MG:OS:My Well-Wisher-last part updated- pg 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😛😛this1 is MarvAlous...!!!!!!!!!!😳
😛😛that's aLL i can sAy...😳😳
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Originally posted by: MasterPeece

😛😛this1 is MarvAlous...!!!!!!!!!!😳

😛😛that's aLL i can sAy...😳😳

] thnx dearEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww awesome ..plz do cont it
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Originally posted by: hopehot

awww
<div></div>awesome ..plz do cont it



thnx a lot for commenting dear :)
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Happy Ganesh Chaturthi friends😃😃😃

NEXT PART- The Untold Feelings

"Dear i'm so sorry , u know na this is my new job , it's not a small one i hv a lot of responsiilities to fullfill...so pls understand me., 'll never do this again dear hello ,hello,hello...!!!
y did u cut the phone arshia , said maan in a sad tone.
Maan was supposed to take his fiance arshia to a restro for dinner but he failed due to his work ..his new job , he is now the accounting head of "The Oberoi constructions"
he landed up geeting this job after a lot of hard work , it was not at all easy for him to fetch this job
but now the main problem for him was to convince her ...he took his car nd reached arshia's hospital..she is a doctor ,he met her during the time when his mother was ill ,then she was a medical student...her mother liked arshia a lot , so by the grace of his mother and all the family members ,they both got engaged , but not married yet they decided not to marry until they both got settled .
Maan went to her hospital , but she was busy in her duty,so he thought of waiting for her, He saw a building near the hospital , it's none other than the singing instiution..he smiled looking at that , he passed a glance at his watch , there was a lot of time reamaining , he thought of visiting the institution once .
while walking he accidentally landed up in a wrong route , he saw a vacant hall, he didn't knew the directions , he kept looking all over , then he heard a voice from his back "excuse me..!!! what are you doing here???"
this voice was familiar to him , he turned back to see his old "friend", nd now a successful "singer" infont of him...
as he turned back geet was shocked she was completely frozen , she never expected him , it was unbeleivable for her to beleive that fact that her "well wisher" stood before him...she wanted to, run towards him , and hug him tightly to say thank you, but she was unable to move, she just stood there watching him, all the words , moments she wanted to tell just faded away before him...she took small steps towards him,...and so did maan both moved towards each other with a lot of feelings and emotions running all over them , conquering their mind , body and soul, a lot of things to tell but they had no words , a lot of feeling were conquering both of them,her eyes were filled with tears , she was unable to express her feelings pondering all over in her mind for years...!!!
so how are you...geet smile faded away hearing these words ..."how r U"
maybe she expected something more from her well - wisher ,
i'm fyn...nd it's been a long tyme , how r u???

asked geet in a slow but a very excited tone
"i'm fyn too" he smiled
"let's sit and talk" ,
she was so excited to meet him , she wanted to just blurt out all her feelings, all her thoughts,all her words for him...but she couldn't do , that it wasn't easy at all!!
she just sat there like a doll staring at him constantly blinking her eyes in nervousness
she was desperately waiting for him to start the conversation ,as she was getting so nervous and once he starts she thought of continuing it...!!
her eyes pleaded him to do the same thing he always did , smiling and starting a conversation ...when they met for the first time , and the second time...she kept looking at him
she was getting restless, but he just stared the hall, watched her in a very casual manner
"so it's really been a long time"
"you have changed a lot" he smiled
not really maan , she smiled thinking about his letter , which she still preserved with her
"oh so you remember my name" dat's dat's actually grt ...i mean ,i thought.
his words kept on decreasing ao did the intensity of her smile..!! she thought to herself , her heart was badly weeping
"wat ???. why are you behaving like this maan, how can i forget your name , infact i even remember each and every word of yours, i have still preserved your letter , i still remember the image of you when we frst talked...i made till here to not let you down , to not let your sacrifice go waste ,to prove you , that your words worked like a magic wand for me , i can't forget you even in my dreams maan and now you are asking if i remeber your name?? how could you even say this???"
Tears started flowing from her eyes , she excused herself from dere ,went to a corner and wiped her tears , she was unable to bear this coldness , this cold response from his " well-wisher"
she doubted if he even thought of her during all these years , her tears weren't stopping, they kept on flowing ...all her feelings wre faded just in a moment
she wiped her tears nd went to him and sat beside him without any response with a blank face...she felt there was no use of expressing herself , it won't even make a difference for him ,she'll make a fool out of herself.
There was a sudden silence all over, both of them were feeling awkward, maan stood up "so. i'll take ur leave, bye"
She was disgusted by his behaviour, she wanted to shout at him and wanted to confront him ,but she couldn't!! She was getting more and more restless with his behaviour , but she could do nothing!!!
"ok, den bye" said geet very weakly and unwantingly ,her voice was not even allowing her to spell these words.
Maan went outside and it was raining heavily, he stood in the rain , nd rememebered his first meeting , his eyes were becoming red..."you have changed geet"
a lot of emotions were running through him at that moment in the same way the rain drops were flowing .
He was badly hurt i was always right, "you forgot me Geet, i just wanted you to start the conversation , but u stood and went away , you became so busy that you didn't even give me time to speak out something"
I wish i could tell u how happy i was when i first saw your album released
,how excited i was when you first song became a huge hit,
i wish i could tell you how ur pics on the magazines automatically brought smile to my face, i wish i could tell you , how much my heart missed you,
i wish i could tell you how much my lips were waitin' to talk to you,
how my ears were desperately waiting to hear your experiences and joys ,
how my heart was filled with questions and answers and happiness and feelings and excitement and what not ,
i wish i could tell you that i got a job ,that i always wanted to do,
i wish i could tell you how i used to remember you and smile whenever it rained,
"Did you ever get my letter geet? that i wrote for you , the last time when me met , we had a bitter fight and never ever after that incident i met you geet, and now a lot of words remained untold .
His tears were flowing along with the rain , i wish i could tell you ...
i didn't wanted to make a fool of myself geet , for you i'm just like any other person you came across , but for me you are a lot more than that , may be that is the reason i applied for a job in your institute , just to make u know that i wanna meet you , i'm in the same city , but how does it bother you...!!
yow were so busy that you didn't even have some time to spend with me , u walked away when i was to strt the convo..everything was locked inside me the moment u excused yourself and went away...!!!!
i wish i could geet...
He kept on walking in the rain .
She watched the rain flowing outside , she checked her letters which she wrote in response to his one single letter ,Many leeters that were lying lifeless with many emotions folded and closed.
She turned and watched the rain through her window ...

''With Untold Feelings and Unexpressed Emotions"
P.S ...so guys this was the last part i was confused whether to update it or not and i ended up updating it ,i'm not at all sure how many of you wud actually like it , but still i updated it...so plss spare my mistakes and i'm open to all kind of comments
soo plss do comment😳

Edited by worldofdreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part
sad to know that no maaneet union in this os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome part
sad to know that no maaneet union in this os

thanx 😃
yeah no maaneet union , dis os wud have lost it essence if it had maaneet union😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one ... but 'm not satisfied ...

i would have liked it better if they would have shared their untold emotions ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I feel bad that they could not tell what they felt for each other..but that is life..not all end up happy...awesome os btw..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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[QUOTE=maaneetsangel] good one ... but 'm not satisfied ...

i would have liked it better if they would have shared their untold emotions ...
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i'm sry fr not being able to satisfy u dear i had this in mind so wrote it down]

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