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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

my gosh you how you have managed to captured his agony and turn it into gut wrenching pain that we experience in OUR hearts is mind blowing. i think this is one of your best works. kudos!

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Kads

@Kadds02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

You made me cry!!
Awesome post!!

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

aww another well written OS on maaneet

so touching and loved the way you described maan's emotions

all those memories with geet were really sweet

keep up the awesome writing!

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

THATS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!❤️ Listen if u hav a pm list pls add me into it. If u dunt hav 1 create one NOW, n put my name on top of de list. 😃

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annu dhami

@annu_825

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

that was really beautiful
absolutely heart-wrenching
wow

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Hasina

@kellz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

i totally imagined maan really doing this in todays episode
but he never showed :(

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Hiiiiii
Beautiful os
Loved it
It's great 2 c maans pov
Soooooo sad
Thanks 4 sharing
Thanks 4 da pm

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prab_rockinn

@prab_rockinn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Love it Jaz!!! Maan's feelings explained in the best way!!!

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soma kazmi

@somakazmi

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

nicely written darling..............
pm me the if you write more..............

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Jaz 🤗.......another awesome OS.👏......it is simply amazing how u captured Maan's feelings.....the way u write makes everything so real......could feel his pain and anguish so clearly.......u rock my dear......plz continue writing.....love you...TC 😊

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