OS: Where's My Girl... - Page 3

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

and i am here too...full on stalker mode 😃 i saw that!! you too like guli...my staker via phone...reserved your spots asap!! 😆

edited: i saved this one for the last cause u told me i would like it because it was going to senti types...and i think i made a good choice... did i...i said to read it last...oh wait...cuz i put it on the PM list last? kk...i see your logic...though it wasnt mine...im happy it worked out for you! 😛

The story started how Maan loved Mahi to bits and how she completed his day...and then Geet tells him how is not so well...and i swear to god...my heart sunk...i was like "please don't kill her Jazzy, please don't kill her." 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣...oh man...tauba tauba...no way...how could i kill such a cutie!! have i ever killed a Maneet baby? hmm...dont think so...i mean...yes i've shown miscarriages...but those dont really count...ive never actually KILLED a living child they've had...i think if i did that..you all would KILL ME!! 😲

And i was reading in fear of unhappy ending as Mahi was admitted and was going through the treatment...poor little baby...the things she had to go through😭 its so sad naa! i was just thinking about the parents that really have to see their babies like that in PICU and all...heart breaking!! 🥺

But then all was well when Mahi recovered and i was like 😃...thank god...i breathed a sigh of relief..we got another happy ending ...i swear it must be the fasting that making you all nicee..😆 im telling you thats it!! this roza is taking all my evil painful thoughts and making them happy...not cool!!

Loved it...it was sweet and adorable...and the best part was it had a happy ending 😃 thanks!😳

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

Such a cute OS though it started off sadly, I can't even imagine a baby sick. Oh poor Mahi :( I'm glad she recovered. And Jaz you better keep up the happy OS's, I have my eye on you...

lol...keep your eye on me...no problem...but i think the happy happy thing is out of my system...i had this pending or like 2 months so decided to finish it off before going into sadness...hopefully!! by next week ill be back to my old self!! 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: -pixie-

This was so lovely! It was quite heart breaking- So this doesnt count as a Happy OS, lady! Ok Mahi is still alive- knowing you, thats concession enough!

Loved it, Jaz!

oye! what do you mean not "HappY"...😡...Maneet are happily married...Mahi had a crisis but over came...Maan had his little girl back...happy and smiling mind you! and you say NOT HAPPY! 😲...just you wait...next week...Babaji ki sau...im gonna make you all cry! and ill tell them its courtesy of YOU!! *hmph*
JAZ

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Beautiful OS
Luvd it xx
Awww luv maan and mahi'z relationship
So glad dat mahi got better
Poor maan couldn't see his daughter in any kind of pain but he was helpless as it was for her own good

awesome work!! :D xx

glad you liked Maan and Mahi...the whole story was about father and daughter...thats why i put so little of Geet in there...😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: mrk_1

awsome yaar..for a sec , i thought maneet gonna loose her !!

i dont know from where you dig out these ideas !!

brilliant !!

🤣🤣🤣🤣 you too...sheesh...why did everyone think i was going to kill the baby!! 😲

JAZ

Originally posted by: bansipatel

Beautiful Jaz...simply beautiful...👏 👏 👏 👏
OMG i loved it so much..!!! aww...thanks! 😳
oh god poor baby had to go thru so much wen she is so young...my heart winced in pain seeing her bundled up with those things hooked up...the pipes n all...ok m bad at describing the equipments used there..🤢 it was heartbreaking no? i feel so bad for parents that have to live through that!! i cant even imagine!! 😭
Mahi was in pain but maan was in double pain seeing his girl lying in the hospital bed..he cud not help her out of the pain she was going thru...he simply cud not do nything cz that was not in his hands n he was missing his girl cz wen she was recovering she wud not be herself n that wud shatter maan as he was used to seeing her smiling wen he came home from work...he wud get the world's best smile n giggles from his angel of his life..!! thats the hard part about parenting...sometimes no matter how much you want to help when your baby is in pain...its just not possible because of circumstances...i mean...im a bua.massi and when my nieces/nephews get sick...i feel so bad for them!!
fathers can not simply see their daughters in pain... they say that girls are more close to their fathers then their mothers...here maan n mahi were just awesome...u described the pain so well..what mahi was going thru n maan too n geet too of course...i cud imagine mahi giggling all the while wen maan used to play with her "peek-a-boo"...choo chweet..!!😳 😳 😳 i love father daughter relationships simply because im a daddy's little girl as well...😃
Tremendously beautifully marvelously splendidly written Jaz..👏 👏
awesome...awesome...awesome...!!
loved it to the core yaar..!!😳 😳 😳
Jaz u write so well man...👏
loved it alot..!! thanks luv!! glad you enjoyed it!! 😳

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Reserved :P

Acha me is back 😆
Yaar im truly amazed by your writing skills. 👏 😳
Its so beautifully written 👏 haw Humi!! commenting on another OS?!? 😲...am in the twilight zone or what? 😉...j/k...glad you enjoyed it luv!! and ps i cant get over the vm! i watched it so many times and i keep showing everyone!! 😆

Yaar only YOU can make me emotional.
Stop your emosional attyachar with me yaar 😆 hey...at least this emotional coaster was happy in the end 😉

Yet cant blame you since u made a hapoy ending. Or should i say a cute ending. 😳 thank you! 😃

Ok lets get into details.
Loved the way you accurately described the disease 👏 lol..i felt at some point maybe i went too much into detail but i love medicine...i cant help it! 😆
Poor Mahi. She had to suffer a lot
Yaar yahan se yaad aya. Do u by any chance do medical studies. Coz many of your ff or os includes diseases that are so well described and diagnosticed 😃 im in the medical field...hospital administrator-ish (for now ...some shake ups coming maybe pray for me) ...but medicine is my passion...i love it!! i love all medical shows...i love researching diseases and all that...just...omg...i LOVE it!!! 😳
2nd off topic note. How is your niece. Hope she is ok now 😊 yes...mashAllah...she is doing fabulous...being the spoiled little brat that she is...and we love it! 😃

Despite his important meetings. He stayed in the hospital for his girl. 👏 how could he not...its his Mahi 😳

Loved the cute scene u wrote as flashback. Esp when Mahi peaked from the door when Maan was taking too much time to show his head. Awww loved that 😳 we used to do what with my niece when she was younger...once...she leaned in so far she fell...on the bed...but still...it was hilarious! 😆

The part when the 2 nurses removed the mucus ( is that what u wrote. Lemme check lol ) was heart wrenching.
You depicted Maan's helplessness so amazingly. 👏 yes it was mucus...lol...😆

The ending was a great relief. Maan and mahi moement was a pure kodak moment.
Mahi kissing his cheek and touching him with her tiny hands. Awww. 😳 this Mahi moment totally redefines Mahi Moments as we know it? kyun? 😆...this is so much cuter!! he he

You are amazing Jaz. 😃 Truly amazing.

Just like " just ordinary " ( i still have to comment on
Btw lol ) you manage to write such beautiful stories out of small words or experience that happens with you. he he...thanks luv!! i appreciate the kind words and the comments (wow...how formal was that )...chi..but thank you! I LOVE YOU!! 😳 and jaldi se comment on just ordinary...😉

Keep up your great work jani.

Sad Os nahiiin. Do u want a sad VM again or what?? 😆 aare...sure...why not...the story im working on now...i have the perfect scene in mind because it fits perfectly!! let me do the OS...then we'll talk...of course...feel free to do a happy happy vm based on my os's too!! 😆

Love ya girl 😃 you too!! 🤗

Humera. *hugz*

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Ok since im replying through my phone. Editing the long post i made is a task. Will make a fresh post lol. lol...i was like wait...why new post..but get ya totally get ya!! 😛

It was indeed a mucus. Man that was a horrendous scene :s. The nurse didnt show any pity :o they cant naa...they have to be like that to clear out the baby's lungs and throat or else she could choke and stop breathing and stuff 😭

Oh yeah forgot to mentionned that i loved when Maan "made a mad dash" to reach the 7th floor using the stairs instead of the lift. He was like getting very impatient. Liked this bechaini of a father. :) ha ha...i thought it was apt...no way MSK is about to wait for a lift while he has no idea how his baby girl is doing 😉

Ok my phone has 3% left so me is stoping my bak bak lol. he he...my new phone eats battery like crazy! damned hi-tech phones!! 😡

Love ya.

Humi. ;)

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

ok...second week in a row with a happy os...bleh! 🤢 ...ive gotta get back to what im known for!! 😈

Actually I was also thinking along the same lines..Jaz with another happy OS??? WTH ?? yeh sudhar gayi kya??? then I read your note and that indeed burst my bubble..you are wicked ,Jaz! but brilliant and amazing😊 Loved the OS!!

lol...see...you know its something when even readers are thinking the same as you are!! 🤣...but glad you liked the OS...and me...sudhar jaungi!! he eh...dont you all wish!! 😉

JAZ