OS: Beautiful Girl - Page 6

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Phew...
Atlast finished reading...i told you...this was looong! 😆
literally read without even blinking my eyes lol..what a heart wrenching and tragic story ..!!!!!.😭

Ishhh 😭 Mardalla he he...w/out blinking 😲 your eyes must be super dry now!! 😛

Geet died and left Maan alone. How can u do it dear ? 😭 sorry...but thats how the song sort of was...she left him...i didnt want to pair her with anyone else...so...i killed her! 😆

My vitals r still not in sync. I am still trying to pull my self out from the tragic Aura of the story 😭 aww...sorry!! hope you're better now...hope your aura is not tragic 😳

God bless you for writing so beautifully... thanks hun!! 🤗

xxx

Originally posted by: euphoric

ofcourse not! this certainly is not my comment... i m not yet done reading it😆 tht was the snippet from the comments 😆

Love you🤗how hv u been? it seems i m talking to u after ages😕

Originally posted by: zahra15

this was so nice n sad...but i really loved it...it is one of the best os that i have ever read...thnxxx for the pm...

Originally posted by: Bul3

it was truly FANTASTIC to say the least..it was touching and beautiful and magical!!..I read the end note the first thing to confirm it was a happy one but even after reading it was a sad one,couldn't stop myself from reading it and what I dreaded happened indeed and you made me cry LOTS..and though you said it was the longest OS you have written till now,I could only wish for it to keep going!..AMAZING one Jaz👏👏👏

Originally posted by: bansipatel

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Oh god Jaz...ur back after 3 weeks n u gave us a sad OS...😭 😡 😡
but still can't stop myself from reading any of ur works...😳
this was beautifully penned down...👏 thanks for reading...and what can i say...i had 3 weeks of sadistic ideas building in my head...i had to do it! 😛😛
starting from maan falling in love with geet at first sight n that too in the library...😳..he cud not take his eyes off her wen they met there...
his student was Nandini's brother...yaha pe chance maar liya maan ne...to get more info bou geet...aha blackmailing kar raha tha nandu ko aur khud hi blackmail k jaal main phas gaya bechara...!! 😆 i know!! i couldnt let him very well win by trying to blackmail Nandu! 😛...he was going to have to work hard to get the girl he wants!! 😉 as they say...half the fun is in the chase 😛
ok nandu n maan made good friends n she helped him get to know geet better...loved their setting...!! superb..👏 i had to build their relationship strong for obvious reasons that come in the end 😉
there he blackmails her too...if she wants her the book..they wud go on a date...😳 😆...acha chance mar liya...cutey... he he...aww..."cutey"..reminds me of when she called him that on the show!! 😃
but at the date...syapa ho gaya...geet din want all branded stuff's n wanted to get to know maan better...not bou his richness...she walked away...wyl maan was not able to understand his fault...arey maan bete ur fault was that u arranged all luxury stuff there...😕...dekho geet naraz ho gayi... see...munda doesnnt pay attention...nandu said...she's a simple girl...and he went for extravagance!!
so he got a second chance to prove himself n be the real him...love their dessert n maan tellin about his mother...geet understood him well too n she got to know him better... see...thats all she wanted...to know just Maan...not MSK 😳
he wanted to kiss her...😲 😳...aur geet ne hi use chumi dedi...gaal pe...😳...loved her gesture n maan's innocent question.."can i call u?" sweet naa...i just could pinch his cheeks!!! 😛
liked geet hugging maan in front of maan's clients in the office...they kissed too...but realized they were not alone...😳 ...geet got into the med school... ya...geet kind of lost it...didnt pay attention to anything but sharing her news with her Maan 😳
i just loved wat maan had named her "ANGEL"...haayyyee...😍
n the night they were together n made love...their best moment in their life's... yes...truly one of the best moments in the short time they had together 😳
still maan seeked her permission to proceed further or not...she sweetly gestured him to continue...their special moment...both finally became one...😳 im so waiting for one on the show now...dono ko ek kamre mein hona chahiyeh 😉
aha next morning...maan din want her to let go...but still she slipped off n it was the last time he saw her...😭 yup...but little did he know it was to be the last
she went away without saying anything or informing him...she had asked him not to look for her n how cud maan deny something his angel had asked him...he cud not...be it not to look for her too...she was his angel...😳 😳 😳 yup...just like in the show...that is just not possible...ke geet kuch mange aur maan usse pura naa kare 😉
how cud she let maan know wat was happening to her...esp wen maan had declared he cud not see his loved ones die in front of him...she only left her letters behind... that is why i had that conversation be about his mother dying from cancer...that is why she couldnt tell him 😭
her best friend n more than that a sister NANDINI...both shared a beautiful bond...nandu was there in her thick n thin times but this time geet had to fight alone......my heart is wrenching in pain...seeing her slipping away from her most loved ppl...MAAN N NANDINI...!!
n Jaz ur getting maan n nandu married...😲 😡 😡...the one who used to help him in wooing geet or for any other help regarding geet is now getting married to maan...hey babaji...😲...wat an irony truly...!! i put them together cuz it worked in the sense that only nandu can understand why he is not committing to the relationship fully...only she knows that he is doing it for his dadi maa...to keep her happy...and the friendship they share...the loss they share as well...it ties them together...cuz after geets death...neither one was the same 😭
Maan getting hold of geet's photo frame before it fell...how cud he let her pic too touch the ground...he loved her way too much...
he cherished all her memories...n her pic too...she was his angel...beautiful he had described her wen he first saw her...!! 😳 😳 the ending was my fav part to write...cuz i could just picture it all in my head 😳
loved the OS Jaz...so much...😳 thanks hun!! 😃

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

I just woke up jaz and read this...belive me or not u made my morning amazing...while reading this i had a smile on my lips,actualy laughing inside saying when the sad part will come 😆 Cause thats what u do,thats your thing 😆 Pain and tears 😉 It was an wonderful begining with geets perfect describtion,their flopped 1th date(loved that ) then how their relationship grew up...it was amazing... When she came to him that nite,thats where i knew u were going to kill her and get him with nandu 😆 She gave herself to him as a gift of goodbye,wow that blew my mind...and the letters were just heart touching...she didn want him to go through that pain again 😭 I hate this disease,its cruel and a killer in mass,wish that smone could do smth to cure it...but,docs do their best,hats off to that!! The angel finaly became an angel...there up in heaven,never,ever touching the ground...
The ending was perfect,had ur signature...i admire ur talent and skills to make us feel and live what u write! Sincere thanks Jaz!!

A crazy fan of urs,
Myra