OS: Without His Mishti

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

omggg..heart breaking...u wrote abt maan's pain so well....poor guy...really well done and loved it

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

very heart touching update
u made me emotional
n its well penned down..
hats off to u..

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namitasin

@namitasin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Its hight of emotions ,u wrote it so well ,just luved it.

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

very beautifully written....................feel sorry for Maan.................hope they in the story do something so that both Geet and the baby are fine and alive.................thanks for the pm...............

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Jaaaaazzzzzzzz 😭😭

Yaar ur writing is just beautiful, simply brought tears to my eyes 😭👏👏

Loved the way u described Maan's emotions.

all his four states.

Yaar BRILLIANT 👏👏

I was expecting Geet to come in the end, but no Jaz wants us to cry 😆

You depicted Maan's feelings perfectly.

I can imagine going through each state, from the disbelief on to his heart break

Chalo u've written Mishti, then without his Mishty, now what? With my Mishti ?😆

Joking, will be waiting for ur next OS 😉

Love,

Humera 🤗

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

OMG
It was sooo sad
But Beautifully written
Loved the way u showed maan's emotions
Awesome
Loved it

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

@ hume: yaar....according to the CV's...maan has to wait to BE WITH his misti for a while...lol...😉...vaise...i dont remember a comment for My Mishti...he he...

JAZ

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Rafia

@artisticrafia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

This was So beautifully Written...
loved it....👏👏

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Razz22

@Razz22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

this is soooo emotional! 😭

u truly rite really well!! 👏

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: jnawaz
@ hume: yaar....according to the CV's...maan has to wait to BE WITH his misti for a while...lol...😉...vaise...i dont remember a comment for My Mishti...he he...

JAZ

Yeah unfortunately Maan has to wait, so do we 😆

O teri, how come? i did comment yaar 😲

Waise bhi u know that i loved ur writing, to acha comment hi chora hoga 😆 dont worry 😉

How was ur 1st day at work hun ?😊

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