OS: Just Ordinary

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Beautiful story. An ordinary boy and girl falling in love, but your writing made it extraordinary. Loved it.

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

it was ordinarily awesome n one of the best os i have ever read...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wow Jazz...only you can do this...have such a thought and turn it into a beautiful set of words😃 your stories are like self-realisations for me... i always have something to learn or ponder about in life after i read your OS - s...

It was a great story... each one of our lives have an extraordinary tale to tell...its just that we recognise it as ordinary and mundane...if each one of us realised that we are special, life and the world around us would be far more beautiful.

You bring tears to my eyes with your one shots...bravo girl...my expectation from you goes on increasing with each of your stories and you never disappoint me..

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

ohhh...this is what i have been waiting for...saving the best for last...

gonna read this after You and I... 😃

edited: i was all smiles for this one too 😊...

i don't know what to say exactly except this whole OS was just beautiful...describing ordinary events that are likely to happen to most people but they were special for Maan and Geet because they shared it with each other...you proved what you had set out to do...and u have no idea how happy u have made me 😃

And whenever Geet asked the question of "why me?", every time i would think of one of the most common lines : "The beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder."

This was just beautiful and perfect...Thank you so much for giving us this piece of writing 😊

p.s i bet you made a lot of people happy with this 'happy OS' 😆

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

A beautiful story!! Nothing ordinary about it all. It was magical, special in every line I read, every word you wrote!!

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Fantabulous...i'm going to bookmark this so that i can come back to this again nd again😃...loved the way ordinary turned enchanting when you touch it!!!

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

lovely ...just amazing!!!

Beautiful & Simple OS.

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

oye jaz.. ur on a ordinary roll.. lol.. good one yaar.. i never saw life as ordinary.. waise bhi life mein sab ke saath kuch na kuch not so ordianry hota hai.. lol.. more os missy..

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi Jaz...u finally updated! Wow...second to comment. Thanks 4 da pm n wonderful surprise tht is this OS. Loved the OS...Superbly written! U r rite ... ordinary is extraordinary! Its beautiful! Its many things! Its just the way u look @ it ! Loved ur interpretation of ordinary! Maan loved Geet for who she is, what she is and what she makes him! Their love is what they made of it. Ordinary can mean anything bt ordinary! Seems silly rite! Love the way u write. Maan is so protective of his Geet! He invited her to the prom. Waht Geet n others see as ordinary he sees it differently! What ppl think is typical n ordinary , they see as something else. They c beyond that! Thanks for an amazing OS! 😉

glad you enjoyed it!! i just had to get it out of my system...i couldnt believe what that one person was saying...i was like...what is wrong with ordinary? 😉...and that was the whole point of the story...that what one calls ordinary is something spectacular for others😳

JAZ