OS: Farewell Prt 2 pg10 Jan 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
very nicely written....i guess it is futile to blame any one of them....both r in a very difficult situation....its time they stand by each other....and if their love is true they will do so....
maan needs time to absorb the shocking news he just heard....he needs times to introspect his own feelings right now....
and geet needs to give this relationship some space...she needs to believe in maan's love and needs to gather her own pain and despair born out of maan's sign of rejection...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Amazinggggggggggggg update.
But sooo sad at the end.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Thats Fabulous Dear
LOved it
Loved Geet's Letter sooooooooooooooooooooo much
But thats a Sad Ending😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Moi Still Waitin For the Second Part *Taps her Leg*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
awwwwwww......it was so perfect!!!!
i had a doubt it will end with maan finding her!!

was awsum....luv d emotions flowing !!!

lovely as usual!!.....gr8 job!!

loved it......dis is d only OS i read :D

tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kooLgrl786

awwwwwww......it was so perfect!!!!
i had a doubt it will end with maan finding her!!

was awsum....luv d emotions flowing !!!

lovely as usual!!.....gr8 job!!

loved it......dis is d only OS i read :D

tc
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T@$

I suggest u should read all her OS's they r Fab 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Nice. want to see same in Geet Serial also.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
wow that was wonderful..can we have more to this pls..
JUST LOVED it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Awesome dear...
Loved it!!!
Want a part 2 of it!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
You have put it so nicely. You have balanced both Maan & Geet's feelings, emotions and trauma. I really felt good that he left the place like that. i never wanted him to be the super human being who enjoys and assures that he was not affected by her past. true after realizing the fact that she was at no fault he will feel that but at the moment he is a man first then Maan. So it felt right for him to feel like she used him and his support. He was right in feeling jealous of the other man who was in her life and as a normal MAN with possessiveness for his love, he felt she deceived him. She said he should have waited for her to narrate her full story before leaving the spot. But when a roller coaster ran over him, how can he stop from leaving the place? If he had waited for her to complete her story, would he have believed it? would his ego let him accept whatever she tell him as truth? NO, I don't think so. So he did right by leaving that moment.. It gave him time to recollect what all happened between them and how? He will realize as the time pass that, she was never at fault in their relation. She never tried to take advantage of his company or her position in his life. He was the one who forced her to every thing. be it professional or personal. She never wanted to work too close to him and he forced her to accept to work on Chopra project. She always wanted to stay away from him and he always found some excuse to be around her. She never wanted to be his Mangetar but he tricked her with Daadimaa's name. She never wanted the ring and he forced oit on her finger claiming that they are frriends and yet again telling about Daadimaa's feelings. She never wanted the world to know about their engagement and he proudly announced it openly. Finally he wanted her to trust him and when she trusted him, he could not digest the truth!!!!!!!!!
Now, once she has left the place (which I presume will happen), he will get the time to rethink on all the happenings and that is when I think Mr. Devil will choose to spill his wrong deeds and he might tell him the girl whom he deceived. Only then Mr. Maan Singh Khurana realize that his love (Geet) was never at fault and she never dejected him. It was the fate that dejected her and she took it as a challenge to lead a life of her own.

Your OS is too good and I only hope Geet leave a letter for Maan in the coming episode.

Jaya

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