M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
awesome..fabulously writeen..
but reya..me again crying..
i amchoked with emotions..
i wonder how you potray the pain so well..
but why always sad..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please don't say this...why did you write such a sad os ?? I mean it was a wonderful one shot..when it came to writing but it was just too too sad and emotional for me to handle...I wish I din r ead this why I read...I hardly read anything now-a-days and freak man I read yours...

You made me cry and im still crying...can't stop my tears...and you know the reason...first thing you showed Maan as dead and second thing he was the Captain...

Someone too too close to me is the doing Merchant Navy...I pray for him daily you know...I know sab k saath aisa nahi hota...so many people are in this profession but shucks man you made me feel frightened and made me cry...

I have nothing against ur story...i don't even know you...and as a piece of writing its wonderful...it touched me but still it was I can't tell you what surged thro' me when i read Captain shit...

Sorry for the comment...I couldn't stop myself...

Take Care,
Fatima
Edited by Escapist - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
I guess everyone is into sad stories now...but thats okay. It was beautifully written...just beautiful!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
wow... that was so sad...
heart trenching...
these days all members are making us cry!!!
so beautiful... keep writing yaar!!!😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
beautifully written...
the wait is so painful...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: esha143

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I guess I should stop cribing about ur sad stories from now...So I'll not do that after this OS...as I now know u r not going to stop ur habit so easily...n honestly I don't want u to either...

Haha...u learned fast enough 😆...at least now i don't have to worry abt u killing me 😆😳...i joke..i lubbsss u...and ur grrness...(that's not a word but it is...Grrr-ness...this 😡)😆

Geet's pain is so disarming...she's still waiting for her Maan to come back...pata nahi aise Geet aur kitne hai iss duniyan mein...
Waiting is all she can do...Hope all is what the women who are connected to uniform men carry...
I'm sure of that...she's managing her life well but still not giving up her hope that her Maan will come back some day...ummeed pe duniyan kayam hai...
She believes he will keep the promise he made to her of returning to her...he is the one in this world that she believes the most,...
Great OS as always Rey...loved the emotions of Trust n love in this one...😊 Thanks sweetie 😳

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: bansipatel

That was beautifully written reya...👏
i loved it...!!
simply awesome...but a sad one...😭
she is still waiting for him to come back...
maan the Captain of the navy...he dedicated his life in serving his country...
well geet is really strong to live her life as normal...absolutely amazing OS reya...
loved every bit of it...!!!
😳 😛 😉
😛

Thanks hun...i am glad u liked it...despite the sad content it carried...yes...she is still waiting for him thinking he will fulfil the promise he made to her before leaving...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: nilu710

Reya yaar

what a sad part...
poor geet waiting for him since 3 years?
it would have been a little understanding if they had son, she would have atleast a part of maan...
plzz right another part for this and make maan come back

very sad part yaar


yes...she has been waiting for 3 three yrs thinking one day he will return and end her wait...but there isn't much of a chance of another part because i kinda left u ppl hanging deciding for urself fi he will come back or not...
Thanks for the comment...glad u enjoyed it

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Amazing OS

Thanks 4 The PM

Thanks hun :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: niddzzy

u made me cry once again...!!! sowwieee

i was scared after reading the title but as u already kno i love reading sad stories...but they make me shed tears too...i cried like anythin...!!! you know my stories by now...i should start adding a 'read at ur own risk' note in the beginning...but then no one would read :(
the letter she wrote ...ohh...god...!!! it was touching...wasn't it?
loved how she threw it in water so that it could reach him...!!!! the idea was was a play on the book i read recently 'message in a bottle'...u should give it a read but u will need tissue...
i m still crying...maan hasnt returned since past 3 yrs...world has declared him dead...that cant b coz geets faith and love is alive...!!!! bang on...this was the whole point of the OS...she is waiting because she has faith in him that he will keep his promise😳
can we have an epilogue plzz.zzz...were maan returns...hehe...i kno u gonna kill me wid mah demands of epilogue...but pretty plz...!!! probably not hun...i am happy where i left off with this..sorry...
loved it...it was emotionally beautiful...!!! Thanks a ton sweetie...
keep rocking...!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

i have tears in my eyes😭

beautiful os
loved it
but next time pls give us a happy one

sorry about the tears ...but glad u liked it...
i wil try but happy things are my usual...
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago

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