FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET - CHAPTER 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello……Everybody…...


Today I am back with THE MOST AUSPICIOUS Moments OF MAANEET (MAAN aur GEET KI SHAADI……


~POINT TO BE NOTED~

The Post under by name "FUTURE VISION FOR MAANEET "Is NOT AN Prediction FOR NEXT EPISODE ……..NOR INTENDED TO HURT ANYONES FEELINGS…..HAVE FUN……..



I Welcome You, Who Are All Really Wants To See My Vision OF Maaneet Romantic Moments…..And WISHES To See The Intense Romance, Cute Fights, Matured Love….etc etc Between Maaneet In Future……Episodes….(HOPE GEET TEAM WOULD NOTICE THIS POST

Let's start…..


(well week hearted read at ur own risk……)

(We are just having fun ….making weird characters funny…. At this vision….hope others don't mind…..specially DEV, ADI, NAKUL – SHASHA, TAASHA…..fans….LOL)


PRESENT STATUS OF EVERYONE IN MY FUTURE VISION:


Daadima : …AFTER sangeet, …..at the same night there is a MEHNDI ceremony …..daadima is busy in arrangements (MEhndi ceremony will start at 11.30PM)


Geet & Meera:…meera, geet, pinky, tasha and some others were in meera's room……chit=chat goes on


Description of a Perfect Bride (GEET) :……

Solah shringar are the sixteen adornments of an Indian Hindu bride, which contribute to her complete beautification. Wedding has always been a fantasy for every girl. It is a dream, she is born with and wishes to realize with utmost care and precision. This can very well explain her urge to look her best on the D day. Moreover, it is considered that a girl starts her new life after marriage, so she should feel good about herself. This is why solah shringar is a mandatory practice for all the to-be brides.

Solah shringar are the sixteen adornments, which aim at making the bride look beautiful from head to toe. In fact the process itself pays attention on all her body parts, embellishing them stunningly. Thus, all the brides go through this complete makeover for that special day. So, for all the girls waiting to be brides, here is a quick look at the elating procedure of solah shringar.

* Firstly, the hair of the bride are properly oiled and washed. They are then dried and twined according to the wedding dress. Lastly, they are accentuated with Gajra, strings of flowers.
* The bride is given bath with a mixture of gram flour, turmeric powder, sandal powder and oil. This acts as a scrub and provides glow to her skin.
* After this she dons the wedding dress, which is usually in red color.
* This is followed by putting kajal in her eyes, to enhance their beauty.
* Now, her splendor is further highlighted by ornaments. She wears a mang tika or borla on her forehead, which is made of gold.
* Bindi is a must for the bride as it symbolizes dedication towards her husband.
* She also wears a nose ring in her left nostril, which is also an essential accessory.
* Necklace or Haar is a must and symbolizes prosperity.
* Ear rings or jhoomars are worn in accordance with the necklace. They are heavy and are supported with chain.
* Giving a more traditional look to the bride, armlets are worn on the upper part of the arms.
* Bangles both made of gold and glass are mandatory for a bride to wear as they signify the long life of her husband.
* A bride wears eight rings in both her hands, which are attached with a central flower or medallion that covers the upper part of the hand.
* Accentuating her curves, a waist band is a traditional jewelry worn by the bride
* One of the most sensuous and attention grabbing accessory worn by the bride is anklet. It is worn in both feet.
* Another important jewelry item to be worn is the toe ring. They are also a symbol of her marriage and are worn till her husband's death.
* Not to forget, one of the prettiest ways of accessorizing a bride is with the help of varied henna designs. Mehndi forms an integral part of any marriage.

Nakul:…..is busy in making decorations for mehndi…….unnki gulabo (shasha)is on the way to mansion…


Adi:…..Adi is with maan in outhouse doing bangra – balle…..i mean to say …..Giving bangra lessons to maan……

Maan:…as usual …..Giving weird look to Adi coz of his funny things….and Vicky, jimmy and few more boys were doing party …….(BACHELOR PARTY


Dev:….dev is really feeling guilt for what he did to GEET……and sobbing ……


NT:…..Finally ….NT gets a nice SLAP from Clinton's Daughter….coz of trying to cheat her…..now NT's new husband is getting married with Clinton's Daughter…..now the NT's situation is…
" DOBI KA KUTTA NA GHAR KA RAHA NA GAATT KA"…….


KHURANA MANSION MAIN:…..sabhi rishthey dhaar….. ……ekattey horahey hain…..q ki kal jho shaadhi hain……


Oky this is fine now…..

Stay tuned girls I will be back soon …..with next take(CHAPTER 5)……..at 1.15 PM……till then take care of the post……have fun

Chapter 5

DAY 3(continues…..) & DAY 4

(sangeet ke baad daadima sabb ladkey ko bahar jaaney keliye khehathy hain…….usskey thodi dheery ke baad MEHNDI ki function keliye tyaari main……lagjaathey hain sab key sabb…..)

(in outhouse:….all boys are gathered and planning for bachelor party(BP)…..and Vicky was bit afraid to ask …..or take permission for it……jimmy is influencing Vicky to ask maan for BP……Adi and Maan both were talking…..)

Maan:….Adi!!!....tum!!! hassna!!! Bandd !!! karogey!!!!(adi was irritating maan by his funny laugh….)

Adi:…..je je je jee!!! Sir!!!!!.....a ah ah ah aap!!!!....aaj key din bhi!!!! ……..aap!!! ithney serious q hain sa sa sa sirrrr!!!!!!!

Maan:….ADI!!!!...(vicky interrupts them)….

Vicky:….maan!!!! baiyya!!!!......mujhe !!! aapsey !!!! kuch poochna!!! Tha……nahi!!! Nahi!!!! Permission chaahiyetha!!!!!(Vicky….bahut tension main hain……ki agar maan baiyya……ek keechkey diya tho……mera tha ….nikal padeygi…..)….

Maan:…..ah!!! bolo!!!....kya baath hain!!!.....kissikeliye permission chahiye tumhey!!!!!....(maan Vicky ke kandey per apna haat rakkar …..poocha….)

Vicky:…..baiyya!!!!....wo!!! wo.!!! Main!!! Main!!!!(saw jimmy's face ……and other boys too)……

Maan:….vicky!!!!...saaf saaf!!! Kaho!!! Kya!!! Baat!!!main……tum idar-udar q dekhrahi ho!!!!.....

Vicky:….baiyya!!!.....sabb!!! ko!!!......pa pa party chahiye!!!!......(maan raised his eyebrows)…….ba ba ba bachelors party…..(maan face is serious now….)…..mujhe nahi!!!!......inn sabb ko!!!!(he pointed to other boys …..)

Maan:….Vicky!!!... (smiled)…..mainey!!! tumhari kisi baatkeliye…..aaj tak mana kiya hain kya….!!!!....go ahead !!!!(he smiled…..)…..

(all boys where jumping and dancing…….jimmy had plan and made an call to someone …..and said something in vicky's ear…..vicky's expression…..is like…..he will soon face the death….!!!!)

In mansion:……

(….miki ……geet key saat dosthi karliya hain….aur dono key beech ki misunderstanding….door hochuki hain……bahut kul-mil kar…baathey kaarahey hain……meera aur bhi kuch ladkiya…..sooach rahey ki….sabb ladkon ko baahar peekney key baad…..beecharon ka kya haal hoga…..everybody burst at laugh…..)

(GEET…..maan ki baathon ka matlab soochrahi hain,,,,and remeberd what he said while dancing…..(maan:…tumharey iss sawaal ka jawaab …..main tumhey kalll dungha geet!!!!)….and meera….asked geet what she is thinking…..everybody at time said ……aur kissjkaa….MAAN ke bharey main….hoga….then daadima…enters the room)

Daadima:….(saw everybody kidding geet…)…hey kya horaha hain……!!!!...hamarey !!!! geet!!! Ki…..taang keechy jjaarahey …..ho,….aap sabb log….!!!!(daadima comes near to geet ….and kisses her forehead…..)….

Geet:….(bows to daadima……)……

Daadima:…kush rahiye!!!....beta!!!....(she remembers something and goes out…..)….hum….abhi aathey hain!!! meera….aap sabb log…..neechey !!!aajahiye….!!!....mehndi key rasam!!!! Abb shuru!!! Honeyhi waali hain!!!!...

Meera:….jee!!! daadima.!!!(meera geet ko….mehndi key rasam key issabsey ……ek suite dehkar …kehathi hain ke…….)….GEET!!!...issey pehanlo!!!!...hum log !!!! neechy tumhari intezar karthey hain…..(everybody goes out…..and geet closes the door…..)……

Geet:…..(apna kapdey …. http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=2066312&id=1470193246&saved#!/photo.php?fbid=1493208258078&set=a.1493063014447.2066312.1470193246 change karrahi hain….tabbhi…..maan ka call aatha hain geet….ko)….(girls iss link key uppar click karkey deklo…..geet key mehndi ke suite)…..

Maan:…(geet ko call karta hain….bachelor party key baarey main….bataney keliy…..per geet …kapdey change karrahi hoothi hian,,,,,issiliye maan ka call utanahi pathi….)……hey !!! GEET….mera call q nahi utarahi hain!!!!.....(thinking….)….

(tabbhi….in outhouse ……..kohi….aaraha hain….andar…..barwaajey per kadey hain………face nahi dekhraha hain……..maan,adi,Vicky..jimmy…..sab log….door peyhi dekhrahey hain……..aur wo saksh…..aagye …aagaye……..aur abhi lakdey…..khehaney lagi…..aay!!!......ek .....houn hain!!!.(maan ek chehara …..with full of …surprise…..)…

In outhouse:…..

(SABBHI…..ladkey…..uss shaks ko….ankhen paad paad key dekhrahey hain…..aur maan tho…vicky ke taraf …..dekha guessey sey…..vicky…..jimmy key taraf …….point kiya……aur jimmy peechye chalagaya…….aur who!!! Adi ke taraf ……tha……aur adi….uss shaks ko dekhney…..main maggn tha….maan adi key taraf …..bada…..)……

Maan:….ADI!!!!(adi was shocked …..coz of maan's high tone…..vvoice…..)…..

Adi:….(adi apney sects ko….girrney se bachaya….aur)….je je jejeee!!!! Sa sa sa sirrr!!!.....aa a a aapkey !!!.......BP….main!!!!.....dance bhi hoga!!!! Hey mu mumujhe patha nahi tha sir!!!!!....bahut achhey sir…..

Maan:…adi….bano matt!!!...hey sabb kya!!!...hain…..(adi …pissed off)…..

Adi:….(started to laugh……)…huh au huh u huh u !!!....ka ka kak kya mathlab hain ……apka !!! maan sir…..!!!(made a face like crying baby….)….(jimmy enter between them….)….

Jimmy:…maan!!!....dude!!! hey ….BP….aisey parties to…..ek dance key bhageyr ……adura lagtha hain!!!!.....just chill…..issmai ….adi ki kohi galthi nahi hian……!!!!(Vicky too joins jimmy)….

Vicky:….ha!!! bayya!!!...please….!!!! mana matt kariye!!!!....(everyone pleases maan)…..(finally maan says yes with one condition……)…..

Maan:…..oky!!!....oky!!!...per ek condition hian!!!!.....(Vicky asks what …..)…..mujhe!!!,,,,,inn sab main!!!!....shamil nahi hona hain!!!!...got it!!!! Aur ……mujhe daadi ko….bhi iss baat key bhaarey main……justify karna hoga!!!!(thinking how he will explain to geet…..)

Vicky and jimmy:…..winks to each other and says yes…..

(the song started…..before that…..uss shaks ha introduce tho karu….)….

(presenting the adorable and loveable…..Miss. Rimsha Nadeem….she is a very very famous dancer….in the bollywood industry…..very nice and beautiful….kind hearted…..bit nakra….(rim's don't kill me)……lovely…..she is coming inside…….payal ka boomru…..ahhh!!!,…totally……mast-pataka…..)….

A song from :…..Dabang…..

Munni badnaam huhi!!!! Darling terly liya…..)……started….

Munni badnaam hui, darling tere liye - 3 times
Munni ke gaal gulabi, nain sharabi, chaal nawabi re
Le zandu balm hui, darling tere liye
Munni badnaam hui, darling tere liye
Munni ke gaal gulabi, nain sharabi, chaal nawabi re
Le zandu balm hui, darling tere liye - 2 times
Munni badnaam hui, darling tere liye - 2 times

O munni re, o munni re
Tera gali gali mein charcha re
Hai jama ishq da ishq da parcha re
Jama ishq da ishq da parcha re
O munni re

(song started…..)….

Maan:….(maan bahar jaarah tha tabbhi……rims ney maan ko rookliya…..apna haat…..maan key saamney laakey……..and gave a killer look……maan still serious……saw her ….)……

Rims:…… Munni badnaam hui, darling tere liye……….(maan key gaalon per apna…haat rakkliya………rakthey hi……maan apna face peechye taraf leliya very smoothly….)

(everybody started to dance……darling tery liye……even adi too….he is trying something new….bangra-pop mix…..looking so fun…..)…..

Rims:….. Munni ke gaal gulabi, nain sharabi, chaal nawabi reeeeee…….(she showed her cheeks and sung,,,,,)…..(rims wearing pink colour ka lehanga……so beautiful work on it……she is dancing ….wow~!!!!....superb…..clap clap….)…(revolving …..over maan…..)….

Maan:…..(serious face……tried to go out again…..but boys dragged him and requested to …….dance……atleast few steps….)

Rims:….. Le zandu balm hui, darling tere liye
Munni badnaam hui, darling tere liye
……(again maan ko ukksarahi hain….dance karney keliye…..and finally rims…..qaamiyaab huhi…..iss darling to dance karney keliye majboor kardiya……)…..(now maan….started …to dance…..)……

Maan & Vicky , jimmy:….(started to dance with rims…..holding their stole ……..rims too joined…..maan is dancing just like in the sequence of where is the party tonight…….wow!!! the tapping, the moves….gosh!!! marjawa……..main to gahi khaam sey…..kya naachtha….hain maan. – waise girls….gurmeet shamak dawdh the great choreographer ka pakka shishy hain….aur …..shahid kapoor ke saath classes liya hain…shamak ke paas)….(imagine how he dances ….)……

Jimmy :…..(rims abb…sabbhi key beech main naachrahi hain….sabbi…apney enjoyment koyehuwey hain…. vicky, jimmy…..adi…..and rims……still on…and on…..tabbhi…..)…

Maan:….( maan….waha sey….kaise…..gayab huwa kisiko pathahi nahi chala………dheerey se….outhouse sey bahar nikal pada,……)

In Garden:….maan bahar garden main aakar….chain ke saas leliya…..aur geet…call na attend karney ki kya karan hosaktha……hey soachney laga……per peechey sey kisika haat maan key shoulders par padi…..)….

(maan …peechey mood kar dekha ki….koun hosaqtha hain…..aur wo!!!.......)…..

(aur …..wo!!! daadima thi…….)

Daadima:….maan!!!....aap!!!!...garden!!!! main!!!kya karrahey hain!!!!......aur wo!!! ….bhi !!! iss waqt!!!!......(daadi heard the loud music from outhouse and asked…..)…..aur maan!!!!.....beta!!!!.....hey !!! outhouse main!!!!.....kya horaha!!!!.....hain!!!!....ittni shoor –sharaba!!!!!!!.....(daadi outhouse taraf jaarahey hothi hain tabbhi….maan)….waise main aapse hi millney jaarahi thi!!!!

Maan:…..DAADIMA!!!!.....rookiye….!!!!.....(daadima….hears maan and turns to him…..then maan comes near to daadi and says)……..woh!!!...waha!!!! party challraha hain!!!!.....

Daadima:….party!!!!.....kisstaraha key party maan!!!!!(she wonders ……how come she don't know about that…)….…

Maan:….wo!!! daadima!!!!...Bachelor party!!!!!.....hain aur!!!!!......(daadima….bachelor party?????)…….ah!!! wo……Vicky aur unnkey sabbhi dostho ney!!!!.....bahut force karrahey thy!!!....isiliye mainey bhi!!!....ha!!! kardi!!!!(daadima smiled…..and said)…..

Daadima:…..beta!!!....tho !!! aap yaha kya karrahi hain!!!...jaahina!!!...aap bhi enjoy keejihey!!!!......Ek baar shaadi hogay tho!!!!.......aisa mouka phir nahi miltha hain……(maan was so surprise……he thought daadi would scold him……but nothing happened like…that coz…..daadi is too modest and she can understand and support …the todays youngistan……)…..(daadima….exits and maan….went in search of geet….to mansion…..)….(the party in outhouse is still on)….

In meera's room:….Geet!!!.....green color ka lehanga ….pehan rahi hain…..per ussey lagraha key ….kuch fit nahi horaha hain…..wo!!! uncomfortable feel karrahi hain…..aur phir!! Kohi darwaza katkatraha hian!!!.....

Geet:….koun!!! ….hian!!!.....(geet ko laga shaayad meera hogi)….meera!!!!....tum !!! ho!!!...(she comes near to the door and asks….)

Maan:…..(meera ki room ke bhahar maan kada hain…..andarse geet …..poochrahi hain koun!!!…..)….(maan bholney hi wala that …..ki main maan!!!!,….tabbhi geet ney darwaja kholdiya …..ussney dekha nahi woh….maan thy……hey samji key shaayad meera hogi…..coz woh apney….chunni ko kaisey ….pehanna hain….ussi confusion main thi…..aur jaisey hain darwaza kola….ussney turn karakey….kaha…)….

Geet:…meera!!!...tum !!! aagahi!!!...,…iss chunni ko dekho!!!!....kabb sey try karrahi hun….issey pehaney keliya…..magar nahi ho raha hain…!!!!(geet turned ….and ….what she saw…..maan standing…..there….out….he entered the room and closed the door….)…..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan:'.GEET!!!....mujhe tumsey kuch baat karni hain!!!(geet'.said to herself hey babaji!!!'.abb!!! kya!!!....)'.

Geet:'.(geet coverd her upper part from that chunni'.with dew shy'..)'..(maan slowly coming to her'.)'.

Maan:'(maan takes her chunni in his hand'.now geet covered up with her two hands''')'.

Geet:'maan!!!!!!..(she turned '..her back ''now maan'put her chunni over her head '..- as I given link to the suite'..same chunni'.now both were looking over to the mirror '.to their images'.)'

Maan:'GEET!!...main tumsey kuch kehaney aaya tha!!!....(geet'.said)'

Geet:'ha!!! Kahiheyna!!! Kya baat hain!!!....(maan 'just opened his mouth to tell'.tabbhi'meera enters'.)'..

Meera'.:'Geet!!!...tayyar !!! huwi!!!(maan ko dekha'.)'.aur kaha')'maan!!! Aap '.phirsey yaha!!!....chaliya!!!!...bhahar chaliye'.(meera '.made him to go out again'..)'(but geet was thinking'..what maan sir intented to tell'.)'.

(think what maan intende to tell GEET'.guess'.???girls'.)

Girls I will continue next take'..tomorrow'..at 12.30''

(maan ki jaaney key baad meera., miki and geet ''abb neechey aarahey hain''''maan already went down''standing at one corner of the hall '.and looking at GEET''..geet ke aaju-baaj main meera and miki are coming ''.geet bilkul pari jaise lagrahi hain'..(aasman ki pari'.)'.

(so gorgeous ''so innocence'' in her eyes''.kithney baar bhi dekhlo''baar baar dekhney ko mann kartha hain geet ko'..aur maan ka kya haalth hogi kudh hi soochlo'..uff'.geet dheere dheere neechy aarahi hey''..geet ki ankhey maan ko hi dhoondrahi hain'''.maan '.geet ko''apney haat se ishara kartha hain'..key main yaha hun'.GEET!!!!.....geet!!!! ki mann ko shanthi milthi hain'..maan ko dekh key!!!!!......tabbhi'.vicky!!! maan key paas aatha hain''.)

Vicky:'.maan!!! bayya!!!....aap yaha !!! hain!!!.....aapko kaha kaha nahi dunda mainey aur jimmy ney!!!!.....achha chaliye!!!!!!!.....mujhe aapsey ek jaroori baath karni hain!!!!........seriously''bahut bada problem!!!! Hogay hain!!!!.....chaliyena mere saat!!!! (v icky 'takes maan outside'..maan unwillingly went out'..looking at geet''again geet'.saw maan was not there'.... )'..

Outside the mansion:'.

Maan:'.vicky!!!....kya baat hain'.

Vicky:'.big b!!!!....woh!!!!....meera aur miki ko patha challgaya/'..ki hum log ney!!!!...BP main'..!!!.... Rimsha !!!! ko boolaya hain!!!!...aur woh!!!!!.....uppar sey!!!!.......(maan was so in shock'..and his mind running '..like a bullet train'..what if meera or miki tells geet''before geet should known from anyone else'..about the party and dance''.maan wanted to tell her the truth'.maan knows that meera wont tell'.but what about miki?????.)'''

Maan:'.Vicky!!!...unndono ko kaisey patha chala!!!!....(maan is in tension now)'..

Vicky:'.wo!!! big b!!!.....mikiney!!!! (stopped)'..

Maan:'.(maan ka tension aur baad gaya'..phir bhi maan ko yakeen hain ki'geet usski baat nahi suneygi'..so bit relief for maan'..but Vicky ka tho band bajney wala hai''meera jo jaanthi hain!!!!)''

In mansion:'..

(GEET '..ki haathon main mehndi '..lagrahi hain'..sabbi'.geet ko cheadrahye hain''.miki aur meera dono mehandi lagarahey hain geet ko''mehandi '..ka rang geet ki haaton per khoob '.rang layegi q'ki maan jo itna pyar karatha hian '.geet sey''geet ki dono haaton main'.M'ka alphabet bahut achha lagraha hain''.geet maan '.ko yaad kiya'.aur sharmaney lagi'..light sa smile hain'..usskey hothon per'..

MEHNDI: Not to forget, one of the prettiest ways of accessorizing a bride is with the help of varied henna designs. Mehndi forms an integral part of any marriage'..from here starts'.making GEET a perfect bride'..)

Miki:'.GEET!!!...tumharey haathon per mehndi bahut !!!!.....acchey lagrahi hian!!!!...(smiled '.and meera to joined her voice with miki'.)

Daadima:'..GEET!!! beta''jara@!!!!! Dekhahiya!!!! 'hamhey bhi!!!(daadi saw geet's hand'..and smiled)'..arrey!!!.....wa!!! meera aur miki!!!...beta aap dono ney kamal ka design !!!! Dala hian!!! Geet!!! Ko'..(meera says)'.

Meera:'..Daadima!!!!......mehndi key design !!! kaise bhi ho''gheri rang tho tabbhi chadeygi!!!!...jab''unnka mann suchha aur achha '.ho'!!!!.....aur !!!! maan tho geet sey apni jaan sey bhi jaaza pyar karthey hain'.aur geet bhi''.kudh sey jaada''dekhleegiye na'..hamari geet key haaton ki mehndi ka rang kaise chadey ga'..(all '.said yes yes'.)'.

(mehndi ka function katam huwa'''kal raat ko shaadi hain'.isiliye sabhhi'..apney apney kaam main bussy hain''.mehndi laganey key baad geet'..uppar '..dusrey kamrey main hain''(meera or jimmy ki nahi '..aur ek karma '..kaas geet keliye hi'hey'.)'..geet ki kamray bahut hi vishal hain'.usski room ki kittakiya bhi''bahut vishal hian'..hey karma '..outhouse se doosrey ki taraf hain'.jahan seyyy poora aakash dekhraha hain'..aur balcony bhi uss kamrey ko'.attached hain''bahut sundar dekkraha hain'.jaise poora aakash''ek ......geet ko kushiyon key uppar odliya hain bhuri nazar sey bachaney keliye'''aur chand bhi '...geet ke kush main shamil honey aaya hain''aur taarey bhia''geet '..balcony main''aayi'..abhi mehndhi '.ko uttara nahi hain'.aur suite ko bhi''..tabbhi'.maan''.uss room key andar aaya'..aur geet ko'.balcony main''..kadhye huwe'.dekha''..)''

In outhouse:'..BP'. chalraha tha'..aur tabbhi!!! Miki!!! Waha!!! Pounch gahi!!!.....vicky ko doondthey huwey!!!!!....q ki meera ney Vicky ko bahut baar call karney ke baad bhi Vicky call attend nahi karaha tha''meera ko Vicky sey kuch kaam tha'..isiliye'..meera miki ko''poocha ki jimmy ko call karrey'..aur jimmy bhi call receive nahi karraha tha''miki ko shakk huwa aur outhouse chaligay'..vicky aur jimmy ko '..millney keliye''.)

Rims:'.(abhi bhi rims '.naachrahi hain'..munni badnaam huhi darling tery liye''.tabbhi '..miki enters the outhouse'.and stunned to see all of them'.were lost in rims'.dance ''aur Vicky ney miki ko dekkar '..shock huwa'.aur jimmy ko 'bolo'..ekdum sey kaamosh hogaya'.saara mehaphill'..aur rims'..wondering '..what happened all of a sudden)''

Miki:'..toh!!! hey hain!!!! app!!!! Dono ki call naa utaney ki kaaran!!!!!(she folded her both hands asked'..)

Vicky:'.mi mi miki!!!!...tum yaha!!!!.....kya karrahi ho!!!!.....(even jiimmmy asked her'..)

Miki:'.vicky!!!.....meera ney tumhey !!!! call kiya tha,.,,,,,aur tumney '..utaya nahi !!! isiliey ''mainey jimmy ko bhi call kiya tha'..aur who!!!!! Bhi '..nahi utaya'..!!!!!.(both Vicky and jimmy checked their mobiles'..but unfortunately '..they forgot there mobiles on sofa''and dint heard the ring!!!!!)

Rims:'..MIKI!!!....miki sinha right!!!!(miki rims ko dekkar '..sooch main pad gahi'.hi ki'..ussney rims ko kahi dekha hain'..)''.

Miki:'.(haa!!!!......hey '.iss ladki ki shakal tho meri ''.bachpann ki sehali''rimsha sey milthi julthi hain'..kahi '.hey wohi tho nahi'')'..

Rims:'..miki!!! pehachana mujhe!!!! .....main '..rimsha !!!!......rimsha nadeem!!!!!......(miki'.ney apney ankhen badey badey banakar ''ek surprise sa look diya'..)'.

Miki:'..oye!!! tu !!! rimsha hain!!!!....yaani'.rimmy!!!!...(dono ney galey lagaliya'..aur haal-chaal poochliye''.kushi sey ''.uchalrahey they'..aur becharey hamarey '..ladkon ki saari maza hi'.karaab hogaya'..(rimmy aur miki'.dono '.apney apney life key bahrey main'.bathaney lagey )

rims:'.sachmey miki!!!....mujhe aaj bahut kushi huwi tumhey yaha dekkkey'..!!! aur tu yaha kya karrehi hain!!!!.....tum tho '.lodon gahi thi n a!!!!..... aisa !!! sunni mainey!!!!.....

miki:'.oye!!! rimmy!!!!.....mrs. meera Vicky khurana'..!!!!(Vicky ke taraf dekkar kaha'..)''unnki '.best friend hun main!!! Aur main yaha !!!!.....vicky key bahi maan singh khurana key shaadi attend karney!!!! Haahi hu'..!!!!!!....aur tu'batha !!!! sunna hai!!!! Bahut badi dancer bannchuki !!!! hain!!!! aur tu!!!!......BP'.main!!! naachney keliye q!!! raazi hogay!!!!

Rims:'.miki!!! '..pehali baar kisi ki BP main naachney keliye maanghey q ki'..!!! mujhe maan khurana sey ek baar millnatha''.!!! Kaafi sunatha usskey baarey main!!!! Isiliye!!! Maangahey!!!!.....waran!!!! inn !!!! '.ladkon key beech main kisi ek ka shakal dekkho mujhe!!! Ki MAAN SINGH KHURAN'.sey jasiey handsome, graceful ho'(ladkon key taraf dekkar bolo'.rimmy ney'.)'..

Miki:'.(rimmy key bath per hassney lagi aur '..rims bhi'..sabb ladkey tho'.sharmsey'..moo chupaney baagrahey they'..)'..achha!!! chodo!!! Inn!!!....monkeyhon ko!!! Abb!!! Aur waisey bhi '..bandar ki tarrha'..uchal-kudthey rehatehy hain!!!!Chall mere!!! Saath!!!....main tumhey!!!! MAAN SINGH KHURANA ki!!!!!.....honey wali'.MRS. Khurana sey tumhey !!! milathi hun!!!! Abb!!! Wo meri best friend bannchuki hain!!! Chall!!! Idar sey!!! '.(tabbhi'.rimmy ney miki ka haat pakda aur kaha'.)''

Rims:'.miki!!! '.asiey !!! millu!!!.....iss kapdey main!!!(rims'..apney kapdey ki taraf dekh kar kaha'.)'.

Miki:'.oye!!! challna!!!....rimmy!!! main hun na!!!!(miki and rimmy'.exits.)'.

Vicky and jimmy:'.talking to each other''

Jimmy:'.vicky!!!... hey !!! kya hogaya !!! yaar!!!! Saara BP ka mood karaab kardiya'..!!! iss mikiney!!!!......hmmm!!!! ussko tho main dekhlonga!!!!....

Vicky:'.(flashed some thing and said)'..hoy!!! jimmy!!! Agar mikiney!!! Meera ko!!! '.BP key party main!!! Sabb kuch batadiya tho !!! '..mera tho!!! Band bajjega yaar''aur saath main MAAN bayya ka bhi!!!!!(both are in tension what to do ???)

In GEET's ROOM:'.

(Maan enters GEET room ''maan ki ankhey geet kohi doondrahey thy'..uss kamrey main'..GEET nahi dekhayidi'..Geet balcony main kadi hain'.aasmaan main chand ko dekhkar anpneyaap main kuch badbadarahi hain'..)

Geet:'.(iss!!! chand ko dekhkar !!!!....geet ko apney ghar-maa-bawuji-bahi-behan sabbhi ki eke k karkey yaad aarahi thi''aur halkasa aasu bhi geet key ankhon se ''.beyraha tha'..geet uppar key taraf dekhkar'.kaha)'..

''.hey!!! babaji'.kal mere jindagi ka!!!....bahut badey!!! Kushi!!! Ka din !!! hain''Hasso baad mujhe'..tab jaakey'.iss kushi ka naseeb huhi hain'''mere shaadi horahi hain!!!!.....woh!!!!!...bahi!!! '..!!!....MERE MAAN sey!!!!!....aur!!!(tears are rolling down'.)'.iss!!! kushi key mhokey main!!!!......mere apney!!!! kabhi huwa karthey thy''mere parivar'..abb mere saath nahi hain'..iss kushi ko baatney keliye!!!!!(she is crying aloud now'.)'..

Maan:'.(maan'.kamrey main geet ko doonthey huwey'.balcony key taraf mooda'.tabbhi'.geet'.ki baathey sunn kar''maan ki dil ko bahut dard huwa'.aur)'..

Geet:'.aaj!!! maan ki wajey se!!! main!! '.duniya sey laddna seekhi hun!!!!..... aur himmate sey apna sir utakey'..!!!....aagey baddna seekha hain maine!!!!....agar !!!! maan nahi hothey tho!!!!......main kabbka!!!! haur !!!! kadkiyon key !!!! tara!!!.....jurm seheythey huwe!!!!.....ussi hoshiyarpur!!! Main!!! Padihothi!!!!!!......main!!!! kush naseeb hun!!!! Ki mujhe maan!!!! Jaisey !!!!! jeevan saathi mele!!! Hain!!!!!......(geet chand ko dekhney lagi '..ussmey maan ka chehara dekkraha tha '..aur apney haathon ki mehndi key taraf dekha'.ussmain bhi maan ka chehara dekha ''ussey'halkisei muskuraahat'..geet cheharey per bahut achha lagraha tha'..)

Maan:'..( maan '.teek geet key peechey kada hain'..geet ki baathey sunnraha hian'..aur tanddi hawa'..geet ke badan ko chookar'.maan ko choorahi hain'..zoorsi hawa ki wajese'..geet ki baal'hawa main uddrahi hain'.'..maan key chharey ko'..choomrahi hain'..maan ko kuch aajeeb se feel huwa''aur geet ki khusbhoobo ko ''sunkey '.trance main padgaya'.aur apney ankhey'.bandkarliya'.)

Geet:'..(GEET'.ko maan ki moujudgi'..ka ehasaas huwa aur'..tabbhi''uss tanddi hawa''.ki wajey sey'..geet ki chunni ''uddkar'..kahi aur jaakar girgahy''.uss chunni ko pakadney ki jaldi main'..GEET'..peechey kadey maan ke ''uppar girrgahi'..)'.

Maan:'.(geet ki hadbadi sey'.maan'ko apni '..khohi huhi duniya sey ''bahar lekar aaya'.aur GEET'.ko saamala'..dono'..floor pey girrthey girrthey bachgaye!!!!!....aur kaha)'. GEET!!!....samaal!!! key!!!!....kya!!! huwa!!!!...(maan ney geet ko dekhkar ''kaha'..shock main tha )''

Geet:'.(maan key sawaal ka jaawab deney bajay'..geet apney mehndi ko check karrahi thi '.ki'.kuch''karaab tho nahi huwa'..aur chunni ko bhi boolgaye'.)'..shukar hey!!! Babaji!!!....ka!!! ki '.meri haaton ki '..mehandi '.!!!!....karaab nahi huwi!!!!!......warana !!! he tho apshakun hotha'.(geet 'hey boolgahi hain'.ki waha maan kada hain aur unnki chunni bhi kahi aur padi hain)

maan:'.(maan geet ki bathon ko sunn kar'.usskey taraf dekha'..aur '..geet ko dekthey hi rehgaya''.chunni jo nahi tha ''.geet ke uppar'.)

BG MUSIC:'.maaahiiiii!!!!!!!!

geet:'(apney aap main badbadrahi thi''aur tabbhi '.ussney maan ko dekha''aur dono ki eye lock ''shuru hogahi''.3 min keliye'.)

BG: mahi!!! Re maahi !!! mahi!!! Vey!!!!!......

maan:'.(dheerey dhereey '..geet key taraf aarah hian''aur chunni ko utaya'..floor sey'..apney hathon main'.uss chunni ko roll roll karkey'..geet '..ko ek killer smile diya''')''.

Geet:'..(geet'..ko maan ki haathon main chunni ko dekhkar'..tabb jaakey ussey maloom huwa'..ki'.abb tak wo'.bagher '.chunni hi maan sey baath kaarahi thi'.aur '.usstarf mood liye''q ki '.apney haathon sey tho wo!!!!...apney aap ko cover nahi karpaayegi'..q ki mehandi karaab ho'jaayegi''..)'.

Maan:'.(geet key paas aakar'..maan ney uss chunni ko'.geet key upar odliya'.maan ney geet sey kaha'..)

Geet:'.(geet'.maan ko dekhkar kaha'..)'.aap!!!...yaha!!!....kabb!!!! aye!!!!.....(geet ko laga'ki maan '.bahut dheeyr se waha pey 'usski baat sunrahey thy')'

Maan:'(maan '..geet key paas aaya aur kaha'.)'.GEET!!!....tum!!! teektho ho!!!!....(maan'.ney geet ki baat sunatha isiliye poochraha'hain.!!! shayaad !!!! geet ,'.apni!!!!....uss baath''ko maan sey share nahi karna chahathi hogi''aur maan bhi usskey beethey huwe!!!!.....yadonko''.taja nahi karna chahatha hain'.isiliye'.geet'ki mood teek karney keliye'.maan'..usse cheedatha hain'..)'''.Geet!!!!.....tum!!! hamesha!!!!.....jaanbujkar!!!! apni hey chunni(chuuni key taraf point karkey)'..ya dupattey ko'..udney dethi ho!!!!.....taaki!!! main tumhey!!!! Har baar!!!!........laakey du'..

Geet:'.(maan ki baat sunnthey hi''.usse DEV se pheli baar molakaath yaad agahi'.(pehali baar geet chunni ek temp pey chukgaya tha'..tabb DEV ney aakar uss chunni ko chudwaya tha'..aur rooney lagi''.andar baagahi'.)'..

Maan:'.(maan, geet ki mood ko teek karney keliye'..aisa kaha'per hey tho ultha hogaya'..aur maan geet ki aasu dekhkar''sooach main padd gaya aur geet ke peechey gaya)'.

Geet:'(roorahi hain'..maan ko dekhkar''geet maan key ekdum sey baagi aur maan ko galey lagaliya'')'..

Maan:'..GEET!!!....Kya huwa!!!.....maine!!!! tho sirf majaak karaha tha!!!!(geet'..maan key kandon per apna sirr rakkar ''zoor sey roorahi hain''.geet ko sirf ek bahana chahiye tha'..rooney ki''aur maan ki bathon sey''wo bhi millgaya'..zoorsey rooney lagi'..apni'.maa-bawuji-apna ghar sabhi ko '.yaad karkey'.)''Geet!!.....mujhe maaf kardo!!!....mujhe!! patha hain!!! tum q rorahi ho!!!!....

Geet:'.(geet'..ko maan ki baath sunn kar'.ussko dekha'.with surprise'..maan ko kya patha hain?....kahi maan ney mere baat tho nahi sunnliya!!!!!)'.

Maan:'.GEET!!!....mujhe!!! maloom hain!!! ki '.tum!!!....apney parivar ko miss karrahi ho!!!.....hain na!!!....(geet 'maan ko hi dekhrahi hain'..)'..GEET!!!....main'.sabb jaantha hun'..!!!.....(maan geet ki aasuhon ko'apney haathon sey'.poochliya aur kaha'.)'..GEET!!! tum!! Kabb samjogi!!!....inn ansuon ka keemath!!!!.....hey !!! ansu!!!! Bahut hi!!! Anmol!!!! Hain mereliye!!!!!!....issey kabhi!!!! Huwi!!!! Behaney math dena!!!!....(another drop of tears '..about to fall down'..from geet's eye''maan'..drunk that tear'..and kissed her eyes'..)''

Geet:'.(maan ki baat sunnkar'..geet'.chuphoney lagi'.aur tabbhi'.!!!...kohi aarah hain!!!....)'..maan!! kohi!!! Istarf !!!! aaraha hain!!!.........(aur dono'..kadey hogay'..)'..



CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 7

Edited by shobhashamanur - 14 years ago

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