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Ohh Marveee

well written painful but great some love story not have happy ending but cant imagine like this...well shown all pain and love between maan and geet and true cruel dev ..well done thx a lot for this os

God Marvee!!thank you so much for making me cry...Well what can i say
a Happy ending was the first ff os etc that has made me cry...Loved it...

This was sad?????????? kis angle se..it was beautiful...i loved it more than all the hot scenes put together..sacchi..

i am crying badly its was so painfull os my maaneet😭😭😭😭

ahhh i hate this 🤬 Dev 🤬 want to kill him with my bare hand basted😡😡😡

OMG! ...i m speechless...it was so deep, and filled with emotions. the love between the 2 and revengeful dev...and of course the ending ...Marvelous ending..absolutely fabulous..and amazing...
LOVED IT! ,...

also the song went beautifully, and perfectly with it ...it was as if the whole thing was a movie in my head ...🤗




it was a PERFECT os ...😳

NEVER ever write something like this again. It was so painful , so heart wrenching, but very well written indeed.

wow Marvee...
I absolutely adored this concept of urs...
Painful bt yet blissful...

I loved d way u merged d present wd d flashbacks...
Beautifully handled...

I loved hw u portrayed the pain of Maaneet...
N hw u showcased d incident dat made Dev d monster..

I feel Dev ws jz buried under d expectations of being a perfect brothr.. A perfect man...
He did love Geet but being in d disguise dat he ws he cudnt voice it out
N it tuk a toll on him making him a honderous monster...

I loved hw u showed hw much Maan trusted n loved Dev... Hd Dev once left d disguise n expressd himslf.. Maan wud hv done nethin for him...

D maaneet love dat u portrayed through dis piece of work ws blissful, incomparable n memorable...

I absolutely loved d endin... Hw God listened to their wish of happy endin... Erupted d blade in front of Geet wid which she killed hrslf.. Hw Dev shooted Maan in anger n frustration n himslf gave maaneet their desired happy ending...

Dev set out to make it miserable for dem bt instead blessed them wd their wish of happy ending...

I absolutely loved d concept Marvee...
Brilliant work...

Luvya girl...
Abby.. 😊

that was SOOO sad
yet SOOO beautiful !
i absolutely loved it !

it was emotional😭