LOVING LAMENTS-MAANEET FF- THREAD 3 - Page 28

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

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But I can't deny one thing. She takes a moment and then say. I can't deny your love toward Khushi, which always made me try to trust you once again. He opens his eyes looking at her. You are the best with her and I hope one day. Hope so, you will care, love, pampers me the same way. Leaning forward she softly, kisses his forehead and move away. He looks at her but soon his eyes moist seeing the sight his eyes were dying to.
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now she try to take maan out of guilt and make him realise she is happy tthat maan care for khushi which is make her want to trust him and she also want same care love . i hope this time he make her trust him again and without mistakes

She smiles lightly with her teary eyes. I hope, you will make me trust you from depth of my heart. She whispered softly stroking his cheek. A tear escaped from his eyes, moving his finger to the dimple he was dying to feel. He closes his eyes keeping his forehead on her. I'm sorry. He said with his croaking voice. She shakes her head smiling and wipes his tears. Unable to hold himself more ger hug ger tight hiding his face on her neck crying his heart out. Finally his get smiled at him. Somewhere he have lost the battle but still she have given him the biggest hope and the biggest strength to try again, to win ger heart again and this time he won't leave a single chance.

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

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After some silence he opens his eyes looking up at both of them. Geet move forward to his ear.If you agree. There's a surprise for you. Moving back his eyes lightened by the name of surprise. Wow another date. He looks at Khushi and immediately smiles.Of course you can go. Khushi jumped in joy hugging him tight and thanking both of them.
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geet ne pata liya rishwat dekar and maan babu to pat gaye and khushi now can go to trip so all happy

Originally posted by: bhasha9

Oh that was really sad.maan must be feeling so hurt.i understand geet feelings but dont know i feel for maan more. Geet has really suffered lot,i know how she had started trusting him and his one mistake made everything in vain.well let us see what u r upto .frankly speaking the emotions u write in this are just heart touching.u know it makes me feel what they must be going through.but it is not easy to take maans side or geet side.both are lamenting.that is why i like this so much.

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

zoha why do you want to finish this thread early