LOVING LAMENTS-MAANEET FF- THREAD 3 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Putting his finger under her chin he made her looks up. What's wrong jaan? She shakes her head lightly. Are you still thinking about Rahul? She looks up in his eyes. He smiles cupping her face. It's over, trust me. Everything is over.
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now maan want know reasons of her behaviour and geet didn't want to tell him and asked about rahul and assured her that everything is over but this is according to him for geet its never over said to trust him but how geet can trust him he always broke her trust knowingly or unknowingly
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She sighed looking down holding his shirt. Trust you. She smile sadly looking up in his eyes. You told me to trust you once, look what happened. The colors from his face become pale. His smile vanishes realizing his mistake. Again he have made the same mistake and made her suffer. Again he have given someone else so much importance that ger didn't even once listen to her. Once again he has failed to win her trust and this time he knows, things will get worse. The thought even scared him, what if she again leaves him for his stupid mistake.
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now geet broke the silence and shown him the result of her trust on him and now maan tubelight on and realise his mistake to trust rajat and didn't listen to geet and made geet suffer and now he knew he made things worse than ever and thinking if she leaves but don't worry maan she is not going anywhere until you said lasdt time bhi to aapne hi jaane ke liye kaha tha if you not said she neve left you
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She looks from his one eye to other finding him in deep thoughts. Keeping her hand on his cheek she says.After so many years, I trusted you maan. Only once. He looks down, closing his eyes in guilt, remorse. You have built another wall for me. It's even harder for me to trust you. He wanted the ground beneath him to vanish that moment. To cry his heart out for his stupidity. His all efforts, all laments have gone in vain by just a single mistake
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now geet told about her emotions after years she trusted him but he created a big wall for her and maan wanted to ground to crack but aisa nahin hoga and now he know his all efforts laments gaye paani main
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan. He was unable to face her, unable to see in her eyes. She cups his face but his eyes were only close which she didn't like. She would never want to let him suffer the same lament he suffered for five long years. No matter how much mistake he do but she cant deny her heart which have fallen really very deeply at this person.
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now maan guilty and geet didn't like it because she never want him to suffer she only want him to realise his mistake
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But I can't deny one thing. She takes a moment and then say. I can't deny your love toward Khushi, which always made me try to trust you once again. He opens his eyes looking at her. You are the best with her and I hope one day. Hope so, you will care, love, pampers me the same way. Leaning forward she softly, kisses his forehead and move away. He looks at her but soon his eyes moist seeing the sight his eyes were dying to.
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now she try to take maan out of guilt and make him realise she is happy tthat maan care for khushi which is make her want to trust him and she also want same care love . i hope this time he make her trust him again and without mistakes
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She smiles lightly with her teary eyes. I hope, you will make me trust you from depth of my heart. She whispered softly stroking his cheek. A tear escaped from his eyes, moving his finger to the dimple he was dying to feel. He closes his eyes keeping his forehead on her. I'm sorry. He said with his croaking voice. She shakes her head smiling and wipes his tears. Unable to hold himself more ger hug ger tight hiding his face on her neck crying his heart out. Finally his get smiled at him. Somewhere he have lost the battle but still she have given him the biggest hope and the biggest strength to try again, to win ger heart again and this time he won't leave a single chance.
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geet want him to make her trust him from her depth of heart and now maan baBU REALISE THE WHAT MISTAKE HE HAVE DONE AN D WHAT HE HAVE TO DONE IN FUTURE to make her happy and geet already give him strength to win her heart
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