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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: mandymore
omg,,,,,wht a sensual hot end,u r just fab.very well written,,,,me half dead here,u r too gud writer.keep writing sch os...god bless u.

Thanks for all the compliments! 🤗 And hopefully I will continue to write.

God bless me? Thanks but...err...I think all the doors of hell are standing wide open for me after writing this OS.🤣 I'm so dead. 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: hopehot
update

Aww, thanks for liking the update! 🤗

I love that word. It's so 2-in-1...say one and get the second one for free. 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: undisclosed

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i loved the grand finale!!!!!!!!!!...that jet was awesome...and the ride was even better😉...you did a fantastic job writing that love making scene...i know you were thinking it over in your favorite place to come up with ideas...and let me tell you...it worked...you wrote it all out perfectly...i could visualize it ...as if you had painted a picture...mona i hope to read a lot more from you😳

Oh my my! Big applause from Sergeant. Thanks!

You are also mentioning that you could visualize what I wrote and that makes me so happy because you, dear Syl, is such a beautiful writer. You leave me speachless.

Well as you were aware off I was suffering from writer's block and that very special place helped me to unblock things. 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: anky_1205
OMG...Great. Loved it, cannot imagine Maan being helpless...lol

Thanks for loving it! 🤗

I can completely imagine Maan being helpless...and I like it! ☺️ 😆

If you haven't figured out yet but I'm all for girl-power.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: JULIEL
WOW!!! What a hot and passionate update!! Loved it!! Thanks for the PM!!

Thanks for loving my update and OS! 😳 And you are welcome for the PM! 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: somakazmi
very hot and awesome☺️...
congo on completing your first os...
tnx 4 pm and if u write more dont forget 2 pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

I'm happy you liked it and that I made you blush. 😆 FYI this is my 2nd OS and not the first. 😳

About pm...*sigh*...when I write more then we will see. Can't guarantee anything because I really have poor memory. 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Maya_P
oh my god Mona...i was right the climax was an explosion...Geet was one hell of Sherni here...poor Maan.or should i say lucky Maan...lol...u did a fantastic job...i loved the fact that it was short and sweet...and ur way of writing is also very neat although is naughty...horse riding in jet...very interesting...btw so happy that u didn't give up on the english dialogues...pls don't in future also,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting for ur next OS

Yup it was an explosion alright! 😆 You guessed it right but I couldn't reveal that to you, could I? 😃

Thanks for the compliments Prema and I did try to keep my language as neat as possible about something that is...err...not so neat. 😆☺️ I'm not into graphic description of the deed. I think it's better when you hint rather then write it as it is. However a very difficult task to do so.

Don't you worry about the English dialogues. I will continue with them in my next OS, SS or FF whatever it will be.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: shalini01
oh my word...that was 😍 ☺️
loved it, do continue writing soon.

That was surely ghrrr! *wiggles eyebrows*

Thanks for loving my OS Shalz! 🤗 And yes I will continu to write...soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

Thanks! 🤗

Never knew one single word could hold so much power. 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic
OMG MUJAI SHARAM AA RAHI HAI😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 I dont have any words to describe how i feel after reading this😳😳😳😳😳😳 How can u write such rated X things and not blush...wow give u 👍🏼 a thumbs up for that!!! fantastic

You were blushing that much? How cute!

Beside who said I didn't blush when I was writing? My my, you have no idea. ☺️

Thanks for liking my OS! 🤗