M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime - Page 3

that was really beautiful. but i was kinda hoping this os might just have a tiny little part 2 by chance...?

I knew as soon as she kissed the frame that he was dead. 😛 I've been reading so many sad OSs. Curse you great writers who torture us readers with sad OSs. lol Thanks for this story and the PM!

awesome work bt plz add nxt part to it n show happy ending... plz plz plz n do add me to ur pm list

wow amazing os!!! i hope maan does come back!! i dont think he is dead!!

emm🤔 i should hv guessed ..🤓...

That was beautifully sad story...wonderful OS, had me in tears at the end

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

That was beautifully sad story...wonderful OS, had me in tears at the end

I had a really busy day today, got back in the evening and found an OS by you!😃
I was excited, as I love reading stories about Maneet... but then I saw the title... I knew it was gonna be a heart breaker .

But seen as I love your work, I said to myself a little sadness won't hurt no one😊

As usual it was amazing, the story touched me deeply. It was written beautifully and the way you described Geet's emotions towards the end was unbelievable. It was so perfect, you literally had me on the verge of tears 😭

I also loved the effect of fore shadowing you used at the beginning when you wrote about Maan not liking Geet in white sarees, my fears about it being a tragedy were confirmed, but it was such a clever technique to use and it fitted in perfectly with the storyline👏 .

A wonderful piece and I love it that you're writing quite often... Can't wait for the next one! and you gotta make it up to us by writing a happy one... no more tragedies😃
. Thanks for the PM 😊

Ughh!
I am so late!
But HERE!! 😊