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Dimple

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Posted: 15 years ago

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jazz this was superb. I loved it alot!! I just wish Maan finds Geet soon 😉

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shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

awesome.. u've penned down Geet's feelings beautifully..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Did the emotional blackmail work?

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Laila

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

JUST LOVED IT WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE SECOND PART

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hemvb

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

awww... that was so heartrenching....
could you plz continue this OS??????? it would be great to know how maan looks for geet....

emma

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Noor Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

@Soni-Sanraj yep agree wid u on 2nd part
jaz plz write 2nd part cuz

1. its sad ending

2. don't like geet leaving maan

❤️ noor

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Wow yaar jus loved it

Kash this has only happened in Geet but after watching epi all my hopes shattered

I realy wished to c sumthg lik this par jo dekha wo toh............

But i really want 1 thg to happen thats Geet leaving the house n going

Maan isnt listening to her fully n she isnt at fault

Loved the way u expressed felings emotions n pain

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-Premeena-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

an amazing OS it completely touched my heart ... ure a rockstar when it comes to expressing feelings .. i felt the anger and the pain... amazing...!! do write more..=)

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Sona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Hey Jaz!

That was heart breaking OS...pls add Part 2 if not happy ending, at least let him apologize!

-Sona

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Awesomeeeeeeely writtennn Jazuuuu 🤗 omggg...just too good yaarrrr..but def. was heartbreaking!!

Cant wait till u write part 2 [:D/]

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