M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: krati5

yes i cn see u r bck to work... evry time i cry... either geet is dead or maan... ughh. i hate it... but literally i jst loved ur work... uff...

Lolz 😆..yup...couldn't stay away from the trafegies for long 😆...i am glad u like my work despite the tears they come along with 😳

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

why do u have to write sad stories..and that too so beautifully..me cribbing😡😆

I think that was suppose to be a compliment 😆😳...thanks hun...u girls keep me going

Thanks

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

that was sad yet sweet
hmmm bittersweet?
loved it!
thanks for the pm!

Thanks hun..glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jnawaz

stalker ji!! lookie at who is here!!! 😃..

Wowww...welcome Ji...i am quite surprised to see u here...but also happy 😃
.im reading with caution cuz who knows what you did with this story...meaning end mein...happy ya sad...kisse pata...*jaz crosses fingers*
Now u know what i feel like when i start ur stories...especially OSs...this is the big question...happy or sad...that is the question 😆
The best part is u are commenting as u read...i got my entertainment for the day
😲...now im scared...at the very beginning you have Geet making out with a picture frame...
tauba tauba...making out...it was more of hugging and cuddling...😳
kya pata MSK zinda hai bhi ya nahin 😲..the BIG question...
.so seems like munda is away quite often...business im guessing...vaise banda karta kya hai?
You found out what he does...😳
😳...OMG...someone fix me up...sh*t...an arranged marriage and she ends up with a gem like Maan Singh Khurana!! 😲 W*F?! some girls have all the luck...thats just not fair!!! .
LOLZZZ🤣..i cracked up when i read that...u all ready to get fixed up Jazzy...😆 I am strict believer in arranged marriage so i am hoping to get my lucky man that way...😳
..oh lordy..they're talking about death...foreboding? i really...REALLY hope not!!! 😳...
Your hopes were brutally crushed...weren't they?
KC being handled by Annie and Arjun...oh my gosh...my heart is skining with every passing sentence!!! 😕 im scared...and i have half the mind to stop reading...cheat by reading other peoples comments...but...i wont do that!!! 😛...
Don't try pull one of sherya's moves...that cheater always skims the story to see if it's happy or not...i am glad u stuck by me...
and then i got to the letter...and i swear...my heart stopped for just a second.."the world tells me you're dead" 😭...wonderful...just...wonderful!! 🤬...what did i ever do to you!? wait...dont answer
LOLZ...😆...good thing u told me not to answer or else i had my grrr-ness all ready for u...how could u even ask what u did to me?? i am surprised i haven't flooded Toronto yet with all the crying i have to do 🤣🤣
...OMG!! not only he is MSK but he's a man in uniform!! *jaz dead*...Just imagine the perfection he would be..dreammmyyy...😍
the story was beautiful yaar...bittersweet but beautifully so!! 👏...Thank u 😳
it was like a sort of unique take on Nicholas Sparks' "Message in a Bottle"...😳...you did a
fabulous job!!!
Oh lordy...i read the book...damnnn..i loved it..like it was awesome...of course i cried when he died...but the part that really triggered this OS is when she writes him a letter even though he was dead...that was the part that stuck with me even after...i kept thinking about it...so this happened because of the thinking 😳
might we get a part 2 where he comes back from the "dead"..a la Ekta ishtlye!! 🤣
Hahaaa😆...i wouldn't bet on it..see the thing is...a friend on mine who's name i am not to disclose...because if i do...u girls would kill her and she would kill me🤣...she told me not to bring him back...but that i wasn't allow to give her name...
JAZ
ps: kissi aur ko mile ya naa mile...mujhe iss comment ka reply chahiyeh!! 😛 There u go...all done now 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Reya...tHis is really touching OS.
Captain Maan Singh Khurana left his life behind to serve his county.
Geet waiting for Maan's return which he promised her.
Loved ur idea of Geet's writing Maan letter n threw it into the sea...
I've always liked tat idea n even did it..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

can u write one more update ... happy ending ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update...
well u r back to ur forte isnt it...
well i must say i liked it...
i knew that it was going to b a sad one but there is this hope left that he wud b alive somewhere and will b back to his geet one day...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
lovely os,,
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 i knew it i knew it😡😡😡😡
madam cant let us brathe in peace!!😡😡😡
she had to kill someone!!😡😡😡
but thakn god!!!!!!!!!!1 u just managed to kill him this time and not marry him of to someone else😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
but i still love ya baby😆😆😆😆😆
u kno darling i read this one before...but again i read it...and my tears are not stopping...i am crying n crying..
the way u wrote just tore at my haert...
they say that we value the person we love more after we loose them...or after a disrance apart..but is it really true??
co we really need a separation to value our beloveds???
geets everlasting wait...the last line...managed to convey the depth n intensity of their commitment!
u rocked with this one babes👏👏
P>S> i am stiill waiting for an EPI on the other one😡😡😡 and there better be a divorce there..or a night,mrish dream😡😡😡😡
😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Thanks hun :)

Originally posted by: zaara2212

oh gosh Reya, I had tears when I read it
it was mind blowing

aww...sorry about the tears hun 😳..but i am glad u liked it 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: drashsree100




1st tell me that is this it ?? I mean is it a 1 part OS ? Well I'll give my comments keeping in mind both possibilities ...
It is actually only a one part OS

If its a 1 part OS :

What can I say ?? Beautiful . 👍🏼 Thank u 😳
Its indeed a measure of immense will & faith ; both which Geet epitomizes that clearly surfaced . Loved her & her talks with Maan in real & imagination.
Bang on...i couldn't have explained Geet better...she has all the faith in the promise that he made...no matter what the world says...

Positive hope makes an individual grow , prosper & achieve a lot of things in life . Hope Geet will soon find happiness as well . That's the Best thing about human brain ! It does remember pain but also remembers to forget it & move ahead . I'm wishing that for Geet as well . 😊 You have great thoughts hun...Geet has hope...hope that Maan will return to her one day...i don't know if she would ever be able to move on past that...

If parts are yet to come :

Its my belief I'm sharing . I feel will-power , belief , strong determination can even squeeze water out from stones (figuratively) ; but yes I'm a person of strong beliefs & my faith in God never wavers even in moments of anguish , pain & helplessness . I prefer to look @ a glass half full than empty ; so I guess you got the msg Reva . Looking at a half full glass is always better than looking at a half empty one...

Irrespective of its heavy content it was a good read . 👍🏼 Thanks a ton priya 😊
Thanks for pm ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilyface

Gosh this was so beautifu<3

Thanks hun :)

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Oh Reya...what to say...my heart ache...I am in tears...so emotional and sad OS...Maan is dead and Geet is waiting for him from 3 yrs hoping he will come back to her.

thanx for pm.

awww...i am sorry about the tears hun...but u know me..😳...thanks for liking it sweets...

Originally posted by: -dia-

Beautiful ...well written.

Thanks Dia :)

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