FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET - CHAPTER 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Everybody……

Today I am back with THE MOST AWAITED Moments OF MAANEET (MAAN aur GEET KI SUHAAG RAATH)……

~POINT TO BE NOTED~

The Post under by name "FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET "Is NOT A Prediction FOR NEXT EPISODE ……..NOR INTENDED TO HURT ANYONES FEELINGS…..HAVE FUN……..

I Welcome You, Who Are All Really Wants To See My Vision OF Maaneet Romantic Moments…..And WISHES To See The Intense Romance, Cute Fights, Matured Love….etc etc Between Maaneet In Future……Episodes….(HOPE GEET TEAM WOULD NOTICE THIS POST)


Let's start…..

(well week hearted read at ur own risk……)

(We are just having fun ….making weird characters funny…. At this vision….hope others don't mind…..specially DEV, ADI, NAKUL – SHASHA, TAASHA…..fans….LOL)

Present status of all in my vision:

(no need to tel….u all…know where would they be……except CHUDELTARA and DEVil)

Next Post : at 10.45Pm…..

Chapter 7.

(Shaadhi ki raath)

(daadima…..explained all the story to geet's family….)

(panditji ney kaha ….maaneet ki shaadhi sampan huwi….aur badon ka aashirwaad leyney key baad ……sabbi mehmaan …..apney apney ghar chaley gaye…[khaana-waana khaakey]……aur aagey….)…

In Geet's room:…..(meera….and all girls are in geet's room…..meera geet ko tayyar karrahi hain…..suhaag raath keliye……aur geet ki behan , maa, chachi bhi hian…………geet key paas baithey huwey hain…..geet ki kahani sunkarr unn logn ka …..demaak main….kuch bhi guss nahi raha tha……sirf geet ko dekhtehy rehagay…….)

(suhaag raath keliye…..GEET ki room ko…..phoolon sey sajaya hian…....woh!!....bhi With red roses……kahi bhi dekho tho sirf aur sirf red roses ….hi hian……aur ….uss room main ek badasa …round bed hain…..uss bed ko red roses sey sajaya gaya hian…..)…

(sabb logn apney apney bathon main….kogay hain….)

Geet:…..(geet ko bahut gabbrahat horahi hian….ki woh!!!...kaisey sher ko saamna karey…....)…hey !!! babaji!!!...abb!!!...aaphi mujhe!!!!..bachahihey!!!!....uss durst daanav sey…..!!!!...(meera heard what geet said)….

Meera:…GEET!!!......kissey !!!....durst!!! daanav !!!...boolarahi ho!!!!....MAAN!!!...ko!!!!....(meera laughed)….

Geet:….ab!!..ha!!!...nahi!!!...nahi!!!!.....main maan…ko q …durst daanav!!!....kaikey …..pukarungi……!!!!(geet apna….gabrahat ko chupaney ki koshish karrahi thi….)…….

(And everyone…..exits from that room…..except geet…………)….

Maan:….(he is on the way to …geet's room…….and girls stops him and says………maan!!!....aap!!!...kaha!!! jaarahey hain!!!!(all laughed))….(maan bahut serious hogaya…aur kaha……)……q!!!....main !!! aap sabb ko q bathao!!!!......(with his angry look)….(meera enters)

Meera:….maan!!!!.....aaj key din…bhi!!!....aap gussa karna chodiye!!!!......

Maan:…..meera!!!...tum inn sabb ko samjaaho!!!....

All girls:…..arey!! arey!!!......maanji!!!.....ka!!! behkara!!! …tho dekho….geet.sey millney ka….(again all laughed….)…..(maan ko bardash nahi huwa…..aur waha sey….geet ki kamarey ki taraf …nikkal pada………)

In Geet's Room:…..

(geet ….teek waisey hi saadi (a mixture of maaneet's favo colours)…..pehani hian….jaisey ki…maula mere maula…..sequence main pehaney huwi thi….aur iss baar…with mangal sutra and maang main…maan ki naam ka sindoor…….)….

Geet:…..(geet apney kamrey main……idar se udar aur udar se idar……ghoom rahi hian……..ki…abb woh…..maan the sherr ki saaman kaisey kareygi……..abb tak tho teek tha….ki sirf woh!!!!.....maan the lover boy key roop main dekha tha……per aaj sey…..she is mrs. Maan sinh khurana………aur….apni….pathi ka ….saamna kaisey kary………tabbhi ….geet heard somebody …..is coming……and definitely that is……maan)

Geet:…..(herself)….ah!!...hey!!!...babaji!!!....aur hey !!! maan!!!...ittni jaldi q aagaye!!!!....(geet idar – udar dekthi hian…….,maan sey chuppney ki jagaha ……doondrahi hian……..aur ussey curtain dekka….usskey peechey geet chuppgahi…..)……

Maan:…..(enters room…and closes the door…..maan ko geet uss room main kahi nahi …dekki…..)…GEET!!!!....GEET!!!!....kaha ho!!! Tum!!!!.....(geet ki paav curtain sey bhahar dekkraha tha……..maan sabb jagha doondraha hain….per woh kahi nahi dekkrahi hian……geet ney apna ….pher ko….peechey leliya……….poor maan ussko notice nahi kiya….)……GEET!!!.....mujhe!!! patha hian ….tum!!! yahi kahi ho!!!......(maan…ki ankhey bahut teeji sey …geet ko doonraha hian…)….GEET!!!...bhahar aawo!!!.....(maan…look in balcony….)…..(tabbhi geet ….dussrey curtain main guss jaathi hain…)……..GEET!!!....mere!!! saat!!!...chupa-chupi matt!!! Kehlo!!!!!.....main 3 takk ginunga……!!! Agar tum bhahr nahi aahi tho……!!!!.......(he stooped and smiled…..coz he finally saw geet's pallo……and started to move …towards curtain….)……

Geet:…..(herself in husky voice)…hey!!...babaji!!!......abb main kya karo!!!.....iss sankat sey mujhe bachahiye!!!!.....

Maan:…..GEET!!!...sooachlo!!!...agar!!! tum….bhahar !!! nahi aahi tho!!!!........main…tumhey doondhiloonga….!!!....aur!!!...baad main!!!...mujhe!!!!...dosh matt do!!!......(now he is standing ….straight …her…..between curtain…..)

Geet:…(curtain key aagey maan ko dekkarki….breath hi ….rokkgahi……aur ekdum shaanth hogaya…..mahole…..zoorsey hawa,……aakar….curtain ko…..udaliya……….saat main…geet ki baalon ko bhi……maan…geet ko…dekhkar….aisa hi ….kada tha ….geet ki ankhon main doobgaya……….)…….

Maan:….(geet ki taraf …..aaya….aur geet peechey ek step chaligay….,,,maan….geet ki wrist gatt sey pakadliya…..aur kaha)….GEET!!!....tumhey!!! chuppa-chuppi….kehylney ka bahut shock hian!!!....na…....ah!!!...(geet….maan ki pakad sey …..chudwaaney ki koshish karrahi hian…….)…..(…maan again tightened his hold)…..aab!!!...tum hey matt kaho!!! Ki….chodiye mujhe…..kohi aajayega!!!..........q ki!!!....aaj!!!....kohi bhi nahi aaney waala hian!!!!.....(maan key cheharey per wicked smile tha)….(geet….ka dil zoor sey dadak raha tha….),,,,

Maan:….(geet …..ki maatehy per apna…..haat rakhkey…….kaha….)…..GEET!!!.....tum!!!....iss laal rang key sindoor main……bikul…..mrs.khurana…..lagrahi ho……(geet ko dheerey se…..himmat aaney lagi….)……(maan….dheery dheery….apna…haath….geet ki neck per rakhkar…..kaha…)……geet!!!....tum!!! curtain key peechey q chuppi thi!!!!...

Geet:….ab!!! wo!!!...main!!!!......chodiye !!! mujhe!!!!.....(maan ko dakka deythi hian…..lightly…..)

Maan:…(ek step!!!...peechey jaatha hain…..with anger look)….

Geet:…….dekhhey!!!.....aap !!! mere…..pathi !!! huwey!!! Tho isska mathlab nahi hain!!!! ki….app!!! apni….mannmaani!!!karey……

Maan:….(maan ko bahut gussa aaya…aur geet…..ko phir sey ….apney taraf keechliya….)…..GEET!!....Tum!!! meri pathni ho!!! Aur…..main tumhara!!! Pathi!!!....mujhe …tumper!!! Poora !!! hakk hain!!!.....samji!!!.....

Geet:….aap!!! na!!! kabhi nahi samajthey!!!...kahi bhi shuru hojaathey hain!!!!....(apna pallo …ko twist karrahi hian…..)….

Maan:…(controlled his anger)…….(with soft tone)……GEET!!.......idar dekho!!!......kya main such main……tumhey tang kartha hun!!!!.....(he turned her face to him)…

Geet:….(geet bhi pigalrahi hain….)…..maan!!!.....wo!!! mera mathlab…wo nahi!!! Tha…..(maan….geet ko dheery se chodhdiya….aur balcony key taraf ……jaaney keliye…..mooda….tabbhi geet…..)……MAAN!!!........meri baath tho suniye……(geet….maan ko peechey sey hug kiya….)…..ek!!....baar meri baath tho suniye!!!!.....(maan….ke cheharey per ……halka sa smile aaya….).

(GIRLS THIS IS REALLY TOUGH TO WRITE…..)

Maan:….(turned…to geet…by holding her hands ….kissed on her hands……geet slowly coming to the track ……)…..GEET!!!......tum kuch bolna chahathi thi…..(geet ki baalon main apni hungliyon sey……..sulljaraha hain…..)

Geet:….Maan!!!.....wo!!!.....(she wanted to thank for what maan ….gave her a surprise……but …stopped …there coz….maan playing with his fingers on her bared back……and she lost her sense…..)….(….maan…..slowly ….removed her knout ……..)……(geet ……suddenly turned to him….)….hey!!!...aap!!!...kya!!! karrahey hain!!!.....

Maan:…..Q…!!! tumhey nahi patha!!!...(with naughty smile…..)…….(kissing on her shoulders….)

Geet:….(smiled….and pushed maan to backwards……aur balcony ke taraf baagi…..)…..(baagthey samay…..geet ….ki saadi ka pallo…..door pay atakgaya………aur rook gahi….)….

Maan:…..(uss pallo ko….apney haath main pakad key…geet ko apni taraf ….keechney laga……..geet…….apnay ek haat ….dil pey rakkkey……peechey ….keechi chali jaarahi thi…..)

….(maan….. peechey sey apni dono haathon sey…..geet key wrist ko circle kiya…)..(….aur….geet ki shoulder per kiss kiya….)…(aaj tho kiss ki baarish horahi hian..,,,,LOL)

Geet:….(geet ….maan li uss move sey…..poori tarah kogahi….usski dil ki dadkan…zoor sey….dadakkrahi hian…..dheerey se turn huwi……maan key taraf….)

Maan:…..GEET!!!....(geet maan key hothon per apna…..hungli rakkar….)….

Geet:….shhhhh!!!!....(apney sir hilaya….)……….(geet …..aur paas aakar…..maan key dono…..ankon per kiss kiya….aur dheerey dheerey ……maan key dil per…..bhi kiss kiya…..)….(maan apna ankh band kiya hian….uss …..momnet ko ……enjoy karrah hain…..geet maan ko dekhkey…..sharmaagahi…..aur …..Balcony main….aagahi….maan ko kya horaha hian ...kuch patha nahi chala…aur ekdumsey apna ankhey kola tho…geet…..10ft doori main kadi hain……chaand ko dekrahi hian….baadal …..chaand ko….chaarahi hian……baarish….aaney ki …dheery hain…..)….

Maan:…(geet key taraf dheerey …..baadraha hian…..tabbhi….pani….key bhoondey tapakney lagi…..)

Geet:……(…andar…jaaney ki koshish main thi…..tabbhi ….maan ussko rookliya…….haat pakad key……..aur joor sey baarish barasney lagi………)

Maan:…..(geet ko…..apney baahon main utaliya…..aur dheerey sey andar lekey jaarah hain…..geet …..maan key ankhon main doobi huwhi hain….BG…music …starts)…..(maan geet ko…..bed pey sulatha hian…..aur….mann main dono…..ek doosrey ko jaawab deythey hain…..sirf maan ki mann ki baath geet sunn sakthi aur maan geet ki anhon main…..usski mann ki baath padleytha hain……)

NOTE:….GIRLS IF U HAVE THIS SONG ON UR SYSTEM …PLEASE DO LISTEN WHILE READING THIS ……U WILL ENJOY MORE…..OR ELSE U CAN GET THIS SONG…. ONLINE……

A Song From Jhoom Barabar Jhoom: Bol na halke halke…..

Maan:……(geet key paas baitkar)……..(Dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke………….
ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke……….)….(geet per dheerey sey bend horah hian….)

Geet:….(with shy)……(turns her face aside )......(sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se……. ulajhi rahein meri saansein……..)……

Maan:…..(geet ki chin ko pakadkey……apney taraf turn karthey huwey…..)……..(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke honth se halke halke, bol na halke……….)………

Geet:…. (maan key gaalon per apna haat rakhkar…..…..)……..(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke honth se halke halke, bol na halke……….)………

BETWEEN MUSIC:……(.GEET …KEPT HER PALM ON MAAN'S CHEEK GENTLY……MAAN…TAKES HER PALM….AND KISSED …..WITH DUE SHY GEET ROLLS ONE ROLL OVER BED…..)

Next Scene:…..Geet…standing near window……maan comes near to geet …..

Maan:….(holder her hand from back…..)…..( aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab le………….)….

Geet:….(looking into moon…..and rests back her head on maan's shoulder …..)…….( ….ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein………….)

Maan:……(maan…keeps his hand on her both shoulder……..chand key taraf dekhkar….)……..( kitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de)……

Geet:….(turns…to maan …and keeps her head on maan's chest……and touches his heart)……(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke)……….

Maan:….(cuddles….her head by keeping his hand)…… …… (bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke)……….)

BETWEEN MUSIC:….GEET....DO STEP…..BED KEY TARAF …..JAARAHI HOTHI HAIN….PER MAAN…..USSKEY KO HAATH DAALKEY…..ROOK LEYTHA HIAN…..GEET…..MAAN KEY TARAF TURN HOTHI HIAN…..AUR MAAN KEY ANKON KO DEKHKAR……APNI HAAT SEY …..USSKEY ANKHON KO BANDH KARTHI HIAN………

(bahar baarish zoorsey ……padrahi hain…..aur zoor sey hawa bhi challrahi hian….cutarins……uddrahi hian…..hawa key wajesey…..)

Maan:….(geet ki haat ko paney haat main…..leykar…….)…..(
umarein lagi kehate huve, do labj the ik baat thi…….)….

Geet:….(maan key ankhon ko dekhkar…….)……..(woh ik din sau saal ka, sau saal ki woh raat thi……)……..

Maan:…..(…..kaisa lage jo chup chaap dono,
ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaayein…)……(both hugs…..without any hesitation )….

MUSIC:…..both…lost in hug……feeling each other's…….flawless, unconditional…… love…..

Geet:….(still in hugging position…..geet hearing to maan's heart beat……)……..(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke…………..)….

NextScene:…..baarish rook gahi hian…….aur balcony main…….maan kada hian…….geet maan key saamney………

Maan:…..( ….. maan geet ki cheharey ko apney haat main leyker…….)….(…..o dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke…..)…….

Geet:…..(saw….maan….and her eyes…are speaking now… )…..(o ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke……)…

Maan:……(maan …..phirsey geet ko utakar…andar leyjaarah hain…….)…….( sharm aa gayi toh…….)……(….lands her very smoothly on bed…..)…….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet:'..('apna'cheharey ko '.ek taraf moodliya'..(''aaghosh mein lo''..)'.

MAAN & GEET.:'''('.ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein)'''..(maan dheerey sey'..geet key upar bend horaha hian ''..and '..maan offed the light ''.from his one had'''slowly 'the rooms starts to darken''.and music goes on'''(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) ''''..

Finally....maaneet's soul united in full form........aaj geet pooritara sey maan ki parineta banngahi......

Next Morning:''A new fresh morning welcoming maaneet'''..with full of joy '..Slowly the sun is rising from the east '..geet is still on the bed'sleeping with no fear of world'''maan was already woke up'..he is just out from bathroom''.maan apna sirr ko pouchthey huwey'..bhahar nikla''.aur aainey key saamney kada hokey'.apney badan key upar '.pani ki bhoondhon ko towel sey pooch raha hain'aur tabbhi GEET'.ko dekha!!!!....aainey main'......bed per soothey huwey'..aur kal raath key unn lamho ko yaad karthey hi'.maan ki hooton per '.halkasa'.musskurahat ''dekha'aur peechey mooda dheerey dey '..geet ke taraf badaraha hain''.

Maan:'..(moving towards geet''slowly'..cherishing the moments which he spent last night with geet'..)''.(maan says to himself)'..GEET!!!....tum!!!...soothey huwi!!!...aur bhi ''maasoom lagthi ho'.bilkul''.ek nanni pari ki taraha!!!!.......(geet changes her sleeping position'.)'..(maan 'geet ki cheharey per baalon ko dekhkar''ussey hattaney keliye'.usskey paas baitgaya'.)''..

Geet:'(geet ki cheharey per'..suraj ki kiraney '..chumrahi hain'.aur aisa laggraha hain'maan ko jalan horah hain'..uss kiranosey '..isiliye'..maan '..geet ki cheyraey ko ''apni parchayi sey '''suraj ki kirano ko '..rookliya'.)'

Maan:'.('.maan'.apney moosey ''.halkasa '..hawa blow karaha hain'..geet key cheharey per''baalon'.ko hataney keliye'.)'..

Geet:'.(geet ''.ek jerk di'maan ko'.abhi bhi '.neend main hain'.wo)'..(maan'..geet'..ki ankhon ko dekha'.aur '.geet ki mathey per'..ek halkasa'.chumma diya'.)'.

Maan:'..('..cupboard key taraf '.gaya'.dress up honey keliey''.)'.('maan is wearing '...dark purple shirt with dark ocean blue jeans'.. looking so steamy'..wow!!!)'.(maan '.ko kuch yaad aaya sur''room sey bhahar gaya)'.

Geet:'.(dheerey sey apna ankhey kuli'aur apney bagal main maan ko naa dekhkar'.ek dum sey uttgahi'.)'..maan!!!....maan!!!....(hey !!!...maan!!! kaha!!!! Gahay!!!!.....she is worried)'.(bechainsei hogi thi geet)''(aur bed sey uttkar '.door key taraf aaneyhi waalithi'..tabbhi'..maan '..enters'.)'.

Maan:'.(geet ko uss mood main dekhkar'.poocha)'.GEET!!!....kya huwa''tum!!!....ittni jaldi !!!...q uttgahi!!!!....(geet key aur paas aakar poocha)'..

Geet:'.(rooney ki moo banakar'.maan'.go gutt sey hug kiya'..aur kaha)''kaha!!! Chaley gahey they aap!!!....huh!!!.....mujhe chodhkar!!!!!....(tears in her eyes)'..jabb mainey ankh kuli '.aur aap ko '.mere paas naa dekhkar''..meri saashi rook gahi thi''(maan '..rubbing her back'.and said)'.

Maan:'GEET!!!....(holding her face)'geet!!..idar dekho!!!....tum'ittni !!!...gabbrahi q ho!!!.......aur main tho yahi tha''!!!!......(he is worried '.why geet is overreacting '..)

Geet:'.maan!!!...wo!!...mmain!!!....(maan'wiped her tears)'..kuch bhoora sapna'..dekha mianey!!!!.....issiliye/''.!!!(she told the reason behind her overreacting'')

Maan:'tho!!!...mrs. Geet'Khurana!!!!....ko !!!...sapney main bhi'.mainey aapke saath kya kiya'..(with naughty smile)'.(geet got serious'.and turned her face'..maan tried to set her mood'..)'..

Geet:'..App!!!....na!!!....aaj kal bahut sharaarthi hogaye hain''.!!!...aap!!!!.....mujhe q nahi utaya !!!....(geet maan se do step peechey chali jaathi hain)'.

Maan:'.(maan '.geet ok aisey hi'..patt sey apney taraf pull karleytha hain'..aur )'.GEET!!!........jab main subha subha'tumhari iss'.killthey huwi cheharey ko dekha'..(maan geet ki 'gaalon per apni hungoli se ''baalon ko'peechey key taraf ''karraha hian.,'..)'''tho mujhe''tummain!!!...ek nanni si, pyaari si, ek maasoomsi'..chothi'.GEET!!!....dekhahi di!!!....

Geet:'.(geet ko maan ki baatheyn sunn kar'.kuch bhi kehnahi sakki''uttna impress karliya hain hamara sherr'.aur '.dekthey hi rehagahi''.baath hi aisa kaha maan ney ,''NANNI GEET!!!!.)'.(and music starats'..MAAHIII!!!!!...MAAHIIII!!!!!!!......)

(Someone knock the door'..but maaneet din't heard it'.)

(tabbhi '..nakul enters room''.)

Nakul:'..(nakul with not expressions on his face standing with holding the breakfast roller'')'.MAAN!!! sir'..(MAANEET'..nakul ki aawaz sunnkar''nakul key taraf dekhtey hain)''heyligiye''aapney GEET!!! Madamji keliye''Breakfast !!!!.......farmayathana''mainey wo sab '.aisehi banakey laya hun'aur aapkeliye bhi'..!!!!...(pulls the roller near sofa'.and turns to maan )''MAAN!!!...sir'main'.abb chaltha hun'..kisiki jaroorat padi tho boolalijiyega''(nakul takes exits'.)

Geet:'..(geet'..maan ko dekhkar'..kehathi hain'.ki')'.aapney meriliye yeh sabb !!!!!(tabbhi maan keeps his finger on her lips and syas)

Maan:'.GEET!!!....jaldi jao!!!..aur fresh up !!!...hokar aaho!!!...saat main breakfast karlengey''(maan''geet ko aur paas ''pakad key kehatha hain'..)

Geet:'..(MAAAHIIII''..still starring at each other '.eye lock'not again'.)''..chodiye!!!.....mujhe!!!....aap!!! aisey hi !!....pakad key rakkengey tho ''subha se sham aur sham se raat ''hojayegi''aur seeda '.dinner hi karwadengey mujhe '..app'.!!!(geet maan ki hathon sey chudwakey 'washroom chali jaathi hain'.fresh up honey'..)

(after half an hour'..)'..

Maan:'.(waiting for geet''tabbhi'.phone rings)''(a call from office'..adi is talking'.)'.hello!!!......ah!!! kaho adi!!!...

Adi:'.sa!!! sa!!! Sa!!!....sir!!!......a a a aap aur Geet!!!...i mean Geet ma'm!!!!.....aaj office'..aarahey hain na'sir'..q ki'.aaj office main'.app dono keyliye'...sabbhi employees '..ek chota sa'.welcome party rakkey huwey hain(shaadi ke khushi mian),'..'.agar 'a a a aap dono aathey tho''hum sabb ko accha lagtha''sirf aada ganta sir'..(crossed his fingers'..)

Maan:'.(maan is thinking ')'ah!!!...adi !!!,'..hum dono!!!!....aarahey hain!!!!...(adi was so happy '..and beside him pinky is eating popcorn ''when she heard '.maaneet's are coming''she poured popcorn on adi's head''..with full of joy'.isn't it so funny???.....)''(maan to himself)''kya!!!...Geet!!! ko iss haalth main'.office lekey jaana'..teek raheyga'.???.......main tho chahatha hun'.ki geet meri saath office aahey'..per iss haalath main???.....(tabbhi geet overhears him'.)

Geet:'(geet '..was just stepped out from washroom'..with wet hairs'..she is looking like a white lily dipped in a snowy due '.ahhh!!!....so gorgeous'..and praising'.beauty she is''.wearing light pink saari'..with micro sleeves'. Blouse''.glowing like a Kohinoor '..on the crown'''simply superb'..and little bit bump is showing '''now anyone can say she is preggy '''.she heard "office"'.from maan'.)''.OFFICE???....maan!!!...aap office jaaraey hain!!!!.....

Maan:'.(turned his face'..where from the voice he heard'..and stood up with jaws open''when he saw'.his '..Mistress ')'..(again geet repeated the same question to him)''ah!!...wo!!!....office sey adiney !!!!..call kiya tha'..(he told what adi said'.)'..

Geet:'.maan!!!....aap'!!!....kya chahathey hain!!!...(bent her head '.slight to left '.and asked him'..)''.

Music :''piano '..music'..

Maan:'.('..saw geet's eyes and understood what geet wants to know'.)'..GEET!!!.....main '..kya chahatha hu'abb hey jaroori nahi hain'.(maan geet key peechey kada hokey '.geet ki wetty baalon ko side pey kiya sur'.blouse ka knout '''baandraha hain''.)'..hey jarrori hain ki aab'..tumhey apna kaas kayal rakkna hoga'..!!!.....(geet maan ki '..saason ko maisoos karrahi hain'..apni ankhen baad karkey)'..GEET!!!...tum sunnrahi ho'..!!!...

Geet:'..umh!!!...ha!!!....maan!!!....(tabbhi daadima enters'..)

(maan'daadi ko dekhkar'..geet sey ek kadam door kada hogaya'.)

Daadima:'..(smiles at both'..geet daadima ki phery choorahi hothi daadima'.stopped and kissed on her forehead'.even maan too'.)'..Maan!!!....Geet!!!....aaj aap dono''.gurudhwaar jaakey ''.wahey guruji ki'.aashirwaad 'leykey ''aahiye'.aaj 'aapki'.shaadi ki pehali'..din hain'..bagwaan ki aashirwaad sey shuru karey tho ''achha hoga''(keeps her palm on geet's face'..)'..

Maan:'.jee!!!...daadima!!!...woh!!!...humhey pehaley office jaana hain'..waha''sabbhi employees hamareyliye'..ek chothisi.....party hain''baad main hum dono'..gurudhwaar '.jaakey aathey hain'.(saw geet's face and says)'..hain!!! na geet'.!!!!!

Geet:'.jee!!!...jee!!! daadima'.!!!!(she is confused actually what maan wants '..)'..(daadima exits)'.

Maan:'..(comes very near to geet and '.)'GEET!!!..tum'.iss saari main!!!.......(something said in her ears'..)'..

Geet:'.(widening her eyes and opened her mouth too'.)'..awwhhh!!!.!!.....hey babaji'..hey maan ko '..kya hogaya hian'''..(looks up)'..(geet waha sey'.mirror key paas jaathi hain'.aur maan'geet key peechey'.)

Maan:'.(geet ko peechey sey rookney ki koshish kartha hain'.lekinn''uss rookney ki jaldhi main'..geet ki pallu ko zoor sey keechleytha hain'..)'.

Geet:'.(geet key pallu'.abb maan key haat main'.aur '.mirror key taraf'.mudi 'apney dono haathon sey '.upar key portion ko cover karkey kadi hain'..sharam sey geet ki ankhey jukki huwi hian''.)'..

Maan:'.(maan'.apney haat main 'geet key pallu dekkey'.apni galthi ka aisaas huwa'..phir bhi iss galthi ko baar baar '..karney sey ussey kohi aitraaz nahi hain''ek baar pallu ko dekha aur geet ko 'mirror main dekha'.maan ki ankhey '.and survey karna shuru hogaya''.)'.

Geet:'.maan!!!.....mera pallu chodiye!!!!......(geet apney pallu ko maan ki hathon sey'..leyney ki koshish karthi hain'.per'.maan'.gatt sey pakda hain'..abb'..maan dheerey dheerey'.geet key paas aaraha hain'')''

Maan:'.(maan'.geet key paas aaya usskey peechey kadahogaya'.ek haat main pallu pakda hain'..aur dussrey haat sey'..geet ki wet hairs ko''side mian karraha hain'.aur mirror main geet ki ankhon ko '..dekhraha hain'.)'.

Geet;'..(geet'.maan sey nazar nahi milapaarhi hian'.she lowered her eyes'.with husky voice'..)''Maan!!!.......humhey '..office!!!!!!.. (tabbhi'.maan''geet '.ko'..suddenly'..apani taraf '.turn kartha hain'')'.

Maan:'..(closed her mouth from his one hand'.and said)''.GEET!!!.....abb !!! tho chodo !!!...bahaney banana'..!!!!.....aur '.(smiled with naughty look'.)''.(maan '.geet ki chin ko haat main leykey''geet ki '.sindhoor bari maang pey''ek halkasa'.kiss diya'.geet apni ankey band kiya hain '')'..

Geet;'..(maan '.key haat main sey apni pallu ko chudakey'..do step '.haagey chali'.tabbhi maan'.geet ki haat ko pakada aur pallu 'ko '..geet per odliya'..aur 'geet ney maan sey kuch kehney chli'per kuch nahi kehpaahi'.coz maan'.ki hungliya'..geet ki gardan key paas hain'..uss touch sey '..geet ki saasey '.jump karrahi hian')'

Maan:'.(..he kissed on her neck '..saw geet'.through mirror and said)'GEET!!!...''.merey taraf sey '..pehala '.tofa'.!!!!.(maan '.ek diamond necklace ko '..apney ek haat main leykey''geet ki galey main'.daalraha hian'.)''

Geet:'.Maan!!!....hey!!!.....haarrrr('.she is surprised'now '.)''..maan!!!....app meriliye !!!...ittna kuch karrahey hain'.per !!!...main aapkeyliye ''unn saari kushiyon ko '..nahi dey paarahi hu''.'.jinnka ''aap'..asall main''.hakkdaar hian'..(she had tears in her eyes''..and rememberd last night what happened'')'.

(RECAPE Of Last Night:'.(First Night)'..

When maan '..Offs the light '.slowly he bends on geet'.and kisses her forehead and says to geet)

Maan:'.GEET!!!....hey raat hamari '.shaadi shuda zindagi ki'.pehali raat hain'.aur har kohi chahatha hain'ki'hey raath kuch kaas ho'..aur main bhi chahatha hun'.per'..iss waqt mujhe tumhari sayhad ki '.fikar hain''aur 'tum bhi '.takk chuki ko''aisey '..bahut si raath hum'..pehaley bhi saath katt chukey hain '..aur ''tumahri saat bitahi huwi har ek raath '..meriliye ''kaas hain''aisey raathey tho bahut hi aayengey '.hamarey zindagi main''.(geet ki ankon main ''aansuhon ki bahaar aagahi'..aur '..geet key mann ka '..jo darr thi ho mittgahi'..aur maan key liye usska pyaar ,hizzath aur bhi 'badgaya'..)'..GEET!!!!.....tum!!!.....abb soo jaho'''. main'.. sofey pey sootha hun,'''(maan'gets up from the bed'')

Geet:'.('grabs his sherwani collar in her hand)'..MAAN!!!......aapki!!!...mann'.bahut hi ''.pavithr hian!!!!....aapko'sofey per soney ki zaroorath nahi hain''yahi soosakthey hain''merey paas'.(maan''smiles'..and papmers her '..)

Maan:'.(geet ki baath sunnkar '..usskey paashi sootha hain ''aur geet'.maan key shoulders per apna sir rakkey soothi hain'..)'..

(this is the recape'.and next)''

Maan:'..GEET!!!!.......wo'.saari kushiya tumsey judi hain,''jab tum kkush ho'..tabb main kush hotah hun''''.aur ''kushiya sirf '.pathi-pathni '.mann key milan sey hain '.balki'..jism ek honey sey nahi''..aur hamari risthey ''..mann sey judi hain'.!!!!!!

Geet:'..MAAN!!!......main kittni kush naseeb hun'app jaisey '..pyaar karney walye miley hain muje'..(looks up 'to herself'.hey !!!...babaji'..!!!...aap'..iss kushiyon ko''hamesha banahey rakkna'..)

Maan:''.abb tum!!!.....mujhe!!!!......bagwaan banana chodhdo'..aur jaldi'..tayyar hokey '.breakfast karlo'..humhey office jaana hian''.(maan '.sofey key taraf jaatah ahin'..breakfst ki 'plate leykar'.geet ko'..kaaney keliye kehatha hain''.)



CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 8


AND CHAPTER 7 CONTINUES ....WILL UPDATE SOON......

Edited by shobhashamanur - 14 years ago
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hey nice one..and very very executable onscreen !!!
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Originally posted by: gooseberry

hey nice one..and very very executable onscreen !!!



thank u gooseberry.....and check my other posts .....(chapters)...u will enjoy a lot
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Wow i really liked it - very sweet and i can imagine it happening on screen
thanks for sharing
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wow its amazing..... good job shoba.. waiting 4 d next take.. 😊
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good work yaar, but after very long time
ls yaar next part update soon
keep writing
love monica
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Thanks for sharing :) x
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Good job please update soon.
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Very well written.....except that now they should consummate their marriage.......they waited for so long to be together......it should happen now.......no more dooriyan

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