M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sneha0504

this is awesome!!!!! this reminded me of "Gori teri ankhen kahein " songbut Geet is much stronger than her . I loved it!!!!!!

Thanks hun...glad i liked it...

Originally posted by: mandymore

Beautiful os,she still waitng 4 him n wrirtng letters to him,u made me cry towards d end..fab os

yup...she will continue to wait for him...like she said...till her last breath...thanks for liking it hun...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sharmake11

The Pain Of Missing You


I never knew a broken heart could keep on breaking.
You keep on sending your love but no ones there to take it.
Rivers of tears keep a steady flow'
But no ones there to know.
It's you, you who I want to know.
You who I want to see'
All of what I think and feel, It's you I want here with me.
Not a day goes by without wishing for a hug a kiss, a laugh, a cry'
For soothing hurts, tucking you into bed, or just a simple touch.
Not a night goes by I don't miss you so'. Much!!!
Or my heart doesn't break just a lil' bit more.
Shards turned to ice constantly falling to the floor.
I don't believe in god, but still I pray.
That some how some day
You'll be back in my life
For always and forever
And I'll never let you go again
Never!!!
i'll be waiting for you


from geet to maan

Thanks for posting the poem...the poem speaks of Geet's emotions and turmoil so well..i really loved it...it sums up the whole OS in it's lines...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Thanks hun :)

Originally posted by: angelina_2005

Hey loved it !!! Very touching one

Thanks ...glad u liked it

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

Hi deary
I just read the title it touched me so much and I read it ended up in numerous tears,it was so very sad but still romantic I could so easily relate it to myself the immense love he showered her with, so the wait was really worth
Reading this os was more than worth anything
Loved it
Keep writing
God bless U

Awww...it's close to ur heart...i am sorry i made u cry...sometimes as a writer we end up touching chords of one's heart in a way even we didn't think we could...
Thank u for ur kind words...they mean a lot to me 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: seemamary

Amazing, continue soon.

Thanks...it's only a one part OS...

Thanks hun...glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Oh please add a second part to this!

sorry...but there isn't going to be another part...

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

beautifully written...


gr8 work...

it is indeed a wait for a lifetime...

thnx for PM..

Look who is it...i see u are still reading desipte ur mind telling u not to read 😆...glad u enjoyed it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: red135b

that was really beautiful. but i was kinda hoping this os might just have a tiny little part 2 by chance...?

Thanks hun...but there probably won't be another part to this...sorry...

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I knew as soon as she kissed the frame that he was dead. 😛 I've been reading so many sad OSs. Curse you great writers who torture us readers with sad OSs. lol Thanks for this story and the PM!

haha..really?? 😆 u have been reading us sadists' work for too long to know this...lolz...i take all ur curses whole heartedly and hope to make u cry even more...lolz😆 Thanks for comment hun...

Originally posted by: tasshuu

awesome work bt plz add nxt part to it n show happy ending... plz plz plz n do add me to ur pm list

Thanks hun...u have been added...but there isn't going to be another part to this...
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: londongirl95

wow amazing os!!! i hope maan does come back!! i dont think he is dead!!

hope is all Geet has...and u guyz...thanks for liking it...

Originally posted by: hopehot

emm🤔i should hv guessed ..🤓...

still awesome update .
loved it 😃

😆 u have been reading me long enough to know...thanks for liking it Hope 😊

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

That was beautifully sad story...wonderful OS, had me in tears at the end

Thanks hun...glad u liked it despite the tears...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zara158

I had a really busy day today, got back in the evening and found an OS by you!😃
I was excited, as I love reading stories about Maneet... but then I saw the title... I knew it was gonna be a heart breaker . nothing more relaxing than a depressing OS 😆..i joke...but u figured it by early seeing that u are new reader of mine 😃

But seen as I love your work, I said to myself a little sadness won't hurt no one😊 That's the spirit 😃

As usual it was amazing, the story touched me deeply. It was written beautifully and the way you described Geet's emotions towards the end was unbelievable. It was so perfect, you literally had me on the verge of tears 😭 Awww...thank u honey...i am glad u liked it...regardless of the tears i may have caused u to shed 😳

I also loved the effect of fore shadowing you used at the beginning when you wrote about Maan not liking Geet in white sarees, my fears about it being a tragedy were confirmed, but it was such a clever technique to use and it fitted in perfectly with the storyline👏 . I am glad u picked that up because that was purpose of the flashback and the discussion on the colours...so that was very smart of u as a reader 👏

A wonderful piece and I love it that you're writing quite often... Can't wait for the next one! and you gotta make it up to us by writing a happy one... no more tragedies😃 Glad u enjoyed it...but the writing speed will slow down once university starts up again...so enjoy it for now 😛

I am more of sadist queen ( this is the name i am given) so happy ideas are super rare with me 😳
. Thanks for the PM 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian

Ughh!
I am so late!
But HERE!! 😊


unresed**
Hmmppphhh... I am so mad, I wanted to reserve first 😔
Stupid Wonderland!!

Though I am super glad that I was the first one to read it though 😳 I feel special 😃
I have so much to say, I just can't put it into words.
I am so upset that the contest was cancelled, I really wanted to see the votes shoot up for you... You really deserve it!
I have to go now, like gotta speed.. but just saying that no matter what, you will never abandon your talent for writng. You rock!

Jilly [<3]

Lolz...it's okay hun...😆I hope u had fun at Wonderland...i haven't gone this summer at all...and i love rides 😃..but sadly the passion is not shared by my siblings .
.. u are here now...next time i can give u a shout over fb msg if u really wanna res first 😊...let me know if that works...
and i am glad u liked the piece...i was upset the contest got cancelled too...but not much we can do...
i will keep writing for u...but once university starts up..they won't be that often...
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Yeah I figured it was gonna be a heartbreaker, since I came across a few comments on 'Dancing for the rainbow' that made me realise tragedies are your forte😉, but other than that the name itself was a little bit of a give away.
I'm telling you, literature lessons that I used to have at school have got to me, reading between the lines has become a habit of mine😆
But the title itself symbolises all in all what the story is about and I forgot to commend you earlier...a very well thought title (did you spend a long time thinking about it)
Awww sad you're not gonna update more often...but what you'll write will definitely be worth the wait😃
Edited by zara158 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: zara158

Yeah I figured it was gonna be a heartbreaker, since I came across a few comments on 'Dancing for the rainbow' that made me realise tragedies are your forte😉, but other than that the name itself was a little bit of a give away.

I'm telling you, literature lessons that I used to have at school have got to me, reading between the lines has become a habit of mine😆
But the title itself symbolises all in all what the story is about and I forgot to commend you earlier...a very well thought title (did you spend a long time thinking about it)
Awww sad you're not gonna update more often...but what you'll write will definitely be worth the wait😃

Firstly...i am super suprised to see ur reply to my reply...because it doesn't happen often that readers read the replies u write for them...so thank u 😳...it makes it worth the time we spend on replying...
Yes...sadly i am known for my tragedies but my FF/SS are generally on the happier side...or at least with happy endings...😆
U are called my 'smart reader'...excepting u to analyze my words 😉
sometimes a idea comes first...and then i think about the title a lot...or a title comes and the idea plays around that...this time...the title came first...
Now u have made ur presence on my work...i except a comment from u always...😳

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