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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

fantastic os
thanks 4 the pm

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Razz22

@Razz22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Y R U SOO GUD!!!

here i am bawlin mt eyes out!! :'(

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Its beautiful like geet,i like d way u describe d events n story n maintng d suspense also.luvd it

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Tum sudhrogi nahi na!! Kya milta hai tumhe aise logon ko rulake? Ek pal ki bhi chein nahi milti tumhari OS padthey waqt. Par galti toh humari hain jo hum itne fida ho jathey hain tumhari writings se.

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Nic eone but i dont understand why always you give sad OS .Anyways it was beautifully written.

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Ho Jaz, you will never change... beautiful story but donno why tears are rolling down 😭😭😭😭

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

I knew it, I knew it, Jaz can never turn out a hopelessly perfect , everything is good everafter kind of story(only exception was Best Friends and I really am happy you didn't murder or kill anyone in that story). She just has to have a sad ending. 😭.

Jokes apart, this was a perfect piece of writing. It was very emotional and you have described the feelings of Maan, Geet and Nandu well. Even though I like that you ended Maan with Nandini you should have built the relationship a bit, Don't get me wrong but I just felt the ending was abrupt. I mean why did Nandini agree to get married to Maan? What kind of relationship do they forsee.

You know I am sucker for love finding its way again stories and the reason being, life is really amazing and you find love in strangest of places and I believe in life should go on even when our loved ones are not there. It would have been good if you had written more about Maan and Nandini moving on after Geet. Anyway wonderful story and it was a pleasure reading it.

Nice work and Thanks for the PM.
-Sarada

Edited by psarada - 13 years ago

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Jaz,

i dont know where to start or what to say! The OS is awsome but why did you have to separate them?😭😭😭

i loved the frame catching scene...

i was hoping to read what nandini had to talk to maan about before their engagement? i wanted to know what that emergency was...😳

thanks for the pm! Keep writing...and try to give happily everafter ending to ur stories😉

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Jaz... u made me cry... especially when I read Geet's last letter.. even though knowing what could've happened.. i had to wait for a couple of minutes to write this... standing ovation Jaz...

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

that was seriously heart touching!

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