MG:OS:My Well-Wisher-last part updated- pg 12 - Page 6

Originally posted by: soniya_maaneet

Great effort dear...read all of it in one-go...thanks for the p.m...

And u did a fab job here, its a truth of life tht sometimes we dnt get wat we want and when we get it, we keep regret getting it..cause we loose a lot of precious things in our life in order to get what we desire.😊

let me come with my jhooti...
i thought u will give a nice and happy parting to them, but they have ended up in ekta kapoor type MU...
let me kill u and then rest in peace...then i wont be having horror dreams of ur trademark sad OS...
arre u cud have made them part on a good note, both carrying on with their life, yet having played a significant role in moving ahead in life, but what i see here has given me a major cardiac arrest...
i shud have let u end the OS in the forst part itself, reading the second part is giving me just palpitations
plzzz for the sake of my sanity and long life, make one more part...no MU...arre let them be friends at least and have a good parting...maine toh tumse maneet ke ek hone ki aasha hi chod di😆

plzzz write one more part and no sad ending..or else be ready to bid goodbye to ur loved ones😡😆
reva

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

let me come with my jhooti...
i thought u will give a nice and happy parting to them, but they have ended up in ekta kapoor type MU...
let me kill u and then rest in peace...then i wont be having horror dreams of ur trademark sad OS...
arre u cud have made them part on a good note, both carrying on with their life, yet having played a significant role in moving ahead in life, but what i see here has given me a major cardiac arrest...
i shud have let u end the OS in the forst part itself, reading the second part is giving me just palpitations
plzzz for the sake of my sanity and long life, make one more part...no MU...arre let them be friends at least and have a good parting...maine toh tumse maneet ke ek hone ki aasha hi chod di😆

plzzz write one more part and no sad ending..or else be ready to bid goodbye to ur loved ones😡😆
reva

Originally posted by: worldofdreams

OMG!!! ekta style..!!! itna bada ilzaam...!!! i'm 🤢

waise i hv written ths part 'coz u aksed me twice ,warna dat was the ending nd now plss don't blame me , kyun ki mjhe ye hi mila tha lkhne ko and itna bada ilzaam😭😭

i was chattin' wid my frnd with a big smile on my face and ur big ilzaam made me 😔 sad..!!

okkk...let me leave this os here, pta chala nxt part mein i hv ruined the essence of it by creating a love story btwn them mera koi bharosa nahi 😆😆

i'm writin' a ss na, nd that's a happy one , ...(may be😉 😕)

P.S.:it actually happens sometimes , in most of the cases our ego makes us remain silent , and in this case waitin' for the other person to express his/her feelings made them remain silent , i mean it was natural for mean to hesitate as geet was no more the some persom , many doubts can creep up in anyone's mind , and cumin' to geet , only god knows y was she not accepting the reality that she thngs hv actually chngd nd expecting the same hing from maan that he did few years ago was a bit odd!

arre but ego comes only when in a relationship of friendship...
when two ppl kno each other well yet they are not friends...they dont change with time or their perceptions dont change much with change in their position or social status...
a simple sorry cud have triggered a convo ultimately geet thanking him for his timely advice thru his letter..i wasnt expecting any maneet angle..but somehow they completely misunderstanding each other doesnt go down well with me...
geet being a successful singer cud have started a convo and wud voice d her sorry for ruing his career years back...now when she had been waiting to thank him all the years, how can someone goof up...
i am good in psychology , so somehow i feel this entire next chance meeting cud have been a wonderful moment of their life..
i dont intend to accuse u, but then i personally feel when u meet someone who has been instrumental in shaping the direction of r life directly or indirectly, u dont ruin it by keeping mum or saying something stupid...ur eyes, body language will show...
its just my POV

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

arre but ego comes only when in a relationship of friendship...
when two ppl kno each other well yet they are not friends...they dont change with time or their perceptions dont change much with change in their position or social status...
a simple sorry cud have triggered a convo ultimately geet thanking him for his timely advice thru his letter..i wasnt expecting any maneet angle..but somehow they completely misunderstanding each other doesnt go down well with me...
geet being a successful singer cud have started a convo and wud voice d her sorry for ruing his career years back...now when she had been waiting to thank him all the years, how can someone goof up...
i am good in psychology , so somehow i feel this entire next chance meeting cud have been a wonderful moment of their life..
i dont intend to accuse u, but then i personally feel when u meet someone who has been instrumental in shaping the direction of r life directly or indirectly, u dont ruin it by keeping mum or saying something stupid...ur eyes, body language will show...
its just my POV

Originally posted by: ASMI95

too gud

loved it

hey guys i'm updating the next part

Hey guys sorry for diappointing u all with my last part , may be it was very lame , sry once again nd i hv updated this part hope u'll like it and special thanx to reva di for making me realise my mistake😊😊

hope u'l like this part

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Geet kept on looking at those letters, and she suddenly realised her stupidity , she closed her eyes
"oh..no !!! maine ye kya kar diya..!!!
Maan was around me , he stood infront of me , nd wat i did was just let him go...oh god , how stupid can a person be..??
oh...no geet !! she realised her mistake , she was disgusted with her behaviour , how can i expect him to initiate a conversation when i was the one who ruined his

career , years ago , nd she stood up , wiped her tears , she ran out of the house to search him, she ran here and there like a mad girl , but couldn't find him , she

knew that...!!

she cried on her stupidity, and lost her hope.
and the next day she was going in a car , she saw Maan on the other side of the road , it was almost impossible to reach there and that too, when she was so

famous , all the hope was gone , just then she took out the powder lying in her car , she spread the powder all over her face , covered her face with a dupatta as

it was night it wasn't so difficult for her to move on the road un-noticed she ran on the road , just to reach near him , she saw maan walking away , she ran

more fastly...telling herself ,i'll not let you go this time maan , she was badly tired but she didn't lose hope at last she saw maan that maan stopped to tie his shoe lace ,

she sighed with releif and caught Maan's arm and pulled him towards her and took him towards a corner , Maan who witnessed all these weird things looked at the

girl confused and shocked , "who r u??" shouted maan
geet took the dupatta from her face and snatched the water bottle from his face and sprinkled water on her face , she was so tired , she took long breathe , Geet

shouted maan in a shockin state ,
gget put her hand on his mouth ..ssshhh...!!!
"ufff" ktna tez chalta ho yaar..!!
maan stood there with an opened mouth..."geet ye sab kya hai"???
she looked into his eyes closed them "i'm sorry maan"
she opened her eyes, geet
"i'm really sorry for behaving rudely with u maan , sorry for spoiling your career , sorry for letting you go even when i met you after such a long tym..!!
geet..
Thank you maan ,thank you for shouting at me, thank u for your letter , thank u for being such a huge support in my life , thank u for your words which

brought me where i am right now...thank you for being "my well-wisher" maan
she smiled with releif and stopped her words letting him to continue
Geet , he said so lovingly his voice was choked , he wasn't able to blv his ears , his eyes his eyes were almost filled with tears.
G..eee.t mai kya bolo geet , he smiled with his filled eyes , Geet understood his plight , she held his hand and made him sit , she smiled at him ,"tumhe kuch bolne

ki zarrorat nahi hai maan itne saalon se tumhara letter hi mujhse sab kuch bol raha tha
geet mujhe to ye tak nahi pata tha ki wo letter tumne padha bhi ya nahi , his voice was filled with emotions . Jab mai mama ko dekhne town gaya , to ek bhi aisa

din nahi tha jab maine tumhare baare me na socha ho , au jab tumhara phla gaana release hua , to i was on the seventh sky geet ...mann kar rha tha ki bhaagke

jaake tumse mil nd congratulate karu ..!!
They shAred some more beautifful moments of their life maan told her about his engagement, and his new job , geet was so happy for him ..!! and they spent

almost two hours with each other talking ..and just then while walking light fell on geet's face and some group of people recognised her , oh no geet you should

go now , warna ...
yeah maan bye , she started moving away , jst then maan held her hand and pulled her to a small and dark corner and whispered into her ears , thanx fr this

wonderful and unforgettable moment Geet ,he smiled ...and they hugged each other Bye Maan , whispered Geet , Bye Geet
she went away towards the light , surrounded by many people asking autographs, she signed for all of them and turned back and smiled at him ...
and moved on , and so did maan with a broad smile on his face

loved it...glad that geet spoke to maan..