OS: Without His Mishti

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

heartbreaking. poor maan. and you did a much better job than the CVs in explaining where he is coming from. great one-shot.

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Jaz, that was heart wrenching....poor maan :( thanx for the beautiful OS.

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

No Jaz, I cant be mad at him - to answer your question. Not anymore. Its amazing how you always leave me speechless. Every single time...

I felt like crying when I finished reading. For ever doubting him. You captured Maan's emotions so beautifully...so perfectly. I love you Jaz😊

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

he he...told you!! maan se toh hum gussa reh hi nahin sakte!! ha ha.love ya too =)
JAZ

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DancinFireflies

@DancinFireflies

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Jaz u r amazing👏... you did it again... i'm crying...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 i dont have words so all m gonna say is standing ovation to u girl...

Edited by aiyana - 14 years ago

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Ilovemsk

@Ilovemsk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Awesome.....
Loved all the feelings and everything!!
Lovelllyyyingg written lol
Much luv to jazz

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raman1921

@raman1921

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Kya bolun yar amazing very well said feel bad for both but more for mann bechara kya kare ek tarf geet ka promise aur doosri taraf love of his life he can't bear to see tears in geet eyes aur geet toh as always says things wutout thinking hope evthing goes fine betwenn manneet. Mann fear of loosing her making him crazy he can't even live second without her.

Raman

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sejal1986

@sejal1986

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Hey Jinwaz, again you did the magic, I swear, you are amazing at creating magic, whenever I read your FF or OS, I forget everything and I feel that this should just continue, I feel like, if you are in CVs, you could describe Maan's pain better than those people, Standing Ovation to you for all your FF and OS, I am fan of your writing.

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Are yaar... you made me cry! 😭

You greatly expressed every thought that must've gone through Maan's head.. especially right after their fight.. and especially on his trip to Chandigardh. He must have gone through hell right after that.. and you portrayed it so beautifully.

But I hope against all odds that he would not be in this predicament! Let their love be stronger and their will win at the end!