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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME, MARVELLOUS, OUTSTANDING...
BUT YOU KILLED GEET, I FELT LIKE KILLING YOT FOR DOING THIS...
BUT THAN THE STORY WAS JUST...WOW!!!!!
THIS STORY IS SURELY GONNA HAUNT ME AT NIGHTS... SPECIALLY GEET'S DEATH...
BUT THAN I WOULD LOVE TO GET HAUNTED BY IT!!!!!
LOVED IT...

AND PLZ UPDATE BABY OF MIND ASAP...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Jaz😡

tune phir Geet ko maar diya😭

Babaji yeh tragedy queen ke dimag main kuch happy shappy ideas bhi daal diya karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
omg dis was a reallly sad os :(
but i still luved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sindu555

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saddi madam jee is back 😃 you...i know i can count on you to come back after reserving...so thank you!! 😳
EDIT (post read)
saddi madam jee is back 😭 yes!! itna toh you should have expected!! 😃
ufff pehlay Reya aur ab ye Jaz ... god u two will be the death of me...🤢... koi happy shappy inspiration nahin mil sakti kiya? .lol...im yet to read reya's os...its on my list to do tonight after dinner!! 😉 but what can i say...great minds think alike!! 😛.. and hold on ... Nandini ... Nandini ... puray world me tumhein ye aik hi naam mila tha ... I normally hate u for killing Maan or Geet in your story .. but for this one I hate you for letting Maan and Nandu get married (adi ke pallay baandh deti nandu ko ) aur agar Maan ko bakra banana tha to Meera, Tina , rina, lali etc etc... aur koi naam nahin mila thaa ye aik Nandini hi soojha ... isnt her torture more than enuff in the show that yahan bhi Nandu ... ... aare...why are you tying my nandu with the show one...the show one is an idiot...but my nandu here...or Geet's nandu is nothing like that...you can picture Meera, Sameera or anyone you want...feel free!! 😉
PS ... detailed comments on Maaneet part later (for the starters... it was awesome😊) ..but first lemme get my blood pressure in control ... gosh Nandu ... Grrr 🤢 lol...aare...calm down yaar...story mein woh itni bhi buri nahin thi 😳 but take your time...cuz i will hunt you down for a PROPER comment in a few days if you arent back 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ARSALAkhan

AWESOME, MARVELLOUS, OUTSTANDING...
BUT YOU KILLED GEET, I FELT LIKE KILLING YOT FOR DOING THIS...
BUT THAN THE STORY WAS JUST...WOW!!!!!
THIS STORY IS SURELY GONNA HAUNT ME AT NIGHTS... SPECIALLY GEET'S DEATH...
BUT THAN I WOULD LOVE TO GET HAUNTED BY IT!!!!!
LOVED IT...

AND PLZ UPDATE BABY OF MIND ASAP...



he he...i had to come back with a sad one shot...ive been away for 3 weeks...all this sadness was just pent up inside me 😆😆 as for Baby of Mine...you're going to have to wait hun...i have part 2 80% done on my computer...i cant go back and redo it on the laptop im using now...so until computer is fixed and i get my documents...sit tight 😕
JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: euphoric

Jaz😡


tune phir Geet ko maar diya😭

Babaji yeh tragedy queen ke dimag main kuch happy shappy ideas bhi daal diya karo


he he...love you too!!🤗 what can i say...ive been away for 3 weeks...that 3 weeks of pent up sadistic thoughts...had to come out one way or another...and this was one i promised reya...he he...and fyi...this doesnt count as your comment...i expect you to come back...soon 😛
JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg

omg dis was a reallly sad os :(

but i still luved it



glad you still loved it!! 😳 thats what makes my day...that people can enjoy even the sad stories 😊
JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Phew...Atlast finished reading... literally read without even blinking my eyes lol..what a heart wrenching and tragic story ..!!!!!.😭
Ishhh 😭 Mardalla
Geet died and left Maan alone. How can u do it dear ? 😭
My vitals r still not in sync. I am still trying to pull my self out from the tragic Aura of the story 😭
God bless you for writing so beautifully...
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: jnawaz


he he...love you too!!🤗 what can i say...ive been away for 3 weeks...that 3 weeks of pent up sadistic thoughts...had to come out one way or another...and this was one i promised reya...he he...and fyi...this doesnt count as your comment...i expect you to come back...soon 😛
JAZ


ofcourse not! this certainly is not my comment... i m not yet done reading it😆 tht was the snippet from the comments 😆

Love you🤗how hv u been? it seems i m talking to u after ages😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a beautiful story by you once again...thanks...

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