M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &

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Saba Siddique

@Sabaah..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

sure intrested : )

greatt writer u are and i loved it mona .. too gud <3

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Write more please. You are good.

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

just read ur os it iz awsome

u shud rite more

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-MansiKohli-

@-MansiKohli-

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

awesome update mona aunt🤗..i am spellbound...truly magical😍😍.. that was a very passionate and torrid update☺️☺️☺️i am hyperventilating😉omg... u have virtually killed me with this one...🤢🤢🤢so at last the mission is accomplished...loved the naughty and dominating geet unlike what we see everyday😆😆poor maan dunno how did he control himself??😈

you have described each moment and emotion so distinctly that i seem to be visualizing it😳😳i am still out of breath...😆i will better take sum rest to regain my senses and read the update again thoroughly...☺️i hope there was still a continuation...but alas!!!it came to an end

please do write an ff because you are truly capable of that.😳i wish to read more and more updates from your side.

p.s: aunt now you can't call me a child..because you yourself have pmed me this update😆😆😆so at last i am free from this baccha thing and all😆😆

Edited by mansi95 - 14 years ago

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Sara

@-Saruu-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

A novice Writer? R U mad?😕

That was amazing!!!!!

U write better than anyone i know nd hus FF's i've read nd i've read ALOT😳

I thot i was pretty gud but u completely floored me wid this!!!😳👏👏

U shud Defo Write FF's😊

Im still Blushing😳😳😳

It was soo Sweeet,Romantic,Passionate,What we expect 4m Maaneet😆😉

I wish this is shown in Real😊😛

Sara xx😊

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

hiii

awesome os

loved it

loved maaneet

geet sooo different

loved da ending

sooo hottt

plz do pm me if u write more

thanksss

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: riza792
🤢...I'm breathless , almost dead after that explosive session!
I love Sherni Geet and Helpless Maan!😍😍😍

That was sooo☺️...😍🤢🤢

You want negative points?? I cant find any!😕

I always told you that you'll turn out to be an awesome writer👏...and you are..much more than we expected! Muuuaaah!!

Write more!!😍😍😍

OMG! I almost killed you! 😆 Yay!!!! Do you know how difficult it is to please you? No no no not 'that way'...😲🤣...I mean with the writing. 😆 Your tolerance level is quite high in certain areas.

😆

I would like thank you extra much as you have been one of my biggest supporter all the way through. First pushing me to write more and then always beimg the first one to write your comments after every update. 🤗 Love you darling!

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: mechantefille
babe ur anything but a novice writer. that was fantastic and definitely worth the wait!

Thanks Amruta! 😳

I'm so happy that you found the update worth the wait. 🤗

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hey dear...hot n passionate last update!! Loved the update...wonderful end to ur OS! Looking forward to anything tha u write...do pm wen u do. 😊 U r a brilliant writer! Please do write something soon.

I'm a brilliant writer?! 😲 And this is only my second OS. 😳 Wow! Thanks for saying that. 😳

So pleased to know that you liked the ending and yes whenever I write more I will try to remember to pm you. But don't hope to much for it...I have a terrible memory so sorry in advance. 😆