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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was beautiful, and touching... good work dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi fuppi...i finally finished reading "Where's my Girl" and it is officially one of my favorites from all your stories so far because it's exactly like what happens at our house...my dad dosen't exactly say where's my girl but he goes straight to her...everytime he comes home and my sister starts screaming baba and starts to giggle and jump all over the place...I don't know if you know this but whenever all four of us are at home or Adi's just super happy she runs in circles around the house until she falls and even when she falls, she laughs...my favorite part of your update was the ending where Mahi is back to normal again and she and Maan hug...i was just thinking that now you have two stories which focus on the father and daughter relationship but the first one was geet and her dad and this one was maan and his daughter so have you thought of doing one with geet and her child...you once before already told me about this one idea that you had that focused on geet and her child and that's why i asked...i hope you remember the idea i'm talking about but i don't want to put the idea here just incase you do make it into a story then it might spoil it for someone who reads my comment but why would anyone read my comment...i'm such a hypocrite because i read other people's comments...anyway...i still need to comment on rememberance part 2, You & I Collide Part 16, Beetein Laamhe Prolouge, and your two new teasers which i will get started on right now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowergirl_O

Hi fuppi...i finally finished reading "Where's my Girl" and it is officially one of my favorites from all your stories so far because it's exactly like what happens at our house...my dad dosen't exactly say where's my girl but he goes straight to her i think we all go straight for her!! lol...she's like the heart of the family now!! cant imagine life w/out her at this point!! ...everytime he comes home and my sister starts screaming baba and starts to giggle and jump all over the place...I don't know if you know this but whenever all four of us are at home or Adi's just super happy she runs in circles around the house until she falls and even when she falls, she laughs... really...lmfao!! she's so cute!! as fairooz says...chuguni!! lol...i dont know where he got that from!! my favorite part of your update was the ending where Mahi is back to normal again and she and Maan hug...i was just thinking that now you have two stories which focus on the father and daughter relationship but the first one was geet and her dad and this one was maan and his daughter so have you thought of doing one with geet and her child...you once before already told me about this one idea that you had that focused on geet and her child and that's why i asked...i hope you remember the idea i'm talking about lol...done and posted!! 😉 but i don't want to put the idea here just incase you do make it into a story then it might spoil it for someone who reads my comment but why would anyone read my comment...i'm such a hypocrite because i read other people's comments...anyway...i still need to comment on rememberance part 2, You & I Collide Part 16, Beetein Laamhe Prolouge, and your two new teasers which i will get started on right now dont know if you did those yet...guess ill find out when i check those threads!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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love father-daughter bond ❤️

specially the bathroom hide n seek game 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome dear!!
loved it soo much!!
you sure ask why i havent readed it earlyer. im sooo sorrryyy but was so bussy after summer holidays that i get barely time to do anything on if.
i looved the os!!
it just shows how good you are and what for an awesome writer you are!!
keep it up dear, and i hope one day i will have readed all your works.
love you dear,
bushra

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