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SO SHE STAYED WITH HIM AND BECAME MORE THAN FRIENDS
SO WHO IS THE DAD
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I m late..but anyway both the updates awesome. a treat for new year.. Happy New year to all my frndz here. Have a blast..!!!
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oh please cant wait to know abt sanyaa
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wish u a joyous & peaceful 2012 too...

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Part 9

Present

Maan was shocked. He read that line again:

He left me; but with something else; another life'why? He again was a big monster. His baby'and me, alone, again'

Wait-a-minute!

"Sanaya is my daughter" Maan concluded. He flipped more pages.

A new life'a new purpose of living'

And then he flipped more; it was titled Maan's Daughter:

4th April; I, Geet, Geet Maan Singh Khurana, gave birth to Maan Singh Khurana's daughter. She's such an angel; I decided to name her 'Sanaya'. I loved this name! Sanaya, my baby, my world, a new reason to live'a new purpose of life'to up bring my daughter'Nandini was dancing with joy when she saw my baby'she is mine, only mine'.

Maan had tears in his eyes; that girl was none other than his daughter ' their daughter; their life'

"Of course everything fell in connection: the earlobe and neck kissing scene! I should have known; she's my daughter!" Maan danced with joy -

Sanaya kissed her mother on the neck and Geet responded by kissing her earlobe;

but then stopped.

He re-read the last line: she is mine, only mine'

Tears drenched his rough cheeks. "I will have to convince Geet ' I am not a je*k" he said.

Geet smiled at her daughter. "You're Maan's daughter" she said softly. "But only mine" she smiled. "Maan, why did you do this?" Sanaya was playing and talking with her Barbie Doll; the one that Maan gave her. The Barbie had a big mouth; big like a hole.

Geet smiled again and then the 'dead memories' crept in her mind.

Past

Maan was a little softer and nice with her. She doubted the fact. She still doubted about it ' that ragging lion! Never! But he was, he was nice; very nice.

That morning as she went down and while she greeted Dadimaa; she saw Maan smiling at her.

"He actually smiled! That's breaking news!"

"Vicky; you never told me you had an accident, Annie; what about that guy ' I'll just set the right thing out of him and Dadimaa please do take care of yourself!" he said.

Annie replied back "bhai, you're always so busy with your work that I thought'"

Maan felt bad; he wasn't working at night, and he knew it'

"You even think" Vicky teased.

Everything was back to normal! Geet smiled back to Maan and served the food quietly.

Days drew and Maan was coming closer to Geet.

"Oh shucks'where that stupid tie is" he yelled and the whole mansion shook.

Dadimaa and Anvesha chuckled. "Geet beta, go and fetch him his needs" Dadimaa said while Anvesha was rolling into laughter. Geet looked horrified. "Dadimaa'why are you making me mess with a lion" she thought. "Geet'jao" Dadimaa instructed. Geet nodded.

Knock'knock

"May I come in?" Geet asked as she knocked the door.

"Hmmm"

"Do I take it as a yes?"

"Yeah" Maan said irritated.

Geet entered the room and saw clothes were spilt everywhere on the floor. Geet shook her head and said "a-actually'w-woh'Dadimaa'a-asked m-me't-to'c-check'" she stammered in fear as his angry red eyes bored onto hers. "'to check on you" she said the last words quickly. Maan nodded.

"I need my black tie"

Geet nodded and started to lift some clothes. Accidentally a photo of Maan & Samira slipped from the wardrobe. They looked pretty-closed. It ached Geet's heart when she saw the photo. Geet glanced at Maan; he had seen the picture falling. Geet quickly picked it up without a sound and put in on its original place.

Maan kept looking at Geet and her speed.

"Is this what you were searching for?"

Maan nodded while Geet handed him his tie.

Present

"I still remember it, Maan" she thought "it looked as if it was last Friday night" she sighed; pools of tears forming.

"Yeah'that Friday night when you were broken and then broke me up!"

Past

Geet paced the floor. Maan hadn't arrived yet.

"He's with Samira, why are you worrying'"

She turned and saw a drunken Maan entering her bedroom. He'he was BROKEN!

"Maan" she said grabbing his shoulders to stop him from falling. She brought Maan on her sofa and said

"What happened?"

"Geet" Maan said half-in-his-sense, taking Geet's hands into his;

"That'that wretch'Samira'she conned me! Me! Maan Singh Khurana! She was enjoying my money and she is in love with that man! And she has the guts to marry'him'I'll kill that man'I'll ruin her life'" he said angry and'. he was unconscious.

The next morning Maan woke up and looked around.

"This'this is Geet's room" he said waking up. "Good Morning" Geet said grimly. Maan looked at her up and down. Geet shook her head and said "nothing happen if you're thinking that way'I didn't want Dadimaa to see you in this condition'you slept in my room while I took yours" she shrugged. "Sorry"

Maan smiled and then cursed "I'm gonna kill her!"

Geet looked terrified at Maan's behaviour. She stood rotted on her place! Maan smiled at her again and said softly "you need not to be afraid'" he said and came closer. He kissed her forehead'"sorry for everything" and he left leaving a shock Geet.

It was Friday night. Maan came home while Geet was busy cleaning his bedroom. She looked ravishing, he had noticed in her white salwar kameez.

She turned and saw Maan.

"You've come'I was just'"

But he stopped her and kissed her forehead again then down her neck'..

It was three days afterwards'

Maan came home in his raging bull mood. Geet looked at him; she was alone home. "Geet! I don't trust women, not even you'you'I hate you'how can you make me forget Samira'my Samira' my Samira'I never expected that from you'just leave from here'get lost"

It was confusing Geet'all she understood that she was out of his house'forever!


Edited by music_girl - 11 years ago

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