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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

this was so nice n sad...but i really loved it...it is one of the best os that i have ever read...thnxxx for the pm...

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

it was truly FANTASTIC to say the least..it was touching and beautiful and magical!!..I read the end note the first thing to confirm it was a happy one but even after reading it was a sad one,couldn't stop myself from reading it and what I dreaded happened indeed and you made me cry LOTS..and though you said it was the longest OS you have written till now,I could only wish for it to keep going!..AMAZING one Jaz👏👏👏

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Oh god Jaz...ur back after 3 weeks n u gave us a sad OS...😭 😡 😡
but still can't stop myself from reading any of ur works...😳
this was beautifully penned down...👏
starting from maan falling in love with geet at first sight n that too in the library...😳..he cud not take his eyes off her wen they met there...
his student was Nandini's brother...yaha pe chance maar liya maan ne...to get more info bou geet...aha blackmailing kar raha tha nandu ko aur khud hi blackmail k jaal main phas gaya bechara...!! 😆
ok nandu n maan made good friends n she helped him get to know geet better...loved their setting...!! superb..👏
there he blackmails her too...if she wants her the book..they wud go on a date...😳 😆...acha chance mar liya...cutey...
but at the date...syapa ho gaya...geet din want all branded stuff's n wanted to get to know maan better...not bou his richness...she walked away...wyl maan was not able to understand his fault...arey maan bete ur fault was that u arranged all luxury stuff there...😕...dekho geet naraz ho gayi...
so he got a second chance to prove himself n be the real him...love their dessert n maan tellin about his mother...geet understood him well too n she got to know him better...
he wanted to kiss her...😲 😳...aur geet ne hi use chumi dedi...gaal pe...😳...loved her gesture n maan's innocent question.."can i call u?"
liked geet hugging maan in front of maan's clients in the office...they kissed too...but realized they were not alone...😳 ...geet got into the med school...
i just loved wat maan had named her "ANGEL"...haayyyee...😍
n the night they were together n made love...their best moment in their life's...
still maan seeked her permission to proceed further or not...she sweetly gestured him to continue...their special moment...both finally became one...😳
aha next morning...maan din want her to let go...but still she slipped off n it was the last time he saw her...😭
she went away without saying anything or informing him...she had asked him not to look for her n how cud maan deny something his angel had asked him...he cud not...be it not to look for her too...she was his angel...😳 😳 😳
how cud she let maan know wat was happening to her...esp wen maan had declared he cud not see his loved ones die in front of him...she only left her letters behind...
her best friend n more than that a sister NANDINI...both shared a beautiful bond...nandu was there in her thick n thin times but this time geet had to fight alone......my heart is wrenching in pain...seeing her slipping away from her most loved ppl...MAAN N NANDINI...!!
n Jaz ur getting maan n nandu married...😲 😡 😡...the one who used to help him in wooing geet or for any other help regarding geet is now getting married to maan...hey babaji...😲...wat an irony truly...!!
Maan getting hold of geet's photo frame before it fell...how cud he let her pic too touch the ground...he loved her way too much...
he cherished all her memories...n her pic too...she was his angel...beautiful he had described her wen he first saw her...!! 😳 😳
loved the OS Jaz...so much...😳

Edited by bansipatel - 13 years ago

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I just woke up jaz and read this...belive me or not u made my morning amazing...while reading this i had a smile on my lips,actualy laughing inside saying when the sad part will come 😆 Cause thats what u do,thats your thing 😆 Pain and tears 😉 It was an wonderful begining with geets perfect describtion,their flopped 1th date(loved that ) then how their relationship grew up...it was amazing... When she came to him that nite,thats where i knew u were going to kill her and get him with nandu 😆 She gave herself to him as a gift of goodbye,wow that blew my mind...and the letters were just heart touching...she didn want him to go through that pain again 😭 I hate this disease,its cruel and a killer in mass,wish that smone could do smth to cure it...but,docs do their best,hats off to that!! The angel finaly became an angel...there up in heaven,never,ever touching the ground...
The ending was perfect,had ur signature...i admire ur talent and skills to make us feel and live what u write! Sincere thanks Jaz!!

A crazy fan of urs,
Myra

Edited by Myra.nelly - 13 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: crazy_niddzz

awww mera bacha itna roya ... come here "crack crack"

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

amazing os but a very very very sad sad one... i expected it to be a sad one, but still i couldnt stop myself from reading it...😭 was it neccessary to kill geeet??? 😭 os would have been beautiful even without that naa... loved it

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

jaz, I have no words to describe the my emotions undergoing now . firstpart i have taken in humour ,as i was reading sumthing very different from regular medical field . but as the story progressed i was numb .and now i am very emotional to digest the ending . fabulous os . can i ask u one question "aap kis chakki ka atta khati ho"(jokes apart) How such beautiful ideas cum up in ur mind and u beautiful web into emotional stories . kudos to u and god bless u and dua karti hun ki aap ki zindagi mein har khushiyan se sazi . love u jaz .

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Chandlerbing1

@Chandlerbing1

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

yr sad again 😭

but have to tell that was too emotional

beautifully described

luved it

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Damn...me is so late :/
But I crashed early...not feeling my best lately...
But thank u honey for this one...comment will come in a while when I am on the laptop...I am not even reading it yet..

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