M/G OS: A Wait of A Lifetime

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

why do u have to write sad stories..and that too so beautifully..me cribbing😡😆

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

that was sad yet sweet
hmmm bittersweet?
loved it!
thanks for the pm!

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

stalker ji!! lookie at who is here!!! 😃...im reading with caution cuz who knows what you did with this story...meaning end mein...happy ya sad...kisse pata...*jaz crosses fingers*

😲...now im scared...at the very beginning you have Geet making out with a picture frame...kya pata MSK zinda hai bhi ya nahin 😲...so seems like munda is away quite often...business im guessing...vaise banda karta kya hai? 😳...OMG...someone fix me up...sh*t...an arranged marriage and she ends up with a gem like Maan Singh Khurana!! 😲 W*F?! some girls have all the luck...thats just not fair!!! ...oh lordy..they're talking about death...foreboding? i really...REALLY hope not!!! 😳...KC being handled by Annie and Arjun...oh my gosh...my heart is skining with every passing sentence!!! 😕 im scared...and i have half the mind to stop reading...cheat by reading other peoples comments...but...i wont do that!!! 😛...and then i got to the letter...and i swear...my heart stopped for just a second.."the world tells me you're dead" 😭...wonderful...just...wonderful!! 🤬...what did i ever do to you!? wait...dont answer 😆...OMG!! not only he is MSK but he's a man in uniform!! *jaz dead*...

the story was beautiful yaar...bittersweet but beautifully so!! 👏...it was like a sort of unique take on Nicholas Sparks' "Message in a Bottle"...😳...you did a fabulous job!!! might we get a part 2 where he comes back from the "dead"..a la Ekta ishtlye!! 🤣

JAZ

ps: kissi aur ko mile ya naa mile...mujhe iss comment ka reply chahiyeh!! 😛

Edited by jnawaz - 13 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: jnawaz

ps: kissi aur ko mile ya naa mile...mujhe iss comment ka reply chahiyeh!! 😛

u are getting a reply...THIS...😆...no..i am just kidding...i shall reply to comments for this after i tackle the ones from the last one...which was believe it or not...one of my rare happy OS 😳

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

oh gosh Reya, I had tears when I read it
it was mind blowing

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

1st tell me that is this it ?? I mean is it a 1 part OS ? Well I'll give my comments keeping in mind both possibilities ...

If its a 1 part OS :

What can I say ?? Beautiful . 👍🏼

Its indeed a measure of immense will & faith ; both which Geet epitomizes that clearly surfaced . Loved her & her talks with Maan in real & imagination.

Positive hope makes an individual grow , prosper & achieve a lot of things in life . Hope Geet will soon find happiness as well . That's the Best thing about human brain ! It does remember pain but also remembers to forget it & move ahead . I'm wishing that for Geet as well . 😊

If parts are yet to come :

Its my belief I'm sharing . I feel will-power , belief , strong determination can even squeeze water out from stones (figuratively) ; but yes I'm a person of strong beliefs & my faith in God never wavers even in moments of anguish , pain & helplessness . I prefer to look @ a glass half full than empty ; so I guess you got the msg Reva .

Irrespective of its heavy content it was a good read . 👍🏼

Thanks for pm ...

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ilyface

@ilyface

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Gosh this was so beautifu<3

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Oh Reya...what to say...my heart ache...I am in tears...so emotional and sad OS...Maan is dead and Geet is waiting for him from 3 yrs hoping he will come back to her.

thanx for pm.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Hi Reya...thanks 4 da om n emotional, intense n sad update. Poor Geet...waiting for her Maan to come home! She has this belief n trust tht Maan is nt dead and will come back. Geet loves Maan so much! Maan is in teh navy. Loved the superb Maaneet moments. Beautifully written!😛