning moon"...

Edited by Onir - 13 years ago