M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 & - Page 12

Originally posted by: fourleafclover

It was a fitting end to the stunning OS that u wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U hardly seem a novice writer,i was amazed to hear it,do warite some other things now that this is over🤗

And wat do i say,whatever it wud b less...The 'vengeful' geet was awsuum,n wat a way to take revenge!!!!!!!!!!!😆

Wat is gud to see s geet completely dominating maan for once n maan at her mercy😉 but denevrything endedd wid a sweet note

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: jasraj123

mona it was sooo awesome and hottt. omg geet accomplished her mission but poor maan had to go through alot of toruture😉😉😆. hayeee my dil goes for him but finally she made him relize that what he said😆.

thanks for pm.

it was brilliantly written and was reallly really good👏

Originally posted by: tanya94

hey...uve yet again done a great job...😊...well i find nothing to critisize as uve really written well and reading ur os was very enjoyable...ya i can tell u wat was diff in ur os and wat i liked most about it...well i liked the fact that we got to see geets passion as usually we get to see maan in a passionate mood and geet responding to him.this time geet initiating it was really nice .then ireally really love to see a jealous maan and i got to see it.so i guess ur mission of writing an awesome os has been accomplished.u should try many more missions like this and i would always love to be a part of them.😛

Originally posted by: rs12345

awesome and great..

just now only i read the all parts

pls add me to u r pm list

Originally posted by: mehraan

hmmm mona...wat can i say yaar??im bowled over by ur writing...i dnt hve anythng 2 criticize..it was mre than perfect!!i really enjoyed reading ur OS as i got 2 visualize how wud geet be as a seductress...n i loved each n every dialogue tat u had penned 4 her...she was bold n passionate completely the opposite of geet vich v see...i liked her bold talk of not wearing the underw...tat also made my mind go blank 4 a sec.. jus like MAAN ...😆 i didnt xpect tat coming...😉 n had 2 read tat line thrice 2 swallow it hard, let it sink in my mind...the whole OS had the detailed lovemaking vich i dnt get 2 read in any SS..tat makes it stand apart 4 me ...

mona thanx 4 writing it so brilliantly n believe me im goin 2 read tis over n over agn unless n until i dnt get ur other OS cming up...😉

Originally posted by: am_sweet_pari

Originally posted by: -Mayu-

Mona di🤗

I am completely surrendered in your story!😳

What an Is; magnificent; briliantly written emotions👏👏

Kudos you rock gal⭐️⭐️

I loved this OS more because yours was the first in whcih Maan was under Geet's control and I enjoyed every word of it! And the last aprt made me blush☺️☺️ I can so imagine Maaneet like that😍😍

Kash CVz meri wish poori karde:")

So sorry for the late reply! Was busy with completions etc; and then thank you for the OS!

PS- I want you to write more!

Love And Luck

Mayuuu

Originally posted by: zunaiba5

👍🏼😊👏

Very Nice ...Fabulous,Fantastic,Wow...

I really enjoyed reading it.:)

Originally posted by: drdee142

OMG Mona, you are killing me, I got your PM and very eagerly started reading it in the office, can you imagine my condition, I can hardly breathe. I read all the parts together, thank God for small mercies I wouldn't be able to take the suspense or not reading it all.

I only hope no one walks into my office or I won't be able to utter a single coherent sentence.

I really truly loved it, I visualized the whole scene while reading and quite graphically I must admit ☺️ Your description was so vivid that I couldn't help but get lost in their world.

I loved that you showed Geet take the initiative, loved to see Maan dance like a puppet to her music.

Here's a big hug from me 🤗 and BTW I still can't breathe properly and my face is all red and flushed ☺️

OK my last comment in Marathi; "Tujhi OS vachoon majhi ashi haalat zaali aahe ki kai bolu, ghari jaaon parath vachnar aahe. Tu aata laukar doosri OS livaila shuruvat kar, mala vachnyachi ghai zali aahe. Tu pharach chan lihite, me aata diwas bhar thonda var ek motthi smile gehoon phirnar aahe. Me aaj Mantra Mukhth zaali" 😉