FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET - CHAPTER 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Everybody……

First and Foremost I'm very sorry to make u all wait for my post………

Today I am back with THE LONG LONG AWAITED Moments OF MAANEET (MAANEETS HONEY MOON)……

~POINT TO BE NOTED~

The Post under by name "FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET "Is NOT A Prediction FOR NEXT EPISODE ……..NOR INTENDED TO HURT ANYONES FEELINGS…..HAVE FUN……..

I Welcome You, Who Are All Really Wants To See My Vision OF Maaneet Romantic Moments…..And WISHES To See The Intense Romance, Cute Fights, Matured Love….etc etc Between Maaneet In Future……Episodes….(HOPE GEET TEAM WOULD NOTICE THIS POST)


Before I start my take, I Want U All To Read The WONDERFUL Poems Written By Our Beloved Friend ALICE JERRY urf ALICE WAKA WAKA……on MAANEET

Here goes ……

ONE DAY GEET DOES NOT COME TO INDIAN PAINT...
BECHAARA MAAN WRITES HIS FEELINGS TOWARDS THIS GREAT COMPANY ...


Oh dear Geet ! you have left me all alone...
with this he/she Maanisha near to my bone .

Staying in this company Indian Paintis no better than Dev crying with his special faint !

For our new CEO Mr . Raliya Ram
I can only say hey ! bhagwaan .. Jai Sri Ram ....

All these Namoonas moving here and there
And that too so large in number for me to bear

Having these talented Clowns
I am sure no one would go with a frown

If I see Romeo near you with a flower
He will surely make me exercise my very effective J Power

That Bhramchaari Pandeyji whom I can no longer stand
along with his long pure hindi with I do not understand

Company workers like them are very very few
Because when given some work all are ready with excuses totally new

There is almost nothing which I fear
Except surviving with them over here...


I want you to come back to me real fast
because I want to tell you about my past
and when I finish giving you a lecture on my History
I will sit back happily seeing you solve the Mystery !


Funny Romantic touch by Alice :
Although I miss Sasha , Tasha and Pinki very badly
But I will stay here because i love you madly !!

ANOTHER ONE:

When you look me in the eyes there's no need to talk
without a word we can simply walk .
when you're with me my life is complete
thinking a minute without you i miss my heartbeat .
your dance moves are pretty funny
oh ! lord should i give you classes charging no money ?
your gaze heats me up , your touch burns my skin
and i am in fainting condition seeing you with a big grin .
you were what i call angry-young man
now i am glad to say that you are my romantically cute man .
how about spending our lives in a jungle in a den ?
and who knows we might even bang into each other up in heaven .
your anger , your love , your smile drives me insane
and makes me fall in love with you all over again .....

now with a bit of Alice's touch -
i can do Bhangra , i can do waka waka ...
i can do anything with you Maan Singh Khurana . ..

ISN'T IT HILARIOUS POEMS…….

THANK YOU AJ ….(ALICE JERRY)…FOR SHARING THIS WONDERFUL POEM…….

Let's start…..

(well week hearted read at ur own risk……)

(We are just having fun ….making weird characters funny…. At this vision….hope others don't mind…..specially DEV, ADI, NAKUL – SHASHA, TAASHA…..fans….LOL)

Present status of all in my vision:

Daadima:….Finally she is happy for maaneet …..coz they got married …..

Vicky & meera:….are planning a surprise for MAANEET…..

Nakul:….is very happy coz he met his twin brother….. birju …..now both are head cook in khurana mansion…

Adi & Pinky:……adi ….wants to take pinky for date……

NT:….she is back to india……with her criminal idea……

Dev:….he got the bail ……but who gave ???....dont know…..its suspence……..

Mr. & Mrs. Khuranat:…..after giving a visit to office they are heading to dargha......

CHAPTER 8

(maaneet dono breakfast karkey …..office jaathey hain….waha….dono ko grand welcome key saat sabbhi staffs wish karthey hain……aur usskey baad maaneet ….nijamuddin dargha main jaakey ……apni ….nahi zindagi ki shurwat keliye …..duwa mangthey hian……..aur abb mansion key taraf …..jaarahey hain……shaam hogahi hian…..its getting dark…….)

Maan:….(he is driving….and constantly starring at geet…she is sitting beside to him ….. )……(MAAHII….MAHII….is on)

Geet:….(geet noticed that maan is starring her …..smiled and said to him)……MAAN!!!!.....aap …mujhe goorna band kariey aur ……agey dekhkey!!!....gaadi chalahey…!!!!warna….!!!(she stopped ….)…

Maan:….Warna!!!.....kya geet!!!!..ah!!!!...(sudden break daaldiya….)

Geet:…..ab!!!...ha!!!...aap!!!! gaadi q rookdiya!!!!!!.....(her voice stuck …..)

Maan:….Geet!!!....main tumhey dekho tho problem hian aur naa dekho tho bhi…..problem hotha hain….(maan ……geet ko tang karney main laga hian)…..ah!!! geet!!!!...aur tumhi baatho main kya karo…..(he turned to her and asked ….)….

Geet:….Dekihey!!!....mera matlab wo !!!! nahi tha!!!!...aap kamaka…..naaraz horahey hain!!!!!.......(aagey key taraf dekhey …..kaha)

Maan:….(grabbed her shoulders ……and pulled her near )…GEET!!!!....idar dekho….. tho kya matlab tha… tumhara….. ah.!!!!...GEET!!!(wicked smile)

Geet:….maan!!! hey ….aap kya karrahey hain!!!! chodiya mujhe…..!!!!....hey hamara ghar nahi hian……kohi dehkleyga tho……kya sooacheyegey………

Maan:….GEET!!!.....tum!!.....abb…mrs. khurana ho…..miss. geet handa nahi….samji…..aur!!!..kahi bhi …..kuch bhi …..karney sey dartha nahi…hun…main..(aur paas ….geet…ko apnye paas leykey kaha…)…….KUCH bhi!!!!.(...geet ki ankhon ko dekhkey kaha)

Geet:…..ab!!...ma!!!.....daadima!!!.....intezaar karrahi hongi!!!!......abb chaley!!!!(try to break the eye lock)

Maan:…(muskurathey huwe….car ko start karliya ……)…..yes!!!!.....ur highness….!!!..

(when the car enters the mansion ……geet was sleeping… .maan ….said geet to get down …..but geet was in deep sleep…she dint heard him……maan saw her and MAHII…..MAHII…..starts……)……

Maan:…GEET!!!!.....(no use)…..(maan neechy uttar key……geet ko…..apni baaho mian utaleytha hain……..geet abhi bhi soorahi hain……..)…..(mansion key corridor main…maan geet ko leykar dheerey dheerey aarah hain….aur tabbhi …geet apna ankhey koli….)

Geet:….Maan!!!.....hey aap …..mujhe ……kaha leyjaarahey hian….(uttarney ki koshish karthi hain….per maan….ussey uttarney nahi detha hain…)…

Maan:….Geet!!!.....tum/….soorahi thi!!!!....isiliye…..!!!! ....disturb nahi …..karna…chahatha tha(geet….parey shaan hian….)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet:….Abb!!!....tho uttariye mujhe…….(sharmsey kaha)……

Maan:…(dheerey sey ussko ….uttartha hain…)….tho chaley andar……

(daadima …maaneet ki intezar karrahi hothi hain …..aur unn dono ko dekhthey hi…..)

Daadima:….Maan!!!.....aagehey !!!!aap dono!!!!...mujhe aap dono sey …..kuch baat karni thi…….!!!(tabhhi …Vicky aur meera enters….)….

Vicky:…..daadima!!!!......aapney jo ….kaam diya tha ho gaya!!!!.....flights ki tickets bhi book hogai ….(meera ….geet key paas jaakey …..)….

Meera:….chalo!!! geet!!!!....BHAABHI!!!!!.....aab….main aapki!!!!...packing main …help….!!!! Karthi hun!!!!....(maan aur geet ……dono ….confusion main….abb hey log …..kissko aur kaha beejney ki baath karrahey hains……and tabbhi maan ka cell bajtha hain
)

Maan:….Hello!!!.....yes!!!...Maan Singh Khurana speaking!!!!....(from other side……a client from other other side )

Client:….Mr.Khurana……all over world sey ….hum log mashoor builders ka conference …..main aap ko …invite karna chahathey hain…..aap india key bahut hi mashoor builders main sey ek hian…..isiliye …..theen din baad …..Chicago main….international builders ka conference hian ……humhey kushi hogi …..aap ……india ko represent karey …..tho…..aur aapkey office main memo bhi beejdiya ……I hope aap ….ko patha hoga…..

Maan:….jee!!!...mr. kapadia….it will be great honor to me….. I am glad to …represent ….my country…..

(all are looking into maan….what might be the news ….coz maan's facial expression changing constantly….specially geet is worried now)

Client:….so….mr.khurna……thanks to u……..we will get back to u …..soon with the papers …see u…..

Maan:….(cuts the call)……

Geet:….MAAN!!!....kya baat hian……aap ittney !!!!!..pareyshaan q…hain!!!!.

Daadima & Vicky:……ha!!! Maan!!! Kya baat hain…..

Maan:…(explains everything……and bit worried …no no a lot worried …about geet….coz now he must go far from geet ….for a couple of days……..)…..Daadima!!!.....hamhey jaana pareyga!!!!....per!!!!...GEET!!!!!.....(stops there ….and looks for geet….but she is nowhere…...)…….

Vicky & meera:…..Bro!!!! …humhey patha hain!!! ……..aap kissey doondrahey hain……per apkey problem ka solution hain hamarey paas…….(meera …..takes the tickets out)

Meera:…..(daadima key haat main ticket diya….aur kaha)…..maan!!! veerji!!!!.....aap dono ko ….HONEY MOON bejney ki tayyari main they hum!!!!.....aur …..woh!!! bhi LAS VEGAS……ko….THE HEAVEN of LAS VEGAS……BELLAGIO …..main hum sabb intejaam kiya hain……..aur …..aapkey kaam bhi hojaheyga……CHICAGO……sey bas kuchi minuton ki doori hian…..(daadima…..said)

Daadima:…..ah!!! maan!!!......aap dono…!!!! …..ki ….HM ka plan …hum theeno ney milkey banaya hian……aap please mana matt karihey………..(holds maan's hand)

Maan:….(maan ko geet sey millney ki jaldi hain,,,,,)…Jee!!! Daadima……aap jaisa !!! teek samjey!!!!!.......hum!!!....jayehgey…....(phone karney ki acting karkey waha sey ……geet key paas jaatha hain…..)…..Excuse me!!!!

In MAANEET's room:…Geet!!! Murmuring to herself….…..then maan enters…..

Geet:….hey!!!....babaji!!! abb !!! kya!!!! Karrahey hian merey saath!!!!......kabhi tho mujhe chian sey ……!!! Jeeney dejeehey na….!!!!.....(twisting her pallu…standing near window…...)…….(now she keeps her hand on bump …..talking with her unborn baby….i mean .JUNIOR MSK….)….Dekha!!!....junior…..aapkey papa!!!!....mujhe akheyley choddkar …..kahi jaarahey hain!!!!!.......abb main unnsey bikul bhi baat nahi karungi….!!!!ah!!!!.....aur aap bhi!!!!...baath matt karihey……(pointing her finger on bump….)….

(maan …….heard everything…..and slowly moving towards geet….)

Maan:….(geet key bump per apna dono haathon ko peechey sey rakkhey ……)…..GEET!!!!.....tum ….mujheper complaint karrahi thi ……JUNIOR ko…..waisey ….junior …….!!!...tumhara baat todina suney gi…….!!!.......

Geet:….(turned to him….)…SUNEYGI!!!!!?????......suneygi nahi …..suneyga!!!!!......maan!!!!....suneyga!!!!!.....

Maan:…..GEET!!!!......suneygi!!!!.....(geet abhi sherni ki taraha…..maan per barassrahi hain…..)……

Geet:…..nahi!!!!....Suneygaaaaaaa!!!!!!!.......(maan…… geet ka moo band karleytha hian….)

Maan:……GEET!!!!....chup!!! bilkul!!! Chup!!!!.....(holds her tightly)….

Geet:…..chodiye mujhe!!!!!......aapko jaha jaana hian…..jaahihey!!!!!....(she tries to move forward ….but slips on floor…..)….

Maan:….(holds her super speed …..Even he falls on floor …..)…….GEET!!!!......(geet ……was so scared ….closed her eyes……for one minute she was in shock…..and maan too)…..GEET!!!!.......tum teek tho ho!!!!......(now he is angry……slowly he gets up…..holding her shoulder…..)….(MAHIIIII…..MAAHIIIII)…….

Geet:….(opened her eyes …..checked herself …..and confirms nothing happened to her junior……takes a deep breath…..)….

Maan:….GEET!!!...tum ek bacchey ki maa banney waali ho……aur kudh ek bacchey ki tara behave karthi ho!!!!.....agar kuch hojaatha tho……main ek pal keyliye mera saas hi rukhgaya tha…..……(he was too scared than geet…..)….

Geet:….(…maan ko dekhkey)…..maan!!!.....main bilkul teek hun!!!!(she kept hand on his shoulder ….)…..

Maan:….(grabs her in his shoulders …..very tightly…..)…..GEET!!!!........tumhney aisey kaisey soochliya ki main…..tumhey akheley chodkar !!!!.....kahi jaaraha hun…..!!!????.....ah!!!!.......

Geet:…..aap!!! …. abhi abhi ….phone pey baath karrahey they!!!!....wo!!!!........(questioning look)

Maan:…..(holds her chin…..)…..GEET!!!....(explained her everything about the meeting….and the surprise package (HM)…….)…….

GEET:….HONEY MOON?????(she is feeling awkward )……(takes her steps back…….lowered her eyes…..)…….

Maan:…..(again grabs her smoothly …..holds her tightly ….)….GEET!!!....abb!!! tumhari bolthi q band hogahi!!!!.....kuch tho kaho…..!!!!

Geet:…. Wo!!!...wo!!!.......(her voice got stuck)

(eye…lock….MAHII….MAHII….)

Maan:….GEET!!!....tum!!!....sharmarahi ho!!!!....(looks into her eyes and asked )

Geet:…..ab!!!....ma!!!!.....main wo …main wo!!!!(turned her head and smiled )…..(geet….tries to run …..but maan …..stopped her by keeping his hand on her shoulder….and turns …..to him)……

Maan:…..GEET!!!...tum hamesha !!!!....bagthi q ho….kya peechaley janam main ……godi bani thi kya………

Geet:…..chodiye!!!....mujhe!!! jaana hain!!!!......(maan…..joorsey ….keechtah hain…geet ko apney taraf……)

Maan:…..(maan ……playing with her bared back…..)….(holds her very close to him…..no gap for sir)…..

Geet:….maan!!!.....(closed her eyes……with split lips…she is so cold now….)….

Maan:….(felt her coldness…..now he really wants her to warm up……….his finger now playing with her…….hairs …….and neck…..his touch ….making her to freak……)….

Geet:…..(she lost ….totally lost…..coz he touched her trigger point ….(oye don't mistake me……)……I mean ….her back neck……she got jerked …..)

Maan:…..(kissed her eyes…..then nose and then tried to kiss her upper lips……tabbhi…..he gains …conscious …..and saw geet standing with no sense of world….lost in his touch….)……(he don't want to …….bring her into sense……he just kissed her upper lips lightly……no reaction from geet…..and then he hugged her tightly ……)

(tabbhi ……a vas falls from the showcase……coz of windblown through window….)

Geet:….(she realized maan kissed her ….and had little smile on her lips ….now she kissed on his ears….and then thoda aur neechey….)

Maan:…..(made his grip more tighter than before……his one hand …..on her wrist ……sliding up and down…..making her more comfortable to geet to move …..forward …..i mean …to kiss him allover)

Geet:…..(hidden feelings of her slowly coming out one by one…..her both hands on his back …..keeping moving allover….she could….)

MAANEET:…..(both lost in dynamite hug …which it dragged them to out of this world ….both enjoying …..then)

Maan:….GEET!!!!......tum packing karlo …….main …abhi office jaakey aatha hun….!!!!(still in hugging position)…

Geet:….hmm!!!!.....(she dint heard what maan said)……

Maan:…(repeats)…..

Geet:……(saw maan and said)…..ABHI!!!!....office !!!...ittney raath main!!!!.....mani bhi aapkey saath aathi hun!!!!.......

Maan:….(wonders)….GEET!!!!....main office isiley jaaraha hun……conference ki ….. papers collect karena hain….aur…..main jaldhi hi waapas aaunga…..tum soojaho!!!!....raath bahut hochuki hain!!!!!..........(he steps towards door…..geet holds his hand)

Geet:…..aap!!!!......jaldi aahengey na……?????(innocent face)

Maan:….(holds her face in his hand…)…..GEET!!!!.....tum soojaho!!!!.......main jald hi aahunga!!!!.....meera tumharey packing main help kareygi……..aur kal subha !!!! ….hamey …….time pey flight pakadna hian……(kissed her forehead….went off….)

(after some time ……meera ……comes to geet…..to help her in packing)

Meera:….GEET!!!.....tho packing karrey….!!!

Geet:….ah!!....ma..haa!!!!....meera !!!!!......main kudh karlungi!!!!.......

Meera:….GEET!!!!......aise kaisey hosaktha hian!!!...tum waha beto aur mujhe kaho ki ……kya kya packing karna hian…..(meera packing karney key baad …..geet ko sooney keyliye kehkar …..jaathi hain….)…..

Geet:….(kuch dheery key baad …..maan key kaayalon main ussey kabb ankh laggaya….patha hi nahi chala…..)

(Night 2.30AM…..maan is back from office…..)

Maan:….(enters mansion…..meera….and Vicky were waiting for them…..and maan ……gives one file to Vicky and says)…..vicky !!...jab takk main ….yaha nahi hun…..!!!KCO ka saara jemmey daari tum dono samaaleyngey….

Vicky:…..bro don't worry!!!!.....hum hian naa……

Maan:…(maan apney room key taraf gaya)……(aur room mian kadam rakthey hi….usski nazar ….geet ko doondney lagi….)

Geet:….(sleeping on bed ……kept her one hand on pillow beside to her…..maan slowly came near to geet ….MAAAHIII…..is on)

Maan:….(geet key paas aakar baitgaya…..usskey ...cheharey key uppar ki baalon ko …….side pey kiya….aur blanket sey geet ko cover karthey hi ….geet ki hanthon per usskey nazar pada…..aur usski haat ko apney haat main pakadkar…......ring ko dekha…..ussper kiss bhi kiya…usskey baad …)…......

Next morning:…...maaneet are in flight……

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
loved it
fab job
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome update
and the poetry was really funny and nice
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@All

Thank u so much for liking ....love u all...soon will update ....as i was busy with my project .......


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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww i just lovd it sooo much....
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loved the update pl continue soon

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