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sravani899

@sravani899

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

nadiya

nice thoughts yaar

chalo serial mein nahi hota par hamara ffs and os mein to hota haina

i means confession and peck yaar

so nice and loved it loved it alot dear

thanks for the weekend treat dear

love u love u alot dear

really nice and supeb yaar

sravs

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

very nice OS dear..loved it 🤗..very romantic☺️..Maaneet rock😍

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CSSK

@CSSK

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

very nice wriiten i loved it please continue.

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Keanufan

@Keanufan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Hi Nadia,

Loved this OS from u...reminds me of the first time you had made a prediction on IF and it was so similar to the episode that was aired the next day(KDMHMD)

Okay so all in all this OS was really lovy-dovey....all those intimate close scenes...I can well imagine through the words that u hav chosen to explain n convey the meaning.....

I loved the part where Maan says that it would have been a relief for Geet as she would ahve got rid of a boss like him.And then Geet's reply was the best...I have no one except u...She is so lonely n Maan is always a saviour to her.

Well this OS has no element highlighting the tragic past of Geet but then its a OS....and u have focussed absolutely on Maneet..I mean there are no diversions....with other characters...I ws wondering about Dev's reaction but u were clever with making that scene take place in the dark....Was it deliberate? I mean does Dev know that his bhabhi is none other than Geet or is it hidden...

I am eagerly awaiting to know how will you plan Dev's character in the future....

Loved it...

Take care

Continue plz..

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kooliio

@kooliio

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awww that was soo sweet!! Loved it..hope you will write some more ;)

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: kooliio
Awww that was soo sweet!! Loved it..hope you will write some more ;)

you want 25 part of simply love or this one shot 😉 😉 select 1

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Keanufan
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oh dear your memory it is being two years...i was feeling bore last night not feeling like to type 25 part of my ff i just made a small scene......i am very happy now you are familiar with the serial characters.......... it is still hidden dear he doesn't know about Geet .....oh dear it was just a shot ...i have to complete my FF's 25 part