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Posted: 12 years ago
I really feel for Geet - the guilt of one dream is consuming her inside. I'm just starting to wonder what she would have been like if she was a single woman, & had dreamt of that dream with Maan.

I love the way you described her mind trying to block it out - our subconscious always tries to block unpleasant memories out but they bubble right back to the surface. I have a feeling Geet's attraction towards Maan will run along those lines...

Ahh, so Scott becomes the 'kebab mein haddi' between Maan & Geet. Maan's feigned indifference is clearly a facade, of course he wants her around him more 😆

Who is Geet trying to fool? This line totally gave her away:

"I'm glad...", she spoke filing out the silence that had set in around them and in a manner that conveyed she could only be anything but glad

Surely she can't convince herself it was nothing more than a mere intoxication of the song which led to such a dream now. I loved Maan's stolen moments with Geet, the deliberate closeness - someone can't stay away ;)

I wonder what Dev's arrival will bring, is it going to push Geet closer to Maan? And looking glass I... leads me to wonder if we'll have a looking glass II from Maan's point of view...

Edited by walkintomylifex - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex


I loved Maan's stolen moments with Geet, the deliberate closeness - someone can't stay away ;)

I wonder what Dev's arrival will bring, is it going to push Geet closer to Maan? And looking glass I... leads me to wonder if we'll have a looking glass II from Maan's point of view...


@ bold: What are you to referring to here?

All series on Maan will be called Pensieve. The ones on Geet will be Looking Glass...😊
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Did i miss my place here? Was this part at this point or did you delete something?

I guess Geet is riled by his distancing her. He said it is for her good but it is hard to swallow in that instant.


Loved the taffy part. Thanks for updating



Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really really like this ff.. it is awesomeee 😊 i love ur writing style... can u please add me to ur pm list? thanks and please update soon... cant wait to read more.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Did i miss my place here? Was this part at this point or did you delete something?



No...This is Pink Slip..Remember? I just moved it ahead. Also I didn't see any point in her fighting that he'd personally favored her when he'd also recommended two other people.

But thought this step is needed from Maan to hint at something..You will know in waning moon...
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

thanks and please update soon...


I just updated this afternoon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element


@ bold: What are you to referring to here?

All series on Maan will be called Pensieve. The ones on Geet will be Looking Glass...😊


His resting his hand near hers, only to place it back on the chair... maybe I read too much into it but it seemed like he was trying to get closer but didn't want to startle her or anything...

Thank you for clarifying that 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element



No...This is Pink Slip..Remember? I just moved it ahead. Also I didn't see any point in her fighting that he'd personally favored her when he'd also recommended two other people.

But thought this step is needed from Maan to hint at something..You will know in waning moon...



Ok so you moved it up. I knew you were going to delete some parts, just wasn't sure!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh...i wonder is Dev actually coming over?? Guess what lies in store for that moment...

Geet being shifted from Maan's team to Scott...i believe Maan did that so Geet becomes permanent... i hope Geet deduces that in the coming time...
👏i loved the title...makes one think...
please update d next soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Precap

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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