OS: Where's My Girl... - Page 5

Originally posted by: mchopra

I killed them twice so i lead..one in angels errnd once in torn again..haha..so i lead...😆😆Hey bhaggu yeh fsting saal ke 12 maheene kyun nahi chalti..phir humesha haapy OS..😉 waise i am still waiting for the commnet on my os😡

i have your PM marked unread so that i can read it aaram se...so i can comment properly as well...he he...bare with me...😳

JAZ

u made us cry till end to give us happy ending...

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

ello there remember me 😃 of course 😆

after reading this OS all i could say was "aaawww" that was shooo shweet i mean the ending. lovely beginning with maan's recollection of his little mahi. n then his pain to see her suffer. the pain he felt was beautifullly penned down. so kudos to that! 👏

next i loved the way u wrote the scene between mahi n maan when he comes back from work. it reminded me of my days as my daddy's little girl its not like i am not now. even today i am his little girl but the incident about the returning from work n playing with mahi brought back rushing memories. beautiful is too small of a word for that scene but aap usse kaam chalana padega 😛 thanks...i think there is something to be said about a devoted father...something just makes them so much more hot! know what i mean...lol...im totally a daddy's girl too...i remember when i was little...i used to sit on his lap as he drove in the parking lot sometimes...lol...it was awesome!! my childhood is as colorful as it is because of what he did...taking us to the parks...to ride bikes all that...i mean...thats a childhood...not sitting at home playing on the game console...

the sickness incident was brilliantly penned down. again it reminded of the days when i used to be sick, my dad was the one who used to take most of his days off to take care of me. i was a very sick child. once a month major sickness n twice a week fever, cough, and cold that was my routine yet my dad was the one who used to patiently take care of me. as we grew up...my brother was the sicker one...always had a cold, allergies or something...and not that my dad didnt care...it was just so common...but when i got sick...or even now when i get sick...dad makes me soup...and goes out of his way more for me...my brother gets so jealous!! eh eh...

THANK U FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL (again sorry to repeat the word but i am running out of words here 😕) OS n special thanks for making it happy ending😉 😆 (i am really going to tease u one on the happy ending part jus coz i hate sad other otherwise endings. no i am not asking u to write something always with happy ending its just that i am going to tease u for it. would u mind? 🤔) lol...tease away...everyone else is...saying that im not my usual self cuz im so happy happy...even im starting to creep myself out...ha ha...😛

love,

Madhu

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved it!! So frightning and sweet as the same time! I like your happy OSs. :)

frightening!! awesome!! i was waiting for my writing to be frightening one day...meaning i was able to portray the emotions of the scared parent to the readers! u totally just made my day!! he he

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

oye! what do you mean not "HappY"...😡...Maneet are happily married...Mahi had a crisis but over came...Maan had his little girl back...happy and smiling mind you! and you say NOT HAPPY! 😲...just you wait...next week...Babaji ki sau...im gonna make you all cry! and ill tell them its courtesy of YOU!! *hmph*
JAZ