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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

wow... tahxn nadia ur amazin..!!=)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

awhhh....candle scene was too guD!!!!

plz continue!!!!

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

this is nice naddiya...prefer this to ur ff Simply Love....
please continue
thanks

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uzmam1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

great stuff naddiya .. look forward to your next update😛

Uzma

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Swati Chowdhury

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Do continue... N plz some real hot stuff..

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Ayesha_MSK

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

BEAUTIFUL Naddiya as always! ⭐️
The scenes when Maan is lost in Geet and when he first sees her in the library are simply magical! 👏 👏 👏
Please continue with the next two parts asap 😃

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Nadia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

the whole part

<font size="3">Geet : Babaji mein kya karo... where to hide i can't go infront of anyone like that....she hide her self in cupboard.
Dev Enter room couldn't find her any where yeh bhai kai hona wali mrs bhi bhai kai tarah hain..
suddenly light went out
Dev :yeh kya huwa let me check he went out . bang with maan
Maan: who is this?
DEV:Me bro not bhabi .... smiled
Maan: what are you talking about.
DEV:dadima said your hona wali wife was here.
Maan: pagal ho tum.... go fix the fuse i am going to my library
Dev ok i will
Geet was sacred who was there .as it was all dark she was not getting out of cupboard heard
someone entering the room . she held her breath
Maan lighted candle he wanted to take out book from the cupboard he open with one hand candle in other.

Geet came out with a jerk :ahh . grab his shirt
Maan hold her from her waist Mahi time her sparking eyes with shock staring him she was very close to him could feel his breath.
Maan what are you doing here.
Geet:came back to world. "woh mien book dekhe rahi thi
Maan:let her free as his head was burning . "ouch "
Geet quickly hold hand slightly kissed it
Maan lostg here.
Geet:came back to world. "woh mien book dekhe rahi thi
Maan:let her free as his head was burning . "ouch "
Geet quickly hold hand slightly kissed it
Maan lost
Geet : kissing his finger Maan pull her more close there was hardly any distance between them her hand rest at his chest . the room was full dark as he had drop the candle the heard foot step
Geet :Maan mujhe ko chora
Maan: kyu
Geet: koi dekha laga
Maan: dekha na do he place her hand around his neck
Geet woh aarha ha
Maan: aana do whisper . he could feel her heart beat
Geet :please as the foot step was too close
DEV: anyone there.
maan placed his hand at her lips slightly pick her & move behind cupboard
SErvent : sahab koi nahi ha
DEV: ok you light the candles it will take time to fix the fuse
they went back
Geet : felt bit relax she clutch him more tight... the candle reflection on Geet made her beautiful
Geet: thx wanted him to leave her but he was lost in her face
Maan: stare her as if he is seeing him first time..... "eik min"
Geet : thought he will leave her he removed her catcher clip with his right hand. Geet more surprised with his act. Her hairs were free.
Maan aab theek ha.
Geet try to remove his left hand from her waist.
Maan cell ring Shhh ask her to be silent....Hello jee dadima
Dadima: aap na Geet ko dekha ha ....
Maan: nahi kyun kya huwa Dadi
Dadi : hum duppata lana gai woh ghab hogai
Maan: acha Dadi you must fire her
Geet looking him in anger
Dadi : yeh light bhi ... bechari bachi …. Hum na bhi tou un ko duhlan bana diya tha…. Sub aap kai wajha se ha Maan Cut the phone
Geet could hear what dadi said she felt shy started looking down
Maan capture her pic from his cell
Maan: whisper near her ear you didn't told me why you were worried for me last night.
Geet felt his breath tickling on her neck ….Geet who
Maan: you tell me I will leave you otherwise you stand like this the whole night
he let her free from her waist Geet relieve took a deep breath he placed his hand behind her head his palm was touching her neck fingers in her hairs
Geet :held her breath feeling him more close" Mein daar gai thi aagar aap ko kuch hogaya"
Maan: tou acha tha tumhari jan choot jati aik khroose dd boss se jo tum ko har waqat taang karta haInsult karta ha jan chooti ……..
Geet: without any hesitant placed her finger on lips….."iss tarah na bola mera paas aap ka siwa koi nahi ha apna" her hand grap his shoulder as if frighten with the thought of lossing him.
Maan felt some thing drop on his arm .he raised her chin tears were rolling down her cheeks
He softly picked up with his finger tip and kissed his finger
geet closed her eyes . he was totally moved with her reply. He softly kissed her eyelid his touch made her shiver in her spine…Maan: please don't cry in front of me . rested his head with her forehead

Geet: mein jao
Maan:if I will ask you to stay will you stay ?stare in her eye
Geet: confused I reply to your first question.
Maan: drop his idea of teasing her more. Quickly peck her lips " let me take you to dadi her dulhan had vanished. "he grab her hand tight she shocked what he had done.she placed her hand on her lips. He pull her with him in dark
Maan :Dadi mil gai aap ki dhulan as the enter light came back

Maan :Dadi mil gai aap ki dhulan as the enter light came back .
Dadi :surprised at maan reply…. Geet aai light aai smiled ….Kaha se milee
Maan: chup kar bathi thi ….apna……..pasued mummer piya ka intazar mein.he gave her hand in dadi all three hands united for few sec he slowly removed his…….Geet stare him
Dadi:Geet sit her she sit as if she was dreaming….she placed dupppata on her
Maan very looking at them
Dadi : kaise lagi aap ko Maan humari dulhan
Maan: hmmm achi very slowly ……….Geet could hear him
DADI: koi kaami ha iss mein
Maan:yes there is no ring
DADI : oh yes wait wait here it is she Maan....dadi's hand was in front of Maan with a ring
Maan: picked up he was staring in Geet questioning eyes. kneel down took her left hand from Dadi's Hand placed it in her ring finger .
DADI : smiled now there is every thing.
Geet Hand was in
DEV enter DADI where is bhai's dhulan ...........light went again Maan smiled at Dev Question
DADI here she is but you go & fix light first meet her later.
Maan kissed her hand in dark ...Geet thought she grab dadi hand but it was Maan's other hand .He smiled .......just raised a bit whisper in her ears "now i will not leave you ever don't you worry "
Geet: woh mein her lips touch Maan cheeks
Maan: kuch aur chaiya .......whisper.....she knew what he was asking
DADI: why you both are quiet? ........Maan dekha aap ja kar
Maan: jao mein asked her brush his lips next to her cheeks
Geet: held her breath :jee
Maan : kissed her softly & quickly.........aata hoon aabhi
BUS JEE BUS ....I started with Maaneet scene .......... it was a OS hope you all liked it.........just for fun guys. Love you all.
want some more 😉 if she enter his bedroom 😆

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Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: desigurl953
this is nice naddiya...prefer this to ur ff Simply Love....
please continue
thanks

oh 😭 MY simply love is bad 😭
added next part 😭

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: uzmam1
great stuff naddiya .. look forward to your next update😛

Uzma

added dear thanks it was for fun

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK
<font color="#ff0033" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BEAUTIFUL Naddiya as always! ⭐️
The scenes when Maan is lost in Geet and when he first sees her in the library are simply magical! 👏 👏 👏
Please continue with the next two parts asap 😃</font>

i added dear thx dear i was bore i wrote this ................
it was a small scene hope you like the remaining