OS: Where's My Girl... - Page 7

Originally posted by: *Guli*

yAY ME HERE!!! hello babeji!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg!! i always end up reading ur happy ones and all the sad ones.. im like saving!! i gotta catch up!! will do it before i go to vegas!!!!!!!!!!!!

aww it was sooo sad!!! poor mahi!!!!! she was sick... maan was sooo worried... that his his girl!!!!! aww i loved this!!!!

and i didnt like ur author note #2!!!!! no no no! u keep these happy ones!! cuz ur sad ones... are way too sad!!!!!!😭

luv u babeji!😳

OMG! WHAT!? you commented...ON TIME!! 😲...i was randomly checking this page and i had to do a double take!! 😆...but yay!!! you came!! ha ha...took me a minute to decipher "vegas"...😉...but i gotcha!! 😛...i think this is the last of the happy ones...u know the sad things i have planned!! he eh
JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Originally posted by: Lily201

@Jaz-- Well you did give me a scare throughout as I waited with baited breath when you'll break the bad news and we'll break into tears while praising your power of words for making us into our sorrowful selves - coz those sort of "harsh truth "endings seem so inevitable while reading But you're great at it😆 Lovely OS again😃 I agree - I love "doting dads" especially the way you characterize as Maan as being one makes me gush and the way he gets all pained for his baby girl's behest is really touching😳

I love the titles you come up with- first "daddy's little girl" & "Where's my girl"

he he...looks like everyone was scared unnecessarily!! 😆...but i love freaking you guys out like that...and scaring you!! ha ha...its just awesome!!! i had a blast writing both stories but Daddys Little Girl is something very special and close to my heart...because im like Geet in that story...a life without my dad is just unimaginable! 😭

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

did you...😲...did you just...call me an idiot!? 😲

JAZ

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Jaz...Thanks 4 da pm n surprise that is this OS. It was emotional , intense, sad n happy OS. Loved the relationship between Maan n Mahi. Its true...a father is closer to his daughter/s. Mahi is Maan's world. Both Maan n Geet were is so much of pain when Mahi was being treated! Maan cld nt stand it! Maan loves his little girl. Beautifully written...Thanks 4 da happy OS. Loved the superb moments between father n daughter!

he he...everyone keeps calling it a surprise cuz it was a happy ending!! 😆...am i that bad? lol...i loved Maan with his Mahi...it was too cute!! he he..glad that you liked it! 😳
JAZ