MG:OS:My Well-Wisher-last part updated- pg 12

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nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Superb Ending
Thanks 4 The PM

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome update...👏

Atlast Geet told...⭐️Wow Superb ending...👍🏼

Thanks for pm😊

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soniya_lovesu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey dear, i dint complain for the last "last part" but i will in this😡...aaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡wt? no maaneet?😭 wht kind of happy ending is tht?😕 no wedding? or relatnshp?😭

HEHEHEHE,KIDDING!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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let me give u a big jhappi and kissie for this😆
my point was not to prove u wrong...
i am not averse to sad endings...but somehow i felt this story was more deserving for a happy ending on a friendly note and look ur third part has really made a difference...
now it looks like something really so beautiful ..maan being her well wisher...
i simply adored this ending...
thank u so much sweetie for giving us this beautiful ending...
hope i was not harsh in my criticism...or didnt force u to write this ending...hope u too felt that this ending had more effect...
thnk u once again sweetie
reva

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

awesome ... loved it ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nice story. thanks for the pm.. and sorry for the late comment.

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jyothi111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Suuuperb ending dear...loved it so Muchhh...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
let me give u a big jhappi and kissie for this😆
my point was not to prove u wrong...
i am not averse to sad endings...but somehow i felt this story was more deserving for a happy ending on a friendly note and look ur third part has really made a difference...
now it looks like something really so beautiful ..maan being her well wisher...
i simply adored this ending...
thank u so much sweetie for giving us this beautiful ending...
hope i was not harsh in my criticism...or didnt force u to write this ending...hope u too felt that this ending had more effect...
thnk u once again sweetie
reva

noo not at all😃 infact thnx a lot for your inputs😃i am always open to criticism

i'm very bad at psychology 😆, i hv nvr studied it ,

i hv just tried to convey feelings nd rltnshps other than love ... i defo need some guidance to potray these sensitive relationshps nd infact i'm glad that u actually took intrest in all my my weird thoughts...!!

i jst write these things to refresh my mind , like a hobby , nd it's actually good if i get to know abt things that are new to me...your criticism only enhances my knowledge and writing skills ...nd even i object to points i feel are illogical !!!!

(nd i did the same thing today nd i even went over-board in my class and now i hv to pay a solid price for it 😭😆)

P.S.

nd plss don't accuse me of givin' sad endings 😆 'coz even though i hvn't potrayed any love story btwn maaneet till now , i always gave happy endings😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
lovely end..

thnx for PM...

Haaww..!! but i expected a jhappi from u!!😉

and BTW thnx a lot for the comment😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: soniya_maaneet

hey dear, i dint complain for the last "last part" but i will in this😡...aaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡wt? no maaneet?😭 wht kind of happy ending is tht?😕 no wedding? or relatnshp?😭

HEHEHEHE,KIDDING!!!!

OMG...!!!! u literally scared me with the first part of your comment😆😆

nd thnx a lot for ur lovely (scary 😉) comment dear 😃