OS: Where's My Girl... - Page 8

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Reserved :P

Acha me is back 😆
Yaar im truly amazed by your writing skills. 👏 😳
Its so beautifully written 👏 haw Humi!! commenting on another OS?!? 😲 Haan yaar dil agaya tha ispar😆...am in the twilight zone or what? 😉 Yaar u are the star in my dark night 😉...j/k...glad you enjoyed it luv!! and ps i cant get over the vm! i watched it so many times and i keep showing everyone!! 😆 Aww thankoo yaar, i'm so gald that u loved it that much, have to reply back to ur lovely comment 😳😃

Yaar only YOU can make me emotional.
Stop your emosional attyachar with me yaar 😆 hey...at least this emotional coaster was happy in the end 😉 True 😆 that's why i read it 😛

Yet cant blame you since u made a hapoy ending. Or should i say a cute ending. 😳 thank you! 😃

Ok lets get into details.
Loved the way you accurately described the disease 👏 lol..i felt at some point maybe i went too much into detail but i love medicine...i cant help it! 😆 I thought so too that u love medicine 😆, but it was damn interesting, coz it was very well described, got me hooked to it 😳😃
Poor Mahi. She had to suffer a lot
Yaar yahan se yaad aya. Do u by any chance do medical studies. Coz many of your ff or os includes diseases that are so well described and diagnosticed 😃 im in the medical field...hospital administrator-ish (for now ...some shake ups coming maybe pray for me) Definitely yaar will pray for you 🤗...but medicine is my passion...i love it!! i love all medical shows...i love researching diseases and all that...just...omg...i LOVE it!!! 😳 Aww me is proud of you 👏
2nd off topic note. How is your niece. Hope she is ok now 😊 yes...mashAllah...she is doing fabulous...being the spoiled little brat that she is...and we love it! 😃 Aww Shukar Allah Hamdullilah 😃😳

Despite his important meetings. He stayed in the hospital for his girl. 👏 how could he not...its his Mahi 😳 True 😳

Loved the cute scene u wrote as flashback. Esp when Mahi peaked from the door when Maan was taking too much time to show his head. Awww loved that 😳 we used to do what with my niece when she was younger...once...she leaned in so far she fell...on the bed...but still...it was hilarious! 😆 Aww too cute 😆

The part when the 2 nurses removed the mucus ( is that what u wrote. Lemme check lol ) was heart wrenching.
You depicted Maan's helplessness so amazingly. 👏 yes it was mucus...lol...😆 Hehe by reading ur FF and OS my knowledge is growing 😆

The ending was a great relief. Maan and mahi moement was a pure kodak moment.
Mahi kissing his cheek and touching him with her tiny hands. Awww. 😳 this Mahi moment totally redefines Mahi Moments as we know it? kyun? 😆...this is so much cuter!! he he Totally agree 😃

You are amazing Jaz. 😃 Truly amazing.

Just like " just ordinary " ( i still have to comment on
Btw lol ) you manage to write such beautiful stories out of small words or experience that happens with you. he he...thanks luv!! i appreciate the kind words and the comments (wow...how formal was that )...chi..but thank you! I LOVE YOU!! 😳 and jaldi se comment on just ordinary...😉 dont worry without being formal will leave my feelings about it ( feelings better than comments na 😆😉 )

Keep up your great work jani.

Sad Os nahiiin. Do u want a sad VM again or what?? 😆 aare...sure...why not...the story im working on now...i have the perfect scene in mind because it fits perfectly!! let me do the OS...then we'll talk...of course...feel free to do a happy happy vm based on my os's too!! 😆
Lol ok then post it soon coz after mid sept Humi is gonna disappear for a whole year, thanks to studies Hehe why not on "Teri Bindiya Re" 😉

Love ya girl 😃 you too!! 🤗

Humera. *hugz*

2nd quote :

]Ok since im replying through my phone. Editing the long post i made is a task. Will make a fresh post lol. lol...i was like wait...why new post..but get ya totally get ya!! 😛
Now i'm replying from my comp, coz double quoting was out of the question from my phone 😆
It was indeed a mucus. Man that was a horrendous scene :s. The nurse didnt show any pity :o they cant naa...they have to be like that to clear out the baby's lungs and throat or else she could choke and stop breathing and stuff 😭 I can understand yaar, thats' why i couldnt choose a medical field coz i cant handle this tough situation and i admire people who handles this eveyday 😃👏

Oh yeah forgot to mentionned that i loved when Maan "made a mad dash" to reach the 7th floor using the stairs instead of the lift. He was like getting very impatient. Liked this bechaini of a father. :) ha ha...i thought it was apt...no way MSK is about to wait for a lift while he has no idea how his baby girl is doing 😉 Yep that was definitely great 😃

Ok my phone has 3% left so me is stoping my bak bak lol. he he...my new phone eats battery like crazy! damned hi-tech phones!! 😡 Tell me about it yaar 😡

Love ya.

Humi. ;)

Originally posted by: ajenn

Beautiful update Jaz... I love this so so so much. thanks! glad you liked it!! 😃

My heart sunk to read all those suffering the poor little soul need to go thru.

She is so small for all those painful torture. i actually had fun writing all the medical drama stuff!! lol...im so bad!! 😆

Loved the way u describe the love and bonding of Maan and Mahi.

It was so adorable.. The best scene was "peek-a-boo".. U describe is so well.

U made it sound real. I would eventually visualize it. Such a cute scene... i loved that scene too...it was easy for me to see cuz we used to play with my niece like that when she was younger...the smile on her face said it all!! 😃

Maan was in such much pain to see his girl lying sick in the hospital bed.

He was missing his girl badly. I was so scared when Mahi was having breathing difficulties.

I tot it might take away her live. Thank god everything is fine and Mahi had recovered. Maan's girl is back in action. i couldnt kill Maan's Mahi...could i...if i did...you all would have killed me!!

Loved this update...

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Lol ok then post it soon coz after mid sept Humi is gonna disappear for a whole year, thanks to studies Hehe why not on "Teri Bindiya Re" 😉

😲...disappearing for 1year!! haw...nahin...tussi naa jaao!! you'll be floating around at least no? me will miss you!! and haila...teri bindiya re!! eeps!!! why not indeed!! ha ah 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

thats what im thinking too...something is wrong!! like Reya said...i think its the fasting 😲...but come on...when have i ever KILLED Maneet's child!?...ha ha...sorry...as i wrote this i realized i did...in "New Hope"...when Geet goes to take an exam and comes back to find her son died in an accident...😆..m.y bad...i forgot...wow...im really heartless arent i? 😲

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

he he...everyone keeps calling it a surprise cuz it was a happy ending!! 😆...am i that bad? lol...i loved Maan with his Mahi...it was too cute!! he he..glad that you liked it! 😳
JAZ