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@drdee142

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe
OMG Dee! Who told you to read it in the office?! 😲 Hope you had AC over there...and ice-cold water. 😆

I'm glad you liked my way of writing and that you could imagine everything vividly. That was my goal((for everyone). The big bonus is that you were blusing and had some breathing trouble. 😆

Ok, that was not nice writing in Marathi. I know many languages but Marathi is not one of them. Hmm, let me see...the OS had an effect on you and you don't know how to say it...you want me to write another one...err...the rest I don't get it. 😕 But tell me did I guess some of it right? 😕

Ok darling, it translates to Reading your OS had such an effect on me that I can't describe, went home and read it again. Please start writing another OS soon, I impatient to read you next one. You really write very well, I've been walkng around the whole day with a big smile on my face 😆 I'm totally mesmerized by this.

For some reason I thought you were Maharashtrian, me being stupid again and not checking with you. BTW from which place are you 😊 Oh and Mona, you guessed a lot of it right 🤗

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

@dee. What in the world made you think I was Maharashtrian? I'm not even Indian. 😆 My parents are from Punjab Pakistan however I'm born and raised in Sweden. Now I live in UK. Complicated? Yup! 😃

Yay! I guessed a lot of it right. However thanks for the translation and oh my...the OS had some effect on you. 😆

I will continue to write but I think the next one will not be as...err...x-rated as this one.

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
fabulous OS

Thanks! 😳

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
this geet was really BOLD!☺️

Yup! I know. 😆

She was truly a 'sherni'.

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: maneet1985
that was hot!!!

Thanks!

Hopefully I steamed up a few windows. 😆

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: ..Saba..
sure intrested : )

greatt writer u are and i loved it mona .. too gud <3

Thanks for being interested Saba! 🤗

If you think I'm a great writer then I humbly accept the compliment. 😳

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: sree10
Write more please. You are good.

Hopefully I will write more. Thanks for the encouragement! 🤗

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: soni4eva
just read ur os it iz awsome
u shud rite more

Another one who says I should write more? 😲 My oh my the pressure! 😆

Thanks for reading it and finding it awsome! 🤗

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: mansi95
awesome update mona aunt🤗..i am spellbound...truly magical😍😍.. that was a very passionate and torrid update☺️☺️☺️i am hyperventilating😉omg... u have virtually killed me with this one...🤢🤢🤢so at last the mission is accomplished...loved the naughty and dominating geet unlike what we see everyday😆😆poor maan dunno how did he control himself??😈

you have described each moment and emotion so distinctly that i seem to be visualizing it😳😳i am still out of breath...😆i will better take sum rest to regain my senses and read the update again thoroughly...☺️i hope there was still a continuation...but alas!!!it came to an end

please do write an ff because you are truly capable of that.😳i wish to read more and more updates from your side.

p.s: aunt now you can't call me a child..because you yourself have pmed me this update😆😆😆so at last i am free from this baccha thing and all😆😆

Nope can't call you bacha anymore when I now have helped you to become a woman. 😆 But you are still my darling niece! 🤗

Good to know you could visualize everything and understanding from your reaction you did it quite vividly.

And still you want a continuation?! How corrupted do you want to get? 😲 😆

You are one of many who have liked a dominant Geet and I really appreciate that. I wanted to show her in a different avatar and seem to have succeed.

Writing an FF? Don't you need a lot of patience for writing one? 😆 I don't think it can work as patience and me are bitter enemies. 😆😆😆 Howver thanks for the encouragement. 🤗

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: tere_liye_10
A novice Writer? R U mad?😕
That was amazing!!!!!

U write better than anyone i know nd hus FF's i've read nd i've read ALOT😳

I thot i was pretty gud but u completely floored me wid this!!!😳👏👏

U shud Defo Write FF's😊

Im still Blushing😳😳😳

It was soo Sweeet,Romantic,Passionate,What we expect 4m Maaneet😆😉

I wish this is shown in Real😊😛

Sara xx😊

Are you calling me mad? No seriously I'm new to writing. I have previously written silly little poems here and there but a full fledged story? Not since I was a kid and that was many many years ago when mullets still were highest fashion. 😆

Wow! You think I'm a better writer than you...wow that means a lot coming from you. 😳 Btw Sara how do you manage to write so many FF's at the same time? I really admire that because personally I can only focus on writing one thing at a time.

Writing an FF, as written in another post, I don't have the patience nor do I think I'm ready for it. Maybe in the future...