FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET - CHAPTER 4

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Hello''Everybody'...

Today I am back with jealousy ' MAANEET Moments''


~POINT TO BE NOTED~

The Post under by name "FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET "Is NOT AN Prediction FOR NEXT EPISODE ''..


I Welcome You Who Are All Really Wants To See My Vision ON Maaneet Romantic Moments'..And WISHES To See The Intense Moments Between Maaneet In Future''Episodes'.(HOPE GEET TEAM WOULD NOTICE THIS )

Let's start'..

(well week hearted read at ur own risk'')

(we are just having fun '.making weird characters funny'. At this vision'.hope others don't mind'..specially DEV and ADI fans)

Present status of everyone in my Future Vision:

Daadima : worried of maan & geet coz they dint showed up since morning who were went to jewelry shop(but maaneet really ain't go for jewelry shop'. )'

Maan & Geet:'are on the way to mansion from farm house''they are in the car '.right now''

Nakul:'..finally he got some peace coz shasha is in maika''.

Adi:'..Adi is on leave today ''!!! He had appointment with dental doctor''

Pinky:''aaj pinky fit and shine lagrahi hain''

Dev:'.dev ko kabhar mili hain'.ki NT ney doosri shaadi karli hain'..canada main!!!!(abb!!! dev ki haalth aisa hain'.KI NAA RAHA GHAAT KA AUR NAA RAHYE DOBHI KA'..well girls '.i don't know THE correct phrase '..)

NT:'.. Finally NT '..ki shaadhi hogaye hian''aur 'ussko bhi '.BILL Clinton ke beti se shaadhi karney keliye ukksaarahi hain'..:))

Finally '.

MEERA & VICKY:..abhi !!! land hogaye hain'..mansion main!!!! MAANEET ki Shaadi attend karney keliye

KHURANA MANSION MAIN:'..sabhi rishthey dhaar'.. ''ekattey horahey hain'..q ki kal jho sangeet ki function hain''

AUR EK NAYA CHARACTER ENTRY HONEY WALI HAIN''MAANEET KEY KHUSHI'..

HOLD ON'..EK NAHI '.DO'.DO''CHARACTER ''ENTRY MARRAHEY HAIN''


Chapter 4

DAY 3

(maan & geet : dono farm house se nikley huwey hain'.khurana mansion ke taraf''and right now in mansion'..)'..

(daadima is worried about maaneet'..coz'.they dint showed up'..till now from jewelry '..shop'..and also she called trice to jewelry shop owner '.to enquire '.and came to know 'they haven't visited yet'..not only that '.she called maan for so many times to his cell'.as maan is far away '.and couldn't reach him out '')

Daadima:'.patha nahi!!! Hey maan aur geet!!! Dono '..khaha chaley gayhe!!!!.....kuch boolkey bhi'.nahi gaye hain!!!!....(saw nakul and '..called him'.)'..nakul!!!.....maan aapsey kuch kehkar gayhi'.hain kya!!!!

Nakul:'.jee!!! jee'.nahi daadima!!!!......(made his face like'.he lost everything,'..in his life'.even his paijama!!!!!:))

Daadima:'..teek hain!!!! unko!!! Aaney do!!!! Aaj !!! ''(thinking )'..achha !!! nakul'..!!!!....saarey guest log aur rishthey dhaar ''aaney key samay!!! Horaha!!! Hain'..subb kuch tayyar hain na'!!!!

Nakul:'.han!!! daadima!!! Sabb kuch tayyar hain!!!!...sirf maan sahab aur geet ma'm jee key alawa!!!!!!(went away'.)

Daadima:'.(still thinking'.suddenly heard the voice of '.car'..and set her eyes open on the door'..)'..

(and here comes Mr. Vicky Singh Khurana and Mrs. Meera Vicky singh khurana''..just landed from London''they both just enters '.the mansion'.and daadi'.is so happy to see them'' ''Both bowed to daadima and hugged'..)

Daadima:'.Vicky'!!! meera!!!! Hamey bahut kush hun'..key aap dono!!!....aagaye !!!!(still worried about maaneet'.vicky and meera notices '..that asks whats the matter,,,,,daadi tells everything'.to them 'then'.vicky'says')

Vicky:'..hmmm!!!.....my sweet heart..just chill(he hugged daadi'..Vicky calls daadima has sweet heart'..how cute'.he is????)'..dont!!!! worry'!!!!....maan baiyya!!!!!...aur geet!!! Baabi!!!!!.....zaroor farmhouse gaahey honghye!!!!!....(Vicky is so near to maan'and he knows 'every step of '.maans'.)'..

Meera:'.haa!!! daadima!!! Vicky billkull ''teek kehyrahey '.!!!!....aap'.fikar matt kariye'..!!!(all heard 'that maan's car '..came '..)

(maan aur geet'dono'.mansion'.key andar''chaley ''haarahey hain'..hamesha ki taraha'..slowly'..with background music''seeing each other''geet key haathon main'..jewlery ka '..box hain'..aur maan key haatho n main''.kya hain.??? bolo bolo'.???.....lol'.geet ka'.doosra haat';)'')

Daadima:'.(maaneet ko dekthey hi'..gussey sey'.)'..maan!!! aur geet!!! Beta'..aapdono!!! subha sey'.kaha.!!!...thye'..agar farm house hi jaana'.tho batakar jaathey''

Maan & geet:'.(saw Vicky and meera'..sabb log galey milgaye'..aur haal- chaal poochliye'..daadima ka gussa bhi tanda huwi'..aur geet ney'.maan key jo dehey huhey'.jewlery ko dikhaaya'..sabb'apna apna'.raai batah diya'''finally geet 'Vicky se milthi hain'.aur Vicky'geet ka'..bahut tariff'kartha'hain'..- dinner 'shinner hogaye'.geet aur meera ka'..shatter-patter hogaya'..aur maan 'viky ka'..jappi-wappi bhi '.hogaye'''.tabbhi!!!!!....)

(ek handsome hunk aur hotty doll'..andar aaye'''..sabb ..ke sabb'.heyraan hogaye'..sirf Vicky aur meera ko chood key)'.

Uss handsome hunk ka naam hain: JIMMY SHEGAL

Aur hotty doll ka naam hain: MIKI SINHA

(jimmy aur miki '.ke entry sey phehaly '.geet outhouse jaachuki '..thi'.so here jimmy wont meet geet'..as maan's fianc '..now the mission begins)

(jimmy ,miki'.are best friends of Vicky and meera''IN LONDON '..they both met and have very good bounding between them''..vicky has invited them for maan's marriage'as maan'know jimmy officially but not as much personally/'')

Jimmy:'.hey !!! maan!!!! How are u dude!!!...finally '.at last u got committed !!!! I am happy'.man(he hugged maan)''..

Miki:'.(talking to meera and daadi'..and saw maan'..)'..wow!!! meera!!! Is that maan!!!!(pointing towards maan)'..(meera says yes'..)'.(miki'goes near to maan and says'.)'.

maan:'.(saw miki 'is coming towards him'.and blushed coz'of her catwalk'.)'..

miki:'.(maan ko shake hand '.dey ke kaha'.)'.really maan!!! I must say'it!!!.....u are a real hunk!!!..(now meera and daadi are surprised '..but not Vicky'.he knew that'.any girl will fall for his brother'..)'..(miki'.hugged him tightly'.)'.'.(tabbhi'.)'.

Geet:'(geet was back from outhouse '..for some work'.and what she is seeing'..*MAAN IS HUGGING SOMEONE ELSE'*''ABB lagi!!! Mirchi!!!...geet'ko''geet '.saying to herself'by twisting her dupatta'..)'..hey!!! main kya'.dehkrahi!!! babaji!!!!....hey maan sir'.kissey chipakrahey hain!!!!!!...(stood beside the wall and watching '.them'.)'.

Daadi & meera:'.they understood she is from London and '.this is common there'.but hamri''.geet'.handa'..da express of hoshiyar pur!!!!.....wont '.digest '.these things''

Maan:'..nice to meet u !!!!????....(Vicky introduces them both'..)'..miki!!!....miki sinha'.!!! Right!!!!????

Miki:'.yeah!!! maan!!!! I just love ur attitude!!!!!.....the way u say my name''.?(again she hugged him'..maan was embarrassed'but dint showed '..to all'.)'..

Geet:'.(geet ko double'.mirchi lagi'.and said to '.herself'._.)'.huh!!!....phirse!!! chippakgaye!!!.....(now its enough!!!)''maan!!! Ko chodo!!!!...wo tho mard hain!!!! aur '.hey besharam!!! Ladki koun hain
!!!!!...(sorry miki'.for besharam)'.

Vicky:'.oky'..guys!!!.....now its time to '..have some fun''

Jimmy:'.maan!!! aapkey!!! Fianc ko introduce hi nahi karwaya !!! hamey'.(miki'.joins the voice'.yeah!!! where is she??? But '.had jealous on geet '.one corner'..)'.

Maan:'.wo!!! 'outhouse main hain!!!! abhi yahi thi!!!!.....(started thinking of her'.)'..

(Tabbhi'.geet'.)

Geet:'.(hides behind the pillar 'when'maan's eyes were searching allover'..)''

Maan:'.woh!!! shaayad !!! soorahi hogi!!!...main'.subha !!! introduce !!! karwatha hun!!!!!(and miki says'.)

Miki:'.kohi!! baath!!! Nahi'.maan!!! hum aapki GEET se tho subha !!! millengey!!! Abhi !!!! mujhe !!!! pehaley!!! Aapsey teek tarase millney deejiye!!!!!(and winks with wicked smile'')

Vicky:'.Miki!!!.....u don't know about my bro!!!!....maan bayya !!! hain hi aisey!!!! '..interesting ''aur mere baahi!!!! Jisspey fida hogaye hain!!!! woh!!! Bhi ''innsey kuch kamm nahi!!!!! Jab subha tum!!!! Geet bhaabi sey meloghi!!!!! Tumhi!!!! Boologi!!!! 'THEY ARE PERFECTLY MADE FOR EACH OTHER!!!!(miki key peat main'.mirchiya bharath natyam karahey thi'.lol)

Jimmy:'yaar !!! Vicky!!!! Agar!!! Tum itna!!!sab kuch apni bhaabi key bhaarey main !!!!!taarif karraha hain tho '..mujhe subha thak intezar nahi hoga'..please!!! abhi unssey humhey millwado!!!!(maan interrupted '.)

Maan:'.abhi!! nahi!!! ''I mean to say''abb!!! Takk tho geet shaayad chukhi ho'gi!!!!....hum subha !!!! baat karlenygey''.bhaut raat hoochuli hain(maan saw the time and said'.)

Daadima:'..ah!!! Vicky!!!...chaliye!!!! '..abb!!! subha baath karlengey'..(all went to their respective rooms'..vicky 'meera is in one room upstairs , jimmy's room is beside to vicky's room, maan is in his room went to washroom '.., and miki's room is beside to maan's room'..daadima told nakul to take miki's luggage to her room'.)'.

Miki:'(going with nakul'.to her room'.saw maan's room and asked'..nakul'.)'.hey!!! man''..nakul!!!!''is that ur name????......kaha jaarahey ho''.hey room nahi hain kya!!!!...(miki'.maan ke room ka darwaajey pey apna haath rakk kar kaha!!!!!(nakul'.immediately''said)''

Nakul:'.nahi!!! madamji!!! Hey room tho'.maan sir ka hian!!!!! Chaliye main'..aapki room'.dekhataha hun''(miki ki mann main ladoo pootrahey they''and said to herself'..humm!!!...maan ka karma''she flahed something '.and made an wicked plan)'..

Geet:'.(yaha!!! Piller key peechey geet!!!! Chupkey se sab kuch sunnrahi thi!!!!.......jab ussney suna ki'.maan ke room ke bagal main hi'miki tayharney '..wali hain tho'..gussesey geet ka chehara '.laal laal''huwa tha'..aur 'apney dupattey ko'..roll roll karwarahi thi'..and to herself'.)'..hey daadima '..aapney usse '.CHIPAKKALI '.ko'..maan ke room ke bagal main q chipkadiya''hey babaji!!!! Maan sir ko'..ussey door rakaana''abb maan sir kya karrahey hongey!!!! Appney room pey!!!!!(she starts '.to think about him''and how miki'hugged him'..made a face bitter'')

(here maan in his room'.)

Maan:'.(abbi wash room main gaye hain'.tabbhi miki ney maan key room pey aagahi!!!!....billi ki tarah'')''.(nakul miki ko usski room pey chodkar'.chalagaya''aur miki'ki mind main ek 'plan suocha''''and next minute'..uss plan ko kaamiyab bananey'.nikkal padi maan key room key taraf/\.....)

Geet:'.(babaji!! Babaji!!! Kehathey huwey ''geet chaligayi!!!!...outhouse main'.abhi'.woh!!! waha se yaha aur yaha se waha'.challrahi hain!!!!! jealous jooo''horaha hain'')''uss!!! Miki key bachhi ko tho main!!!!.....kya karu!!!! (she rememberd the hug)'..aur!!! maan sir ko'..kaise '..chipakrahi thi!!!....woh!!! bhi '..do do baar'!!!!! Mujhe hey sabb'..dekha nahi jaatha!!!!.....abhi!!! maan sir kya karrahey hongey!!!!........(she move towards window where '..she can see maan's room''ans saw '.the shadow of someone'..standing '.geet was sure that its not maan''then who'..???? meera??? Or woh!!! Chipakkali'..)'..

Maan:'(was just out from wash room''wore only towel''he is wet now'..water drop dipping from his hairs now''maan geet key baarey main '.sooochthey huwhey''apna'.sirr ko pouch raha tha'.tabbhi miki'.ko dekh key''.surprise huwa'')''.

Miki:'.(miki the wicked'..seeing maan'.like she is about to eat him raw''and blushed '*fainted *''.stood still'.chewing bubble gum''made an blow'.but forgot'.to take in again'..)'..

Maan:'(arrey miki ko tho sharam nahi hain'.likeinnn hamarey maan ko tho hain'..jaldhi se maan ney apney ''. Apna shirt lekhy '..pehanliya'..aur miki'ko poocha'..)'..miki!!! tum yaha!!!! Kya karrahi hon'.mere kamrey main'!!!!(maan raised his one eye brow up 'with serious face'.)'.

Miki:'(miki tho gaayi thi kaamsey''heart ka beat tho '.bandh hochuki hogi miki ka''and maan 'again '.asked her'..no response''this time'he shouted'..shaking her hand'')'.

Maan:'.Miki!!!.....miss. miki sinha!!!!!......(tab jaakey miki ko hosh aagaya,,,,,,and still blushing'')'..

(Yaha geet'.maan key room main'.ek shadow ko '.dekha''and she still in confussion'.and not bale to conclude who' is that''afte few seconds'..see saw '.another shadow'..that is maan's/''.abb!!! geet'.ko'.raha nahi gaya!!!!.......phone key taraf badi!!!!!,,,,,,maan ko call karney!!!!!)''.

Geet:'.(maan ko phone lagahi'..phone ki gantti bajjraha hain'.and said to herself)'..hey!!! babaji!!! Hey maan phone q nahi uttarahey hain!!!!(abhi 'phone ke gantti bajna shuru huwa hain'per geet ko '..ek ek sec'.kattna mushkil horahi hain''again dialed the number)''

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Posted: 14 years ago
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(here in maans room…)

Maan:….mikiji!!!! aap !!! mere room main kyakarrahi hain!!!! what are u doing in my room????!!!!!(maan asked miki……)….

Miki:…(still chewing …buble ghum……and seeing maan….making her innocent face……maan waved twice by his hand ……to break the eye lock….)

Maan:….Miss. Miki!!! Aap teek tho hain!!! aap yah kya karrahei hain…mere room main!!!!(tabbhi…..maan's phone is ringing ……maan attends the call)…

Maan:…hello!!!.....(uss taraf sey geet ka aawaz sunnkar maan ….surprise huwa aur pareyshaan bhi….)….Geet!!!! (miki heard the name geet…..and silently moved out…coz she won't bare someone's name from maan's mouth……)…

Geet:….maan!!! aap …ittni!!! Dhayer !!! se mera phone q nahi ….utarahey they!!!!.....(maan was surprised coaz geet is shouting ….very loudly…and took his phone from ear 1 inch away …. )…..

Maan:….Geet!!!....shaanth ho jaho!!!!...ittni chillaney ki khoi jarurat nahi nahi……main baiyra nahi hon…..!!!(geet heard it and got angry and said)…..

Geet:….ha!!! mujhe patha hain!!!aap baiyre nahi!!! Hain….per andhey !!!! jaroor hain!!!....woh!!! chipaakali!!!(tingled her tongue and again said)…..mera matlatb!!!....woh!!! miki….aapkey room main kya karrahii!!! Hain!!!!....(maan…got relief that she is worried about him….nothing more than that….)

Maan:….woh!!! ….mujhe patha nahi tha ….GEET!!! ….woh!! mere kamrey main!!! Shayad by mistakenly aayehi hain……

Geet:….ha!! ha!!! ….muhje!!! patha hian!!!!....woh!!! aapsey !!! phir se ghaaley padney haahi thi!!! Mera matlab hain!!!!.....gaaley milney!!!!!(tingled again!!!!)….

Maan:….(maan ko …..kuch jalney ki bhoo aarahi thi……and he smiled ……that is wicked smile……)…..

Geet:…(after few seconds maan was silent)….maan!!! aap!! Kya soach rahey hain!!!.....(maan ko ……ek doubt aaya….aur geet se poocha)….

Maan:…Geet!!! Tumhey kaise pata ki miki ne mujhe WOH!!! Kiya….i mean HUG kiya(smiling inside)…..tum tho unnlogon ki aaney se pehaley he outhouse chaligay thi!!! Aur tho aur…..!!! abbi!!! Tumney mujhe aur miki ko dekha!!!!.....(he had doubt GEET is peeping him…..through window…..so he moved towards window and made a curtain aside……now he is clearly can see GEET standing next to the window of outhouse and talking in a phone…..with him ….but GEET is unaware that maan also can her.....)

Geet:…ab!!! Ma!!!....nahi!!! …woh!!!....main!! kuch dhary pehaley….!!!...daadima se millney…..mansion aahi thi…!!!kuch kaam tha…..!!!!(geet twisted her lips once side and said)….tabb!!!...maine…..(hey babaji)…..uss miki ko aapko chipakkthey !!!! huwey !!!! dehkaha!!!!!...aur!!!(she stopped to say next word)…..

Maan:…(listening to her cute voice and enjoying the conversation….he knew that she is JEALOUS on miki now….and showing possessiveness ……but not admitting it…..so now he turned to be hard for her…..and wants to make her admit it….what she is feeling now……)…..Geet!!! tumhye…..!!! JALANN horahi hain!!!(smiled…..)…..

Geet:….(she was shocked to listen the word JALANN….and said….)….je!!!! jee!! Nahi!!!....mujhe aapsey kohi baat nahi karney hain!!!!......mujhe!! need aarahi hain!!!!....aap!!! uss miki ki bachhi ke saath……gappey maariye!!!!.....(she cut the call……said to) herself ….hey!!! babaji….hey !!!! maine kya…kehdiya!!!!....unnko!!!....nahi !!! nahi!!! ….agar such main aisa huwa tho!!!....(again she dialed to maan)…….

Maan:….(still sticked to window and watching her…….then his phone again rings)….Geet!!!....abb!!...kya!!!(geet …..now she really angry on maan……coz of his words…..and said)…..

Geet:…uh!!!!....jee !! kuch nahi!!! GOOD NIGHTTTT!!! (she cuts the call……maan saw her again…..he knew she is bit angry and possessive right now…..so this time he called her back…..but she dint pick the call……again he tried ….again she cut the call)….

Maan:….(GEET!!! Tumhari….ittni!!! jurrath!!! ….said to himself…..again he called her…..this time GEET…couldn't control herself and picked the call….)….

Geet:….jee!!! kahihey!!!...

Maan:…..Geet!!!....mere!!! room key taraf moodo!!!!...(geet was surprised….and turned her face ….there goes…..MAAN the LION….standing…..)….

Geet:…..(geet saw maan and hurried to close the window………and said in the phone)…..mujhe ….!!! Aapsey!!!...abhi!! kuch nahi baat karni hain!!! naahi aapsey millna hain…..mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain!!!!.....sooney dijeehey….!!!(she cut his call….and gone to sleep….)….

Maan:…(maan wanted to go outhouse now…..but …he dint go coz he wants her to come for him, he wants her to fall for him, he wants her to be possessive for him, he wants her to love him…..thats all he wanted …….so he too slept……..thinking about her……and said)…..Geet!!! main tumhey subha dekh loonga!!!!!

(next morning----sangeet ke subha!!!! Really fresh and new to both maan and geet…..)…..

Its early very beautiful morning!!!!!...

(Maan, Vicky aur Jimmy…..all three are in gym..(maan have his own gym in mansion….)…..all three are doing workouts…..mean while GEET….is in garden…..just had came out from bath …..And standing in middle of a garden to enjoy the early sunrise……tabbhi!!! JIMMY saw GEET!!!!! ….and stunned to )…

Jimmy:….(jimmy jog karney keliy gym se bhahar haaya……..maan apna thai chi practice karraha hain…aur Vicky….pushups karraha hain…miki….shower lerahi hain….meera nakul ko kitchen main help karrahi hain….aur daadima……phone pey baath karrahi hain……)……

Geet:….(kal raat …jo huwa usskey baarey main …apney aap baath karrahi hain….ke saari galthi maan sir ki hain…..)…..mujhe!!! na maan ko!!! Aise nahi kehan chaahiye tha…..(geet saw jimmy coming to her)

Jimmy:….(when jimmy saw geet…he stunned and stood still coz of her beauty…..and his legs are not at all taking command from him….. its on moving towards her and …..)….(geet…saw him coming to her and she turned to move inside…tabbhi)……excuse me!!!!...hello…!!!! lady!!!...hai!!!! I am jimmy …..!!! jimmy shegal!!!..........wow!!! aap bahut khoobsurt hain!!! sorry !!! mera kaam hian….khoobsurat …..chhejon kee taraif karna …!!! I hope u don't mind…….(he gave a shake hand to her….geet unwilling gave him a hand…..(tabbhi….hamara maan aka….saw ….them…both from his room …..and hurried ….to garden…..)…….

(there our maan aka TARZAN(HULK) enters…garden….and saw geet's hand in jimmy's hand….and made a face like angry LION…..agar bass chala tho jimmy ka sarr pooddethatha…..waise….maan kuch bhi kar saktha hain geet keliye…..what say girls???....lol…..tabbhi….geet…maan ke peechey miki ko aathey huwe dekha!!!!....aur geet….!!! Ko laga….maan aur miki…dono saath main….aayhey hain…thos shuru hogai…..maan ko jalaney ke mission main….jimmy ko ek bada sa smile diya…geet ney aur kaha…)

Geet:….ah!!! tho aap kya kehrahey they!!! Mainney suna nahi!!! Teek taraha sey……kya phir se….kaheyngey!!!!!(she wants to take revenge on maan about last night …when he said a word JALAN…..she wants him to understand ……how it feels when u see ur love ….with sharing the space with someone else…..)….

Miki:…hello!! Maan!!!...wow!!! u look cute in this .!!!! outfit too!!!!.....(he was in thai chi dress…..)……

Maan:…(came near to jimmy……but heard something from jimmy what just he said to geet again on demand of geet)….

Jimmy:….hey young lady!!! U look gorgeous!!! ….really I must say u look too cute in this salwaar ---that too…..maroon colour suites u I mean so beautiful!!!! Waisey!!! Aap….khurana mansion ke garden main!!! ….kya karaahey hain!!!...!!!.....

Maan:…(maan ka face tho …gussey se laal laal huwa tha…..aur jimmy ko…..maarney ki bahut maan karaha tha….tabbhi geet ney……maan ko dekhkar……nazar andaaz kiya….aur jimmy se baath karney lagi……)…..

Jimmy:….waise …..aap ko naam nahi batahya aapney!!!!....may I know the name of most beautiful women in the world…..

(tabbhi maan….)

Miki:….(peechey se…….kadey huwe sabb sunnrahi…thi saat h saath …..maan ko dekhrahi…thi….)….

Maan:…..GEET!!! ….GEET naam hain….inka!!!....MERI MANGERTAR aur meri HONEYWALI MRS. KHURANA…

(Jimmy and miki…..both are about to faint……and shocked to learn that …geet is the girl who maan fell for……jimmy is 100% sure that no doubt maan fell for geet…..and miki…ka tho …dillhi toot gaya……)

Jimmy:…kya!!!....hey…I mean GEET!!!...aapki mangetar hain….tho!!! maan manna parega!!!!....aapki choice…ho…hey tho bhaut gracefull lagthey hain…nice to meet u miss. GEET…(again jimmy gives his …to geet……and geet wants to utilize this….)….

Geet:…shukriya!!!!(she had wicked smile now…and saw maan….maan turned his face to another side …with anger and kept his both hands on his wrist…..)…..

Miki:…hello!!! Geet!!! Myself miki sinha!!!!...i am so happy to meet u girl!!!(miki hugged geet unwillingly…..and even geet too….)…..

(tabbhi….vickey and meera enters and over hears there conversation….and ….talks for some time…..everyone parises geet and maan still in aggressive mood……now all went inside mansion…except…maan and geet…….geet too …went outhouse ………by giving a look back to maan….after tapping the ground….)……

Maan:…..GEET!!! rooko!!!(maan…geet ko pookara….but geet maan ki bath ko nahi maani…..maan geet ke peechey peechey chalagaya……)/…..

(abbi geet…kitchen pey…aahi …..maan sey peecha chudvathey huwe,,,,.,…aur maan bhi aaya………geet ke peechey…..he is so angry now…….he just enterd the kitchen….and shouted )/….

Maan:….GEET!!!(he is still in thai chi dress…..)…

@ALL…

Girls…..this is the continuation of yesterday's last take……I changed a bit …..in last line…….

(maan….geet key peechey peechey aaya…..kitchen tak…..aur bahut gussey main hain…shaayad ho gussa nahi…who geet keliye possessive hain…..)…

Geet:…(apney aap pey …kuch badbadraathy …kictchen main…chali aahyi…..ek barthan liya chai (TEA)…..bananeykeliye….gas on kiya………aur maan ko dehk kar….doosrey taraf moodi….aur mannhi mann main hasney lagi….maan ke cheharey ko dekhkar……….)….

Maan:..(maan geet ke iss nakraey ko acchhi taraha se samjtha hain…..aur geet ke badtaav se…maan ko gussa aur ukksadiya…..geet key taraf….douda….)….

Geet:…(geet …..ney maan ko apney taraf …..dekha…aur waha sey baagney keliye….kohi aur raastha nahi tha…..attak gahi…bechari…..geet…)..

Maan:…Geet!!!...abhi abhi!!! Tum baahar !!!!....(remeberd it)….waha kya karrahi thi!!!.....uss jimmy key saamney..!!!(hold her both arms and asked her…)

Geet:….(maan ke haathon ko …..push kiya sur kaha…)…..wahi!!! joo !!! miki ke saat kal kiya…..and turned …her back to him…..(maan….ko aur gussa aaya…geet ko zoor sey….unnki haat ko keecha…..maan ka ek haat geet ke kamar pey hain aur dusra…geet ke sir ko pakda hain…….)…

Maan:….oh!!! tho tum.!!! Mujhe ….jalana ….chahthi hain!!!!.....GEET…..!!!!!(maan geet ko aur naazdeek lekey kaha………..)…agar!!! Tumhey lagatha hain!!!! ….hey sab karkey mujhe jalalogi !!!! …..tho ….teek hain!!!! ….main bhi dektha hoon……!!!!....(he flashed one idea……and both looking into each others eye…..geet ko ….maan ki bathon sey …..bahut gussa aaya ….aur kaha)…

Geet:…tho !!! teek hain !!!main bhi dehkthi hun!!!!ha!! ha !! jaahiye!!!!....uss miki ki bachhi aap ki intezar karrahi hongi!!!!(badi badi ankh banakey …..maan ko dekhkar boloa….)……(maan…aur zoorsey geet ko ….apney…..haaton sey apney taraf pull kiya…….chipkali kya….hawa keliye bhi ……jagha nahi tha unn dono ke beech main…..maan geet ke dono haaton ko peechey ke taraf twist kiya…..issey geet ko bahut dard horaha hain….aur geet ki ankhon se…..assu likal aaya…..jab maan….geet ki ankhon main assu dekha tho……geet ke haathon sey apna pressure kaam kiya….aur …..aagey)…..

Maan:…GEET!!!....hey aansu!!!!(geet….dard ki wajesey…..apna haaton ko…dehkrahi hain…..aur maan sey kaha…..)…..(maan ko bahut boora laga….apney iss barthaw se….)

Geet:…..abb!!! kuch matt kahiye!!!!.....aapko hamesha!!! Main hi galath lagthi hun!!! Hain na!!!!(abhi bhi geet ke anhkon main….aansu teharihuhi hain….)….aap!!! uss ko miki key saat!!!!(geet kuch kherahi thi….aur chup hogahi!!!!.)….

Maan:…..GEET!!!!.....tum!!! miki ko beech main matt gasito!!!!....(aur geet key haaton ko apney haat main liya ….aur dehka…..geet ke haat par…..red color ka nishaan padi hain…….aur poocha…..)…..Geet!! bahut dard horaha hain!!!!...

Geet:…..(still in anger and said….)…..nahi!!!.....(she moved bit away from him….)…..

Maan:….(maan came near to geet again ….and said…)…..Geet!!! main hey bardhast nahi karsaktha……ke tumhey kisi aur kay saat…..!!!(kuch khehaney wala tha tabbhi!!!!....MEERA ki aawaz sunnpadi…..aur maan & geet…dono….alag huwey ….geet…..chai bananey main busy hogahi aur maan…..fridge ke door open karkhey …..paani peeney laga….)…….

Meera:…GEET!!! GEET!!!!.....(meera enters kitchen …..and saw geet is making chai…..)…GEET!!!....hey tum kya kerrrahi ho……hey sabb chodo!!!!.....jaldi chalo mere saath!!!!.....(meera ….gas band kardi aur geet ke haat ko pakadkar….ussko bhahar leyjaarahi thi tabbhi….maan ko dekha….aur kaha…..)…..

Meera:….Maan!!!....aapbi yaha!!! Hain!!!....god!!!...maan abb thodi dheeyr kelily humey aapki….mangetar urf missy …..chahiye….!!!(meera smiled)….daadima!!!...geet ko boolarahi hain!!!! kya hum inney ley jasakthi hoon……….(geet saw maan's face….she is silent now….)….

Maan:….ha!! meera!!!...nahi!!! woh!!! Mujhe GEET se…..kuch jarrori baat karnithi!!!…..kya….!!!(tabbhi geet …..beech main bholi…)….(maan key aankhey gusse sey laal laal huwi)….

Geet:…ah!!!..bh!!...nahi nahi meera…..main maan sey baadmain ….baat karloungi….abhi!! daadima!!! Se pehaley milllu….maan sey tho kabhi bhi baath hosakthi hain……hain na!!! maan!!!(geet gave a wicked smile….to maan…)

(now geet and meera….leaves to mansion…..maan stays back….his temper still not getting cool….he banged wall by this hand…..and said)…

Maan:…GEET!!!!....abb!!! dekho hotha hain kya….!!!!(with wicked smile….

In Mansion:…..7PM …..sabb logn….sangeet key function main….haazir huwe…hain…aur abhi kuch log haarahi hain….aur haana baki hain……..vicky aur jimmy…decorations samalrahey hain….aur miki…..anpey room main….suite choose karrahi hain….kisey pehanloon….aur daadima…..nakul se…..maan ke bhaarey main pooch rahi hain……aur maan apney room main…..hain…..geet aur meera dono uppar key kamrey main ,,,hain…..meera geet ko …tayyar karrahi hain)

Geet:….(maan ki uss barthaw key baarey main sooach rahi hain……aur apni galthi ka bhi aisaas huwa hain geet ko…..said to herself)…..hey.!!! babaji….maan !!! ko mainey ……kya kya nahih boola!!! Subha!!!!.....hey jaankar bhi key who mujhe kittna pyaar karthey hain……mainey maan ……ka mere maan ka dil dukhadiya……mujhe aisa nahi karna chaahiye tha!!!!....(meera wonders what geet is talking to self…..)…..

Meera:…..geet!!! tumhey kya huwa hain….apnyey aap!!!! Kya baat karrahi ho!!!!.....

Geet:…..jee!!...wo!!! kuch nahi meera…..bus aisea hi!!! (maan ko yaad kiya…..tabbhi…..daadima…enters….)…..

Daadima:….meera!!!beta aapney Geet!!! Ko Tayyar kardiya!!!!.....sabb log …..aachukey hain!!!....jaldhi!!!...geet….ko…leykar haahiye…..

(in maan's room…..vicky, jimmy, and 4-5 boys….may be vicky's and maan's college friends……are present….and maan ko sabb chedrahi hain….per maan….geet key baarey main sooch raha hain……usse laga…)….

Maan:…Geet!!! …..tum kaha ho….!!! Mujhe ek baar tumsey!! Millna hain!!!!...aur tumsey ……maafi bhi maangana,…hain…..subha mere uss barthaw key liye…..(heard Vicky is calling him….)

Vicky:….maan bayya!!! Aap phir sey….geet baahi ki kayalon …main kogaye…..!!!....abbb!!!sooachiye…..kuch plan banahiye…….humhey….ander kaisey gussna hain…..

Maan:….andar??? gussna?....kaha…aur q…..(he is thinkg why….lol….he don't know….he forget…..SANGEET is ment for only for LADIES…..)…..

Some one in that group:…..hey lo….maan ko tho kuch bhi maaloom…nahi hain….everybody laughs….

Vicky:…..arrey maan bayya…..abb sangeet ki function shuruhoney waali hain….aur ….hum ladkon ko….andar jaaney ki permission nahi hian……kuch sooachiye na ….(he is forcing him…)

Maan:….(thinking…oh!! No….)…abb!! Main!!! Geetsey….kaisey milu…????.....vicky!!! main abhi!! Aaya!!!(Vicky stops him…)…..

Vicky:…..areey areey maan bayya….aap!!! kaha chaley!!!!

Maan:….maine kaha na…...abhi !!! aatha hun Vicky!!!!.....daadimasey milkey….(maan steps out )

Vicky:…..(said to all)….chalo…..bahi!!!.....bhahar chalthey hain!!!......maan bayya…..shaayad daadi ko mananey gahye hain!!!!(everyone …..out now….)

Maan:….(geet….ko dundthey huwe…..sabhi rooms check karraha hain…..aur miki ke room ko bhi aaya……)

Miki:…..(mirror key saamney……make up lagarahi hain…..maan ko ussney notice nahi kiya……)…..

Maan:….(miki ko dekhkey…..jaisa aaya tha waishi…..hi bhahar jaaraha tha…hey sooach key…saari….problem ki shuruhaat….miki hi hain….aur miki ney maan ko dekhliya…..)….

(maan- is wearing…aqua color sherwani …with light emroidary……looking so cute…..like an angle….)

Miki:….maan!!! aap yaha!!!....kuch chahytha !!! aapko…..(miki maan key paas haarahi thi…tabhhi….miki key choli…..uss ke phery ko….sey….ulajkar….maan ke shoulder per jaakey….girr padi…..maan miki ko samaala….aur kaha )…

Maan:…miki!!! Samalkey…..(tabbhi….geet aahi andar…..pehaley maan ko dunthey huwe …..maan key room per gahi thi….per mila nahi …..so she ….came to miki's room…..there she saw….miki is in maan key baahon main…..aur geet ko ittna gussa aaya….ke…..wo!!! waha…sey…….chaligayi….kuch kahi dina……)…..(aur maan….geet key peechey peechey )…..

Geet:….(upstairs …..apney roompey …..gahi……anpney choli key dupatthey ko….twist karrahi hain……..said to herself……)…..hey!! babaji!!!.,,,….hey maan!!! Ko…..Kya hogaya hain!!!...(seeing ….the seeling …..)…..(and sat on the bed…..)

Maan:….(geet key peechey …..baga)….GEET!!!...GEET!!! rooko!!!.....jo tum samajrahi ho!!!!.....ho!!!....aisa kuch nahi!!!!(miki ko …..bahut boora laga….ki…..geet usske wajse se….maan per gussa huhi hain……)…..

Geet:….hey babji!!!.....maan….ko tho main maafi maangney waali thi…..per ….abb nahi mangungi….!!!!.....(tabbhi….maan enterd the room and heard what geet …said………and locked the door)….

Its 7.20PM…..8.30PM ko sangeet shuru hota hain

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Maan:'.(maan upstaries '.aatha hain'.geet ke peechey'..aur geet ki badbad sunnkar room ke andar aatha hain'.aur door lock kardeytha hain'..)'..

Geet:'.(maan ko dekh kar '..geet'..bed se kadey hothi)'..aap!!!....aap!!! yaha kya karrehy hain!!!....dekhiye!!! mujhe aapse!!!!khoi baat nahi karni hain!!!.....(geet'.darwaze kolney jaathi hain''aur maan'.geet key choli ke dupattey ko pakadtha .hain'teek waisey'..jaisey '.{pehali baar geet maan ke outhouse main pakadatha''white salwar- pink dupatta'..}'..aur geet'..rook jaathi hain''..geet ke saas bhi'.)'..

(geet ' wearing lemon yellow choli''looking steamy'..just like she wore in someones marriage when goes to hosiyapur to meet miss.rassika'..)

Maan:'(dheerey dheerey uss apney paas kheectha chalajatha hain'..aur geet'..maan ke taraf '..keechi jaarahi hain'..)''

Geet:'.(maan ko kuch bolney keliye''koshish karthi hain'..per maan''usskey hooton per'apna ek hungli rakkar '..kaha),,,,,

Maan:'Geet!!!!....kuch matt bolo!!!....maafi tum nahi !!!!!mujhe maangney hain!!!!!!! mujhe maaf karo'.geet(oh!!!...maan key ankhon main ansu'..)''

Geet:'(geet ko'..maan ki iss baat sey aur unnki ansu ko dekhkar 'ekdum sey gussa uttar jaatha hain''aur ''geet'.)'.maan!!!....nahi'..(apna'..haat maan moo band karley thi hain!!!!)'..

Maan:'(maan'.geet ke haat ko '.apney haat main leykar'.dekhatah '.hian'ke subha ussney '..geet haat ko bahut zoor se'..twist kiya tha'.aur laal huwi thi''abibhi'..laal hi hain''aur usski haat ko upper liya ''apney hooton se kiss kiya'..)'..

Geet:'.(apney ankhey band karli'..aur dheerey se maan key haat leykar'..geet ney apney gaalon par ''rakkliya)''

Maan:'..(maan geet ke gaalon per ''.khelthi huwi''baaloon ko'..apney hunglion se '..peechey key taraf'.karliya'''aur apney dono haathon sey'..geet key cheharey ho..upper ke taraf '.mood liya'.)

Geet:'.(apney ankhey kholi'..aur kaha)'.maan!!!....aap hey kya karrahey hain!!!(she turned her face'.)'

Maan:''(geet key chin ko likar apney taraf mood liya'..)'Geet!!!.....idar dekho!!!(geet abhi bhi'apney ankhey '..nichey ke taraf'.kiya hian')'..

Geet:'.maan!!! chodiye mujhe!!!....jaana hain'..!!!....kohi!!! aagay tho!!!(she rushes to the door'.again'.)''

Maan:'..(iss baar geet ko nahi rhoktha hain'..aur sirf khetha hain)'..Geet!!!.....agar tumhey jaana hain tho!!! Bilkul jaa sakthi ho!!! Per ussey pehaley!!!...mere sawaal ka jaawab tho dethey jaao!!!!....(geet rohkk jaathi hain'..maan key sawaal sunney keliye'.)'.

Geet:'..maan jaldi !!! kariye!!!....mujhe jaana hain!!!!....daadima aur meera '..agar 'yaha!!! Mujhe doondthey huwey '.yaha aagay tho !!!!.....(stopps)'

Maan:'.geet!!!....such bathaw!!!....tumhey kal!!!...mujhe miki key saath dekhkar!!!....jalan!!! huwa na!!!!('.geet ke teek peec)

Geet:'.woh!!!...main!!! '.ha!!! nahi!!!!....wo!!!(maan'..turnes her by holding her shoulder)'..

Maan:'.mere ankhon main ankhey daal kar '.bolo!!!!...ah!!! GEET'!!!...(maan looking into her eyes'..)'.(geet maan key collar pakad kar kaha!!!!)''.

Geet:'.ah!!! huwa !!!...jalan huwa mujhe!!! Suna !!! apney!!!....jalan huwa'.!!!!...mujhe appko kisi aur key saat dekhna!!!! Acchha nahi lagtha hain!!!!......

Maan:'..(justifies himself'..)'..GEET!!! teek waise !!! aaj subha mere saath bhi aisa hi huwa!!!! Jab tum jimmy !!! haat main haat daalkar!!!!....baat karrahi thi!!!!...

Geet:'..maan!!!....hum dono key beechmain!!!!....kisiko aaney math dijiye!!!!(hugged him so tightly'.)'.

(tabbi'.kohi darwaza katkatraha hain'.)

(Maan & geet:'.dono hug ko enjoy karraehy they ,.,'.tabbhi '..baharesey darwaza ''katkatraney ka aawaj haarah hain''woh!!! Meera aur daadima tey'..dono sooach rahey hain'geet andar kya karrahei hain woh!!! Bhi aakelye'..daadima pareshaan huwi hain'..aur boola')

Daadima:'.geet!!! beta!!!...darwaja kholiye!!!! Aapp!!!akeely andar kya karrahi hain!!!!(even meera too asked the same'..)'..

Geet:'.ab!!!! ha!!!.....jee jee!! !!! daadima!!! Main billkul teek hun!!!!.....aap!!! haagey jaahiye!!!! Main aapkey peechey aathi hun!!!!(she is in tension '..maan tried to calm her '..but nope!!! )'..

Maan:/'.(whispering)'.Geet!!!!.....tum!!!! tension matt lo!!!!....main hun na!!!!....(geet ke kandon ko uppar apna haat raka maaney'..)

Geet:'.(whispering)''aaap!!! hain!!! isiliye mujhe tension '..horaha hain!!!...(maan'..heard that and said)'..

Maan:'.Geet!!! chup hojao!!!!...warna!!!!(his eyes are gool gool with red red '.now)'.

Geet:'.(she is looking for place to hide him!!!!.....and dragging all over the room')'.

Daadima:'.teek!!! hain GEET!!!....hum !!! chalthey hain!!!! aap !!! jaldi !!!! bahar haajahey hain !!! meera!!! Aap geet key saath aahiye!!!! '..hum maan sey milkar aathey hain,''(daadi exits)'..

Meera:'.(heard'.some voice from inside the room'..and wonderd who is there ????)'..geet!!! tum!!! Teek tho ho!!!....aur wo!!! Awwaz kya hain!!! '..tumhaey !!!! saath andar khoih hain kya!!!!!

Geet:'.ah!! ah!! Ahh!!! Meera ''.!!! Nahi nahi!!! Kohi nahi hain!!!!....(maan ko bolo dheerey sey'..)'..please maan!!! Aap!!!! Idar chuppjaahiye!!!!......(she dragged his shoulder to near curtain'.(dark red curtain'..)''

Maan:'(with aloud)'.GEET!!!....main'chuvhha nahi hun!!!! Aur naahi tumharey jaisey chuvvey ka dil hain mere paas!!!!.....main MAAN SINGH KHURANA HUN!!!!!.....kisisey nahi darrtha'..(maan'..darwaza kola'..aur meera ko dekhkar''.stop huwa)'..

Meera:'.( no doubt '..maan was there in geet's room''she schocked )'.maan!!!...aap!! yaha!!!

Maan:'woh!!!....meera!!!! main GEET!!! Sey'..millney aayatha!!!!!....(maan meerasey aisa kaha aur'bhaher jaaney hi waala tha'.)'.

Geet:'ah!!! Maan!!! Rookiye!!!!!....(geet ko laga'.maan ko boora laga'..)'..(maan rookgaya'..but mooda nahi'.)'(maan key paas aaney wali this tabhhi'meera ney geet ko rooka'.)

Meera:'.GEET!!!!...hey'.kya horaha hain!!!(twinckled her eyes)'.aap maan ke peechey peechey''hum!! Hu!!!.....abb aap mere saath chalna hoga!!!!!!....dadima ka order hain''(meera to maan)

Meera:'.aur !!! maan aap!!!....kal thak tho!!! Aap geetke peechey peechey !!!!.....aur abb!!! Geet!!!! aapkey peechey'.peechey '..(meera laughed )'.

Maan:'.(maan too laughed and exits)

(its 8.30 PM now'.sangeet has begined '..all ladies arre '..insied doing masthi''but our poor maan ki toil'.is outside'..making kusthi to come inside'..maan has a great relief '.on his face'.that he asked sorry to geet'.here geet too but little bit worried about him '..and little bit sad coz she is missing her family'..remembered everything'.the trailer just gave a glimpse '..).

(Maan & and vicky's gang are outhouse'.doing masti'..and all'.due to sangeet function'..daadi made an arrengemnts for boys in outhouse'..maan'.outhouse ka kona kona '..geet ke saat beetahey huwey moments ko hi yaad karraha hain aur '.smiled'..tabbhi'..maan ka phone bajjraha hain.,'..maan phone utaya'.aur '.bhaat ki'..)'

Maan:'hello!!!....(from that's side'..one man speaking to him'his name is mr. prem chandji'.he is maan's bussines friend who stays at hoshiyaarpur'.he is just 30 years old. ;))'

Maan:'.jee!!! kahiye'.Mr.prem chandji'..!!!kya huwa '.!!!!

Premchandji:'.sir!!!jaisey aapney bola tha !!! teek waise '..main !!! kardiya hain sir!!!!.....woh!!! log kal takk pounch yaahengye!!!

(don't get confuse girls''it's a new twist'.u will know futhure''.enjoy')'

Maan:'(smiled and said)'.jee !!! teek hain!!!....aagye!!! ki baat!!! Main samaaltha hun'..thank u so much!!!!

Premchandiji:'..thank u matt kahihey sir!!!...hey mera!!! Duty tha!!!!....teekey sir'.kal mithey hain'..(het cuts the cal'.)'.

In Khurana mansion:'..

(sangeet ki function bahut zoorisey challraha hain'.sabbhi!!! ladies '..gaarahey hain, naachrahey hain, aur baathey karahey hain''geet'.bahut sundar dekhrahi hain'.lemon yellow choli main'..teeek ek soney ki putliki tara '..woh!!!......hall ke teek middle baitihuwi hain!!!!....ek bagal main daadi baithi hain aur ek bagal main meera''sabb log.'geet ki taarif karrahey

hain''per geet kuch udaas lagrahi hain unki ankonsey pata chalraha hain phir bhi 'auron ke saamney''.jaahir nahi honey diya'..maan aur daadi ke wajesey ''aur geet ke ankhey sirf aur sirf MAAN hi pad sakthey hain''per maan'.

yaha out house main'.hain'.geet ki room per aaya hain'.usko bahut miss karraha hain na''ek ek karkey'..woh!! sabhi '.pall maan ke ankon ke saamney aaney lagey''..maan bed per geet ka ek duptta padey huwe mila '..aur'maan uss dupattey ko''sugney lagey''aur yaha mansion main'.geet'.ko ek aajeeb se aisaas hota hain'..ki maan usski

paashi hain''aur sabbhi auor '..doondthi hain'. '.uss ehasaas ko sirf maan aur geet ''maisoos kararhey hain'..tabbhi'..vickey maan ko doondthey huwey '.geet ke room per aatha hian'. )

Vicky:'.maan baiyya!!!....aap idar kya karrahey hain!!!!..(Vicky saw '..maan 's hand'..that he is holding geet's dupatta'..(green color ka dupatta)''..oh!!!!......aap!!! geet baabhi ko bahut miss karrahey hain!!! right''don't worry!!!.....Big B''hum kiss kaam keliye'..abbhi aapki murhaadh poora kardeythey hain''.(maan was bit relief coz of vicky's words'..and asked )'..

Maan:'.vicky!!!.....tum kya karney waley ho!!!!.....dekho!!! main tumharey kisi shaithani!!!.....plan main'.shaamil !!! hona nahi chahatha hun!!!!(he made cut and clear to Vicky that he don't want to be silly'.)

Vicky:'.nahi !!! big b!!!....aisa kuch nahi hoga 'agar aap hamara saath dey tho'.hum'..andar guss sakthey hain''.(with wicked smile'.keeing his one hand on maan's shoulder'..maan'.saw gave a surprise look'.)'.

Maan:'.andar guss sakthey hain!!!!.....vicky!!!...aisaey '.chupkey- chori sey gussna'MAAN SINGH KHURANA ki ''pikkrat main nahi hain!!!!......aur woh!!! Bhi apney hi ghar main'..bilkull nahi'.(maan turned his face '..)

Vicky:'..wowh!! wowh!!!....cool down bayya!!!....waisey !!!...chodiye hey sabb baathey!!!.....aap kuch matt kariye!!!!....sab humpey chodhdigiye'.!!!(Vicky exits and discuss with other boys 'and made a plan'.)'

In mansion:'.

(Miki ' knew the plan of boys'.how they gonna enter this sangeet function'..and she had an plan to stop them'..

MUSIC ' hoy chall kudiye''(miki called everybody on the dance floor '..)'the song started to play everybody is dancing-enjoying-some jumping-some rolling'..

A song from LOVE AAJ KAL'..-

La la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re,
La la la la la ho gayi re,
Ho tu tussi bhi gao naa,

[La la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re]- 2 times
Kudi hui mutiyaar, aayi roop ki bahaar,
Kar haar te singaar, jab nikli bazaar,
To la la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re,
La la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re,
Ahaa ahaa ahaaa ahaa'

Munde hue pareshaan, dekh roop ki dukaan,
Bole bhaari hai samaan, lenge bech ke makaan,
To la la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re,
La la la la la ho gayi re,
Beija beija beija beija ho gayi re,

La la lal al a(all of a sudden the song was stopped '.and again another music started'..with bam'.)

(tabbhi'.all boys'..headed on to their mission'..they planned to enter the sangeet function like direct entry like macho man's istyle'.:)) '..as maan'a wish it is''with the grand '.welcome of maan'.spot light on him'.now maan is coming slowly '.spot light on him'.geet surprised to see him'.she is smiling'..now maan '.saw geet'.and smiled back'.)'..

jimmy:'.hoy!!! '.start !!! hojao!!! Kudiye'.(jimmy,'.miki ko'..appney taraf keechliya'..[ miki'key haath sey knife, gun matt lagney dena girls'.otherwise she will kill me ;)]'..

(now miki and jimmy , Vicky and meera'..are on the dance floor....)

(vicky maan ko bola'..hoy mere!!! SHERU''chall shuru hojaho!!!....MAAN started to sing'..(aila '..maan is singing''miki'..anybody can see miki *fainted*'.lol'.)

MUSIC'.started

A song from KAL HO NA HO:

Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That' s The Way Maahi Ve

Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke

Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re

Maahi Ve

Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke

Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re

Maahi Ve

Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba

Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba

Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba

Tu Soniye

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Mahi ve mahi mahi ve''

(girls imagin the scene with the songs'.u will enjopy a lot'..)

Geet:'..(apney maan main'..maan ko praise karrahi hain'.)'.

Daadima:'..(too joined them'..and dancing with them'..)/'..

Miki and meera:'..both '..geet ko 'dance floor pey leyaaye,,,,,,,and now the spot light on MAAN & GEET'..

(Now another song gonna play'..anybody can guess which song''.hu~!! hu!!!....common'.)

MUSIC playing '..in BG''

Maan & geet:'.spot light is on '.now the music started'..everybody got their pair'..vicky-meera, jimmy-miki(J)), nakul-sorry shasha is out of order'..:))'.., daadima'.sat on the sofa and watching these pairs dance'..with some other 4-5 pairs'..

A song from hum dil de chukey sanam:'.:))

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum

Teri Kasam

Oh Ho Ho

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum

Teri Kasam

Ye Duniya Kare Sitamb

Tujhpe Mitnege Hum

Teri Kasam

Oh Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum

Teri Kasam

Teri Kasam

Umeedein Tumhin Se Hain Mere SanamThaama Hai Tumhara Hi Ye DaamanHo Bhoolenge Kabhi Na Ab Tumhein HumOh Bhoolenge Kabhi Na Ab Tumhein HumOh Hum Dil De Chuke SanamTere Ho Gaye Hain HumTeri KasamTeri Kasam

'..

Maan:'.(maan'..ek haat sey'.geet'ki waist ko padka ''.aur dussrey haat sey'.geet ki ek haat ko pakda'..aur apney shoulder per'..raka'..geet '.maan ko dekhrahi hian'.ghana '.bajraha hain''hum''dil de chukey sanam''.maan is singing'..)''

Geet:'..(when geet '..maan ko dekney lagi'tho '..tere ho gaye hain hummmmm''.teri kasam''geet also sung that line'.)'..

Maan & geet:'..are dancing ''for this song just like khrbaan huwa''.song sequence''..but slowly, gently, lovely and very passionately''that time a glimpse of love was there in khurbaan huwa sequence'..now here both just out of world'..)'..

Maan:'(music is on its own'.everyone lost in theirs world'..)'.GEET!!!....kya huwa!!!!!.....tum kush nahi hu!!!!(maan noticed her eyes and asked '.)

Geet:'.nahi!!! maan aisa kuch nahi hian!!!!.....main !!! aaj!!! Bahut kush hun!!!!(little bit tear in her eyes)''

Maan:'..GEET!!!(he wants her to tell the truth'..)''

Geet:'.maan!!! aap!!!! waakeyhi mere ankhey pad sakthey hain!!!!!.......tho bathahi na!!!!...aap!!! kya dekkraha hain!!!!....(maan aur paas geet ko pull kiya'..)

Maan:'.hey ankhey!!! Mujhe beena shabdon ke''bahut kuch 'kehdeythi hain geet!!!...inn ankhon main '.itni geyrahi, inti shaant, itni pyaar, aur intna dard'.hey sab kuch ek saath ''mujhe''.pagal kardeythi hain geet!!!!.....(maan'.geet ko ek 'round ghuma detha hain)'..

Geet:'..aap!!!.....(maan geet key hoonton per'.anpi hugli se band kartha hain)'..

Maan:'.shhh!!!!....kuch matt bolo geet!!!!.....kal tumhey!!!!!....iss sawaal ka jaawab milljayega!!!!!(maan is thinking about his plan'.for tomorrow'')

(then song was stopped'.daadima'..enters in between and stops the song'.)

Daadima.:'.aab!!!...basss!!!!...khoob naachli'.app logon ney'abb cha;liye bahar chaliye'..sabbb'..ladkey!!!!....bahar '.jaahiye''aur maan aap bhi./''hey ladies key function. Hain!!!!.....aap sab ka'..intezaam'.out house main kiya hain!!!!....humney!!!!..chaliye!!!! '.(all boys goes out of the mansion''

(maan still holding geets hand ,.,,,,,and seeing each other'.meera interrupts them and ''tells maan to go out'..)'.

(here ends the take of the chapter''.tomorrow''chapter 5''starts with the mehandi''.and SHAADI OF MAANEET'..very very intence moments they gonna live tomorrow'..)



CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 7

Edited by shobhashamanur - 14 years ago

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