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shreeyazz

@shreeyazz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

well, good infact great that u @least gave it a shot.! :) cuz it was worth it.! it was just soo damn awesum.! great work loved it.! :)

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Shefali16

@Shefali16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

M speechles
it ws beyond evrythng..
it ws PERFECTLY SUPERB

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Hi Marvee...thanks 4 da pms! Beautiful but sad n heart wrenching OS! Maaneet lived for ecah other n died in each other's arms! Maanet immensely loved each other! They had a happy ending by dying in each other's arms! Dev is so disgusting! The past moments were well incorporated! Emotional n intense! Superbly written !

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

awesome one... but to see the great msk in such a helpless situation was sad. keeping in mind the title and our msks personality, in the mid of the story i had thought he will take the roop dharan of rajnikanth or some telugu hero. u know, breaking the chains with just a muscle pull and all 😆 but am happy that it was not there in ur story.

though sad i really liked but still i hope u will write an os with a real happy ending,u know what i mean?😉

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

OMG that was sooo sad.. :(

Had me crying towards the end..Beautifully written

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

wow.. awesome os...
no words to describe...
its painful but beautifully written...
me crying after reading...
dev is such a b*****
happy for maneet... they had a happy ending..

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thekolgal

@thekolgal

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Seriously Marvee...this one was really one beautiful FF.

Couldn't keep my tears from falling. It really is an epitome of true love.

It is sad, but yes, it is the Perfect Ending...😊

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

What can I comment??? it was something more than touching...

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Cynthia

@CiaMaaneet

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Aww..dear! Truly awsm OS! Lvd it! Though vry emotionl, i lvd it...

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

A very different concept for ur style of writing definitely...Wat was sad was that geet killed herself..what was happy was that dev would suffer more than he could imagine in the eyes of Allah..only referring to the judgements on the day of qayamah coz u mentioned Allah in the story so I'm assuming that the concept of happy ending is coming from the togetherness of Maan and Geet in jannah...that for me was a happy ending in the future...because there was no place for such happiness in this world for them in the present.. .they deserved more..
Hope I made sense..though its fictional but the feelings and concepts are always real in my eyes...what u feel is what u right na..hope to see more of ur happy shappy present ffs Hehee 😳