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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Oh Jaz, I hate you right now, Im in tears and ma heart is in pain, seriously this was the most painful FF ever, and well penned, but still Jaz you love to torture us:p
When I started to read this I didnt thought it would be hurt this much while reading, though I knew something saddening is surely gonna happen. And when everything was going good, I was like omg Jaz is writing something light, I defo point out that, but that thought was not so long lived when suddenly Geet left. Omg I was crying, and it takes a lot of hard work to make me cry, brilliantly written. But still how could you kill her:(
You have to make up something for this saddening OS.
But now that I see this OS overall, I cant say it was lovely but it was indeed a great piece of work.
Edited by Amiiish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
amaxng OS...
Luv it so much..
U made me cry..
Beautifully wrttn..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
okay...i am here now...so it's like 6 in the morning here...first i thought of reading at uni...but then i realized that i would be killing myself on purpose...if i have to cry a flood of tears at the uni library...and it's not like some dude will come up to me to ask me if i am okay 😆..lolz...here we go...i feel a little nervous..i know u wrote this especially for moi...and it's sad like i like my stories...but i don't know if i am ready for tears so early..but i can't wait anymore 😳😆

hayyeee...even the poem is the beginning says so much...i loved it...but i don't know if it's urs not not...but either way...it's wonderful 👏

so this OS is quite long...and i feel like i will forget half the things i have to say...so i am gonna notice some of them down...😆 (all of this is to the point where he just took her out for dessert as the second chance she gave him) 😳
You start with the OS with maan staring at the star lit sky and remembering the first time he met her...see...i am worried already ...cause Geet has very very very high chances of being dead...and but the hell is he doing getting engaged to someone else ??
Hayeee😳...the way he caught her from falling...me was singing mahiii...mahiii...mahiii...
so this Nandu chick is kinda interesting...i mean she loves and cares for geet and all...but let;s see later..
OMGGG...OMGGG...i loveee U 🤗 ...u brought my Yash back...that too in a postive role (hopefully)...but still...i grinned like a idiot when i read his intro...
they are talking abt death ..oh no...reya superly worried...he says he can't stand it if someone he loves dies...i know exactly what you are doing...but i won't say it...
okay...back to reading 😃
okayyy...so i read more...and their realtionship grew...he finished his education...she got into med school😊...but then she seems distract...and then she comes to his room and they make love...i mean she wanted to wait but now...that had me worried already 😕...but then when she said Goodbye...i like...dude...something is seriously wrong and she is saying goodbye for good😭...that better not be the case...or i am going to screamm...bloody murder 😡
WHATTT THE BLODDY HELLL??? where did she go ? leaving him only a few words...my first thought is that she is suffering from some kind of disease..and is going to die but she doesn't want him to be there because of how he said he wouldn't be able to handle another death...ohhh goddd 😭
okay...i am feeling so bad for Nandu too cause Geet was like a sister to her..and to lose a friend who is ur everything is so painful...😭..
my heart is sinking with each letter..😭..plz Babaji...plz let geet come back...plz...
OH LORDY...my heart just stopped...'if you are reading this letter, it means i am no longer here' 😭..u killed Handa...nooo jazzzyyy...NOOO 😭😭
i can't believe i was right when i guessed earlier...oh how i wished i wasn't right 😭
nooo...nooo...nooo...plz no...i am tried of begging...he is going to get married to someone else...😭..cause of his Dadi's last wish...but how can he deny her that when she was the one who cared for him after his mother died...and i am pretty sure..she gave all the love possible...
ohhh Jazzy...i love you...really i do...i say this as tears are running down my cheeks...honestly baby,,,this OS was...i don't know...i can't find the exact word i want...but still...i am sorry i am little lost for words by the end of it...😕😭...but baby..plz know that i loved it so much...
Thank you so much for this one 🤗...Love u baby ❤️
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
r- i remember the chocolate cake i promised you for the sad one...😳

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Awesomely written !!!

😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Aww.. What a beautiful and long os.. I loved reading it.. Had tears in ma eyes reading their love story.. Death is the most painful inevitable truth.. And it hurts..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
That was AWESOME. Another sad ending. Kya yaar. But that was heart touching.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
yes your back with another amazing piece of work!
but why oh why must one of them always be dead?!?
loved this story and how they fell in love
i had a feeling that she would get sick after he told her about his mother and seeing a loved one dying
overall, another awesome OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
ohhh jaz you made my hopes go up in the first parts & then BAM crush them & bury them under ground 😡
but i have to say very well written as usual...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
That was an awesome story.

I guess not all love stories have the typical "happy" endings. Happy is a relative thing anyways, it doesn't have to be what you expect.

I do feel for both Maan and Geet in this scenario...to distance yourself from the one you love because you can't see yourself dying through their eyes and for Maan, not being able to spend the last days of your lovers life with her.


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