OS: Farewell Prt 2 pg10 Jan 6

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

wow !!! awsome yaar...loved it ....

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Jaz,

yeayyyy u updated ..

awesome update .. thanks alot hun .....

love

Sana

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Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

wow.....

it was such a beautiful OS....

written so beautifully...

the concluding part of this OS was simply marvellous................

portraying so many unsaid emotions and feelings in a two part series is really a task....but u wer spectacular in depicting themm...

i am completely speechless after reading this OS

keep writing dear

reva

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

awwwwwww..i just loved it...u showed how things change so fast at times...loved the happy ending :)

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anshu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

" When the time finally came, Maan stood speechless at what he was witnessing ' a miracle. He'd always known Geet to be an amazing woman, but seeing her do this he didn't have the words. His love, respect and admiration for this woman grew ten fold. This is why there was nothing like a mothers love ' she fought against everything and anything to bring her child into this world safe and sound. People always thought men were stronger than women, but clearly they were wrong. No matter how hard men tried, they never be able to conquer the power and strength a mother displayed ' never".

This one paragraph touched and stirred so many emotions in my heart that tears welled up without my knowledge. Beautifully written!!! Felt so strong once again with the above paragraph.!!! Thank you for instigating a sense of pride that every women should take in herself being women that sometimes gets forgotten on the daily basis and telling that women are indeed strong enough !!!!

The concluding part about giving farewell to cold-hearted MSK and welcome to Geet's Maan is amazing!! Maan's acceptance to life in the form of Geet and leaving his hot headedness for the love of his life is what we girls love and admire in him.

Loved every part of the update!!!

And thankyou for giving us such a nice piece of writing to cherish .👏👍🏼

Edited by sneha0504 - 14 years ago

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Jaz that was as awesome as always......

maaneet so belong together and baby the bonus

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

lovely

beautiful OS
all the unsaid word were beautifully explained

loved it

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

This was mine JAZ..ahhh i cried..i told u i love the rona dhona ones and i got it..ahhh thnku..it was beautiful..

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Ilovemsk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

awwwwwwwwww

that was awesome.....so cute

loved the good ending

it was more positive then the last one!!

thxxxxx xxx

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Heyyy twinnie

omggg u finally made this a happy ending?😲.....am i dreaming?😲

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....yayyyyyyyy twinnie i lovee u double, triple and all that more rite now!!!🤗.....umm not that i don't love u when u don't have happy ending....umm yeah *scratching head* but i just love u a teeny weensy bit more hehe😆😉

O-M-G!!....dude u keep on literally blowing me away with your updates!!.....shoo sowiee i cudn't comment earlier....see i accidentally deleted all my pms yday...ya go smack me now and on top of that i fell down the stairs today so it hurts like hell but seeing this made me all happy happy😆....but i did read ur last pm b4 i deleted it😆....awww thank u soo much for updating this weekend.......ofcourse u wud lovee my comments....where else wud u find an awesome muffin like me?😉

k enough bak bak, moving to the part.....ohh god, honestly, i was soo close to tears...no kidding😳.....see, i told u even such stuff can move people over....actually, its just ur writing twinnie that moves me in general so it doesn't matter what genre u write, it never ceases to amaze me!😳....you brilliantly, i repeat, absitively posilutely BRILLIANTLY, depicted maan's pain👏.....omg i can never get tired of saying you are an EPIC writer!!😳....seriously, what did u eat when u were little?😆.....mujhe bhi batao, college essays ke liye chahiye😆

uff i keep on falling in lovee with this guy deeper and deeper....he carried a ring everyday, in hopes of finding her?....man, where r guys like these nowadays?....and his simple yet beautiful confession was sooo touching😳....not over the top or anything, just simple and perfect....and the section about a mother's strength....couldn't have said it any more beautifully!👏

and u know me....i am such a title freak....and i have read many stories on similar title but dude, u just gave a whole new meaning to this one....ohhh god do i look weird if i say the ending was absitively dreammmy and romantic😳....yes, i am talking about the entire farewell part.....u have this magical ability of making ur readers reconnect with the title at the end and i simply adoree u for that!😳

all in all, thank u for not making me get the bulldozer😆....ur safe temporarily, considering how the updates go this weekend😆😉

lovee you!!!