MG:OS:My Well-Wisher-last part updated- pg 12

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hi guys
"Happy Independence Day To All"
this is my first OS...it's not a romantic one..it's more about geet and her dreams and plss..guys plsss...hear the song that i hv included it is the soul of this OS ..PLZZZ...plzzz..!!!don't forget to listen to thst song, otherwise u'll not enjy it
PART 1
It was raining heavily , she peeped out of her window then she took her umbrella, she stepped out of her one room flat locked the door and went to the nearby bakery to purchase a packet of bread , one milk packet and she gave a crumpled 20 rs. note to the shopkeeper and returned back to her one room flat.
she simply bolied that milk and drank them with a piece a bread.
she is Geet ...a simple girl ..she always dreamt of becoming a famous singer, like many other people after completing her graduation she came to mumbai to fulfill her dreams, she was very excited in the beginning , she tried a lot , she gave many auditions ,walked and walked until her sandals were torn , she roamed in summers , monsoon , winters, weekdays, weekends just to fulfill her dreams she aproached many people , worked hard , things started becoming more and more difficult for her she started losing her hope , she only got dissapointments...one day when she was losing all her hope her friend told her to approach the owner of a music studio , he was very sweet to her she was delighted to find him but slowly his real intentions were out, he tried to take advantage of her situation.
she was taken aback by that behaviour, she ran away from there , for the first time ever she completely lost her hope, she was completely broken...she gave up all her dreams she lost her hope , she understood that there was nothing for her in this big bad world .
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Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna
Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna

Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein
Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein
Bavri Se Dhadkaane Hain, Bavri Hain Saansen
Bavri Si Karwaton Se, Nindiya Door Bhaage
Bavre Se Nain Chaahe, Bavre Jharokhon Se, Bavre Nazaron Ko Takna.
Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna

she couldnot go back to her house and all her money was spent , only thing she could do was to forget all her her dreams and move on ,she fetched a job for herself in a 3-star hotel...!!
and that's it her monotonous life started from there all the excitement in her life was gone everyday she travelled from her room to that hotel , she had no friends , no parties, no excitement.the only thing that gave pleasure was her singing but she closed that part completely, she hated this life but she had no other option ...she has to spend her life in this way...
It was monsoon it was raining heavily many of the housekeeping staff members had to walk till the bus-stop from the hotel to catch a bus...she saw a co- worker he didn't have an umbrella he was waitin' for the rain to stop , she was hesitant to offer him umbrella , but then she offered him , he was so delighted, he smiled he always saw her in the hotel but he had never talked to her , they both started walking, he was feeling very happy b'coz it has been 3 years that he came to this city to make it big, he wanted to start new business , but he didn't have enough money as he is the only earner his whole family, living in another town...!!he had many responsibilities.
and he was so pleased to see that someone had actually helped him ,someone had actually bothered to see his problem and offered help he never talked to anyone b'coz he knew that many ppl here were self centered , he smiled and tried to talked to her ..Hi i'm maan we both work in the same hotel..."i know" she answered in a dull voice. his smile faded away with her cold response..!!

next day at geet's flat:
"yaar geet chal na chalte hai , diwali party hai , bahut mazaa aayega, let's go mere liye,... tu mere saath cha rhi hai bas...!!!"
said priya her neighbour , she was not priya's friend but she occasionally talked to her and this time priya desperatelyly wanted to go the new year party in that colony but she knew that her parents would never allow her to go alone , she she came to geet to persuade her
geet reluctantly agreed to that offer 'coz she didn't wanted to break her heart..!!
she was feeling so lonely in that whole party , she was sitting in a corner...
"kya hua"asked maan and he sat beside her
geet : ohh aap , aap yaha...??
maan : wo mai bhi isi colony me rhta hun..!!!
maan:kya hua it seems u r not enjoying this party ..!!!
geet: haan mjhe ye parties ye sab nahi pasand

maan:ookk but you can try...ab enjoy karne ki koshish karengi to shayad...

geet:aap enjoy kijiye aap yaha kyu baithe hai???

maan: mai enjoy to krna chahta hun par uske liye kisika saath bhi to chahiye na par yaha pe to phle se hi couples bank aaye hai
agar nahi hai to yaha aake ban gaye...!!!par mai yun achanak ek hi pal me bina kuch jaane kisi ko dost nahi banaa sakta

geet: haan may be u r right . yaha pe to rishte pal me ban bhi jatae hai and pal bhar me toot bhi jaate hai , just like our dreams it doesn't take much time for those to be shattered, she started sharing the whole journey ..with him ...!!!

after some time she realised that she blurted out everythnig in front of him ,she was speechless, she was feeling very awkward , she definetely dinn't wanted to share these things, she stood and went away from there...!!!

Next morning in the hotel she saw him ,she was feeling awkward ,maan understood her plight , he went near her sat beside her and said in in a slow tone ,"it's ok..u shared your journey with me it's not a crime saying this he smiled pleasently...his smile gave her some relief . she smiled ,it was the first time after a long time she was smiling whole heartedly ...slowly slowly ,they started spending more time with each other ,she enjoyed his company, she felt warmth in his company.
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PART 2
They both enjoyed each others company , but still they were not friends , they didn't knew much about each other, they were still strangers, two sweet strangers who enjoyed each other's company, who were not a part of each other's life but they both became a part of each other's soul , inner self..!!
Bavre Se Is Jahan Main Bavra Ek Saath Ho
Is Sayani Bheed Main Bas Haathon Mein Tera Haath Ho
Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho
Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho
Bavre Se Pair Chahen, Baavron Tarano Ke, Bavre Se Bol Pe Thirakna.
Bavra Mann, Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna

Few days passed ... there was chaos all among the staff bcoz the lead singer of the band was not present and many guests were present
the manager was fuming in anger
Manger: i'll sue that girl how could she do that
maan who was listenin' to him went to him
"sir i know one girl , who can sing amazingly , she is a fantastic singer , she just needs a chance please sir allow her to sing today, please sir , please trust me.he persuaded him
manager was not at all happy but still he had no other option "Are you sure she is a nice singer, and she will not ditch us..??
yes sir she is ready ,don't worry
ok..!!!
maan was so happy , he knew that geet would love to sing here , he was soo excited,he was very happy for geet but when he approached her
she was shocked and not at all happy..!!!
geet:how can u do this , in fact why have you done this , kisse puchkar ye sab kiya tmne,look i'm not gonna sing and dat's it...!!!
maan:wat's wrong with u geet , u r a wonderful singer then y r u backing out at the last minute???
geet:"last minute" r u crazy do u even know the meaning of last minute please maan why r u interfering in my life ..i just don't want to sing and that's it ...don't even try to force me...!!!!
maan:geet pls...listen to me...this is the right oppurtunity , if you sing well which i'm sure you will, u may even get this job ,it can bcum your proffession
geet was getting irritated with each and every word "shut up maan , just shut up..!!!! just don't try to preach me, did u get it???

saying these words she ran away from there


geet ws sitting in the dark " then she heard a knock on her door" she knew that it was maan..!!

she opened the door in an angry mood "thank you" he said in a harsh tone
and slammed the door and went away, she was surprised to see this bahaviour, she was gettin' restless, her anger and frustration were reaching heights ,she never saw maan like that , she wanted to talk to him , she wanted to question him and shout at him..!!!!

she went to his house..she opened the door "ur welcome" she blurted out
she wanted to tell something more , but she stopped herself
"u and ur ego..it's really very huge" said maan
she got more angry..!!!
" oh really...but it's not bigger than yours , and at least i don't interfere in other's life without their permission"
maan was fuming" i did this for your own sake "Miss.Geet Handa" and i never expected this type of behavour from you , just get out from my house get lost"
she hated that behaviour , she went away from there slamming the door
she sstood near her window , she was angry , frustrated ,sad and broken at the same time,
Bavra Sa Ho Andhera, Bavri Khamoshiyan
Bavra Sa Ho Andhera, Bavri Khamoshiyan
Thartharati Low Ho Maddham, Bavri Madhoshiyan
Bavra Ek Ghooghta Chahe, Haule Haule Bin Bataye, Bavre Se Mukhde Se Sarakana,
Bavra Mann, Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna
even though maan was not a very imp part of her life but his words were pricking her heart , they wre tearing her apart , b'coz she knew he did evrythng for her , b'coz she cared for her , for her dreams , he was just trying to help her out , she sat on her knees , she was sad b'coz she left a golden oppurtunity , she blurted out all stupid tings in front of him , she was frustrated ..!!!!
she didn't like maan's behaviour...she hated every thing..!!!!!!
she kept weeping whole night thinking abt her childish behaviour


next morning she went to the hotel , she heard some ppl talking " us bechaare ko job se pata nahi kyu nikaal diya ,bahut seedha saadha aur shaant swabhav ka tha"

"haan aur boss to bahut gusse me the
unhne wo lettr bhi uske muh pe phenk diya"
geet was scared may be she knew that name she became restless" kaun ,kise nikaala...she was asking curiously
it was he first time she was actually talking to other staff members "MAAN"
she froze for that particular span of time ..

she knew that the job was a ver important part of his life, she blamed herself , tears started flowing from her eyes , due to her immature behaviour maan had to pay a huge cost , the job ,which meant a lot for him for his family...!!!!
Edited by worldofdreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one yaar ..waiting for the rest..do pm me !!
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PART 3

she was angry on herself...then another person from her staff came near her and handed over a letter to her...
Geet
"' i'm sorry , mujhe is tarah tmhri zindagi me interfere nahi karna chahiye tha, i was quite rude to you yesterday, i shud hv thought ki ye tmhre liye itna asaan nahi hoga...i'm very sorry !!
but geet one more thing " never lose hope in yourself , failures bhi zindagi ka hi hissa hai ,but we can't run away from them, you are so lucky that you are talented , bhale hi maine tumhara gaana nahi suna ho ,but still i can make out your talent from the purity of your heart , nothing in our life comes so easily, kal tumhe jo ek chance mila tha usse tmhri life bhi change ho sakti thi ,may be wo job tumhe hi mil jaati ,..??
but stll..it's ok..par aage koi bhi chance mile to don't miss it, every oppurtunity is a golden one , so just go for it"
aur agar tum kaamyab nahi ho payi to himmat mat haarna
ek baat yaad rakhna " kayi baar kisi ke sapne dosron ke sapnon ki kimat par pure hote hai'
agar kahi tmhe chance nahi mila to kisi aur ko chance mil gaya hoga...so don't get disheartened
i'm damn sure that one day u will make it to the top, and one thing whenever you'll make it big pls try to help those ppl jinke tab sapne toote honge jab tumhare poore hue honge, try to enhance their skills geet , and never lose hppe in life geet , because once you lose your hope , you will lose everything , each and everything

your "friend and wellwisher "
Maan...

After 3 years:
tears rolled down her eyes, she closed her eyes after reading this letter , it has been 3 years, and she preserved that letter like a precious jewel , it was thing that encouraged her when she got discouraged...
she stood up and went towards the recording studio she is dressed in an elegant green saree , with curly open hair, she started recording for her new album
Geet Handa she is one of the india's top most singers ...young and beautiful , people loved her mesmerizing voice and her charm ...she started to record her song ,but her voice was choked...
another person who was observing "Ma'am it' ok ...if you are not feeling well , we will record it tomorrow ma'am."
hearing these words, she remembered her mistake , due to her ignorance and hesitance ...one person had to give up his job which meant everything to him...she lost a precious person of her life ...!!!
3 years back...
she was crying after reading that letter she ran to his house just to find out that he has left that place b'coz he got to know that his mother was unwell
even the house owner didn't knew where he went , she waited for him ,she tried to contact him , but that was of no use , no'one knew his home town , she wanted to
prove him that she was guilty , all his words of his letter were revolving in her mind "don't ever lose hope"
those words made a deep impact on her , then she opened that part of her life which she closed years ago, she remembered his words , she was determined to fulfill her dreams, she started her journey all over again , she started from zero level , she once again had to face all the struggles , but this time she never gave up , she never lost her hope whenever she got discouraged , she read that letter , that letter always reminded her of her "Only wellwisher " only person who encouraged her...!!!


Present...
She completed the recording of her song..and then she moved towards her singing institute to appreciate all the upcoming talents ,
the letter made a deep impact on her ,he was not just any other person in her life , but unfortunately she never saw him again , her friend , her encouragement ...in these three years she came across many people ,but she could never forget him , he had a very secial place in her heart...then he was not a best friend,he was not her saviour , not her life partner, he was just a well- wisher...just one well-wisher...!!!

He was a beautiful page of her life who came into her life for a very short span , but changed her life completely...!!! even though she didn't knew him very well...but still she knew him very well...!!!

Singing institution
Everyone was dying to get a glimpse of her , her smile , her voice...!!! she was appreciating all the upcoming singers with a warm smile she spent time with them , she laughed and played with all the children of the institute..!!!
Just then a paper touched her feet..she took that paper ...and then a voice interrupted her
"i'm sorry ma'am it's a form , form for an interview in our office, sorry for the disturbance"
IT's allright , no need to be sorry ...she smiled at him...

at the other side of the paper was written


NAME: MAAN KHURANA
Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna
Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein
Bavri Se Dhadkaane Hain, Bavri Hain Saansen

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Part 3-Page 7
Part 4-Page 12
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Very beautiful story
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Hey Dreams...thanx for pm...

I read this OS and it is really beautiful...Please continue and when u do please pm me.
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

beautiful os...plz continue


thnx dear ...but that was the last part dear L] 😃
Edited by worldofdreams - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Hey Dreams...thanx for pm...

I read this OS and it is really beautiful...Please continue and when u do please pm me.


Thnx a lot for ur comment dear
and ya my name is namratha dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply beautiful...
is this the last part..
does this mean he is still struggling...but never lost hope and now destiny has him apply for a job in the institute...
i wud love if u cud continue more and also give us maan's POV...and what happened to him and his life...
but this OS was simply lovely
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beautifully written. nice message u have given through this os. we should never loose hope. keep trying. thanks you so much for the os.

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