M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &

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@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Thanks for the lovely comments! 🤗

I promise I will reply to all of you. This time individually.😃

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

omg,,,,,wht a sensual hot end,u r just fab.very well written,,,,me half dead here,u r too gud writer.keep writing sch os...god bless u.

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i loved the grand finale!!!!!!!!!!...that jet was awesome...and the ride was even better😉...you did a fantastic job writing that love making scene...i know you were thinking it over in your favorite place to come up with ideas...and let me tell you...it worked...you wrote it all out perfectly...i could visualize it ...as if you had painted a picture...mona i hope to read a lot more from you😳

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anky_1205

@anky_1205

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

OMG...Great. Loved it, cannot imagine Maan being helpless...lol

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Julie

@JULIEL

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

WOW!!! What a hot and passionate update!! Loved it!! Thanks for the PM!!

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soma kazmi

@somakazmi

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

very hot and awesome☺️...
congo on completing your first os...
tnx 4 pm and if u write more dont forget 2 pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Maya_P

@Maya_P

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

oh my god Mona...i was right the climax was an explosion...Geet was one hell of Sherni here...poor Maan.or should i say lucky Maan...lol...u did a fantastic job...i loved the fact that it was short and sweet...and ur way of writing is also very neat although is naughty...horse riding in jet...very interesting...btw so happy that u didn't give up on the english dialogues...pls don't in future also,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting for ur next OS

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Shalini

@shalini01

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

oh my word...that was 😍 ☺️

loved it, do continue writing soon.

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maaneetfanatic

@maaneetfanatic

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

OMG MUJAI SHARAM AA RAHI HAI😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 I dont have any words to describe how i feel after reading this😳😳😳😳😳😳 How can u write such rated X things and not blush...wow give u 👍🏼 a thumbs up for that!!! fantastic