OS you are mine(weekend special) updated at page8

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MY FIRST ONE SHOT
Geet : Babaji mein kya karo... where to hide i can't go infront of anyone like that....she hide her self in cupboard.
Dev Enter room couldn't find her any where yeh bhai kai hona wali mrs bhi bhai kai tarah hain..
suddenly light went out
Dev :yeh kya huwa let me check he went out . bang with maan
Maan: who is this?
DEV:Me bro not bhabi .... smiled
Maan: what are you talking about.
DEV:dadima said your hona wali wife was here.
Maan: pagal ho tum.... go fix the fuse i am going to my library
Dev ok i will
Geet was sacred who was there .as it was all dark she was not getting out of cupboard heard
someone entering the room . she held her breath
Maan lighted candle he wanted to take out book from the cupboard he open with one hand candle in other.

Geet came out with a jerk :ahh . grab his shirt
Maan hold her from her waist Mahi time her sparking eyes with shock staring him she was very close to him could feel his breath.
Maan what are you doing here.
Geet:came back to world. "woh mien book dekhe rahi thi
Maan:let her free as his head was burning . "ouch "
Geet quickly hold hand slightly kissed it
Maan lostg here.
Geet:came back to world. "woh mien book dekhe rahi thi
Maan:let her free as his head was burning . "ouch "
Geet quickly hold hand slightly kissed it
Maan lost
Geet : kissing his finger Maan pull her more close there was hardly any distance between them her hand rest at his chest . the room was full dark as he had drop the candle the heard foot step
Geet :Maan mujhe ko chora
Maan: kyu
Geet: koi dekha laga
Maan: dekha na do he place her hand around his neck
Geet woh aarha ha
Maan: aana do whisper . he could feel her heart beat
Geet :please as the foot step was too close
DEV: anyone there.
maan placed his hand at her lips slightly pick her & move behind cupboard
SErvent : sahab koi nahi ha
DEV: ok you light the candles it will take time to fix the fuse
they went back
Geet : felt bit relax she clutch him more tight... the candle reflection on Geet made her beautiful
Geet: thx wanted him to leave her but he was lost in her face
Maan: stare her as if he is seeing him first time..... "eik min"
Geet : thought he will leave her he removed her catcher clip with his right hand. Geet more surprised with his act. Her hairs were free.
Maan aab theek ha.
Geet try to remove his left hand from her waist.
Maan cell ring Shhh ask her to be silent....Hello jee dadima
Dadima: aap na Geet ko dekha ha ....
Maan: nahi kyun kya huwa Dadi
Dadi : hum duppata lana gai woh ghab hogai
Maan: acha Dadi you must fire her
Geet looking him in anger
Dadi : yeh light bhi ... bechari bachi …. Hum na bhi tou un ko duhlan bana diya tha…. Sub aap kai wajha se ha Maan Cut the phone
Geet could hear what dadi said she felt shy started looking down
Maan capture her pic from his cell
Maan: whisper near her ear you didn't told me why you were worried for me last night.
Geet felt his breath tickling on her neck ….Geet who
Maan: you tell me I will leave you otherwise you stand like this the whole night
he let her free from her waist Geet relieve took a deep breath he placed his hand behind her head his palm was touching her neck fingers in her hairs
Geet :held her breath feeling him more close" Mein daar gai thi aagar aap ko kuch hogaya"
Maan: tou acha tha tumhari jan choot jati aik khroose dd boss se jo tum ko har waqat taang karta haInsult karta ha jan chooti ……..
Geet: without any hesitant placed her finger on lips….."iss tarah na bola mera paas aap ka siwa koi nahi ha apna" her hand grap his shoulder as if frighten with the thought of lossing him.
Maan felt some thing drop on his arm .he raised her chin tears were rolling down her cheeks
He softly picked up with his finger tip and kissed his finger
geet closed her eyes . he was totally moved with her reply. He softly kissed her eyelid his touch made her shiver in her spine…Maan: please don't cry in front of me . rested his head with her forehead

Geet: mein jao
Maan:if I will ask you to stay will you stay ?stare in her eye
Geet: confused I reply to your first question.
Maan: drop his idea of teasing her more. Quickly peck her lips " let me take you to dadi her dulhan had vanished. "he grab her hand tight she shocked what he had done.she placed her hand on her lips. He pull her with him in dark
Maan :Dadi mil gai aap ki dhulan as the enter light came back

Maan :Dadi mil gai aap ki dhulan as the enter light came back .
Dadi :surprised at maan reply…. Geet aai light aai smiled ….Kaha se milee
Maan: chup kar bathi thi ….apna……..pasued mummer piya ka intazar mein.he gave her hand in dadi all three hands united for few sec he slowly removed his…….Geet stare him
Dadi:Geet sit her she sit as if she was dreaming….she placed dupppata on her
Maan very looking at them
Dadi : kaise lagi aap ko Maan humari dulhan
Maan: hmmm achi very slowly ……….Geet could hear him
DADI: koi kaami ha iss mein
Maan:yes there is no ring
DADI : oh yes wait wait here it is she Maan....dadi's hand was in front of Maan with a ring
Maan: picked up he was staring in Geet questioning eyes. kneel down took her left hand from Dadi's Hand placed it in her ring finger .
DADI : smiled now there is every thing.
Geet Hand was in
DEV enter DADI where is bhai's dhulan ...........light went again Maan smiled at Dev Question
DADI here she is but you go & fix light first meet her later.
Maan kissed her hand in dark ...Geet thought she grab dadi hand but it was Maan's other hand .He smiled .......just raised a bit whisper in her ears "now i will not leave you ever don't you worry "
Geet: woh mein her lips touch Maan cheeks
Maan: kuch aur chaiya .......whisper.....she knew what he was asking
DADI: why you both are quiet? ........Maan dekha aap ja kar
Maan: jao mein asked her brush his lips next to her cheeks
Geet: held her breath :jee
Maan : kissed her softly & quickly.........aata hoon aabhi
BUS JEE BUS ....I started with Maaneet scene .......... it was a OS hope you all liked it.........just for fun guys. Love you all.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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scene 2
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other scene from different angle
Geet enter room without thinking...." yeh maan sir bhi na every time follow me.where to hide chalo bathroom mein chup jati hoon.
Dev enter the room found no one he locked the door from outside. "why guest room door is open. With wind it is making noise."
Maan was in shower behind curtain wrap towel as he heard someone entering room." kon ha wahan"
Geet: oh yeh yahan uff kya karo mein.... try to seek out of bathroom.
Maan saw her and grab her hand"what are you doing here " turn her towards him .
Geet saw his bare chest wet hair water dripping from his hairs.. "woh mein" looked him till down
Maan: examine kar leya tum na mujhe .
Geet :felt shy closed her eyes with her other hand" someone was following me i thought you were that person i came in this room" maan saw her adorable lips moving he touch it with his finger. Geet moved back she just reached under shower her hand on her eyes . Geet mummer "I will not look at him"
Maan:heard what she said he open shower
Geet: yeh fuwaree kis na khula moved her hand
She was a strange kind of smile at Maan face as if a kid had done something naughty.
Geet: "uff i am all wet leave my hand i will close this fuwara " water was dripping from her fore head she sneezed her head hit Maan chest
Maan: closed it ... wait wait let me give you towel
Geet: nahi thought he will give his again closed her eyes
Maan: got what she thought? he quickly wore his pants" yeh loo" throw it on her head
Geet peep through towel he was standing in front of her wrap his arm around . geet saw him coming towards her he came very close took towel from her hand wipe her face ,her neck she closed her eyes he covered her with towel .saw her lips terrible with cold turning blue
Maan: whisper "are you feeling cold" his warm breath tickle her cheeks
Geet mummer"yes"
Maan move more closed to her lips touch it with his finger . his breath was brushing her lips he could feel she is shivering Geet felt weak in her knee feeling him so close to him she grab his arm to support herself. Maan "are you still cold "
Geet: open her eyes his was very close to her she could read it...she closed it again
Maan: against her suddenly the trembling slow down he wrap his arm around her waist.she enjoyed his soft warm touch at her lips. they broke up after few mins
Maan " are you feeling cold" touch her nose tip with his
Geet no
Maan:kya no Geet dry yourself Geet came back to life what she had dream ........ "uff babaji what i dream"he was standing staring her
she walk to the large mirror maan moved started looking for his shirt.
Geet still what she was thinking she pull her hairs at front dry it Maan quietly walk behind her watching her back he run his hand there she jolted with his touch she he softly kiss her on her neck turn her around took towel from her hand she was trying to take off the jewellery's
Maan Wait let me help you? he very carefully remove teeka she could feel his breath at her forehead .he kissed there. slowly removed earing one by one kissed her both ears. she starting feeling weak in her legs
grab the table he try to take off the necklace but he didnot notice her duppata stuck in with its chain it cover her face both stared at each other
Maan 1 min he took it out she was staring him he could feel her breath at his chest he bend down Kissed her both eyes over duppata started pulling away from her face very slowly ,kissed her nose tip when he reached her lips there was nothing between it he passionately kissed it .

bang she drop his brush
Geet SIR please give this to Dadima....
Maan; came back to his scenes" what I was thinking? ok I will give her you keep there.
Geet : move out of the changing room she was very confused passing Maan he was find something in his cupboard .he at the same time turn both bang
Geet Aah! as he hit her hard she was about to fall down Maan grab hold of her from her waist she grip his open shirt Mahi.........he very slowly pick her up his hand was behind her head the both stare at each other at a point they reached very closed to each other hardly any distance between them Geet closed her eyes Maan saw her adorable pink lips he could not resist any more he very softly kissed it .got a positive response from other said .those hand which was resting at his chest suddenly hug him. He too closed his eyes to enjoy ,to feel that precious moment. Stayed like that as long as they could. This reunion was expected for long. They both listened their heart for the first time


It is my second scene dear readers I will not cont as I have a FF *SIMPLY LOVE *this was just a one shot to enjoy weekend
NH
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice..............
waiting 4 the rest of scene..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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do continue....but enuf of eyelocks and missing kisses....now for a real kiss plz...
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same as above ..........

Geet : Babaji mein kya karo... where to hide i can't go infront of anyone like that....she hide her self in cupboard.
Dev Enter room couldn't find her any where yeh bhai kai hona wali mrs bhi bhai kai tarah hain..
suddenly light went out
Dev :yeh kya huwa let me check he went out . bang with maan
Maan: who is this?
DEV:Me bro not bhabi .... smiled
Maan: what are you talking about.
DEV:dadima said your hona wali wife was here.
Maan: pagal ho tum.... go fix the fuse i am going to my library
Dev ok i will
Geet was sacred who was there .as it was all dark she was not getting out of cupboard heard
someone entering the room . she held her breath
Maan lighted candle he wanted to take out book from the cupboard he open with one hand candle in other.

Geet came out with a jerk :ahh . grab his shirt
Maan hold her from her waist Mahi time her sparking eyes with shock staring him she was very close to him could feel his breath.


dear prob ha plz see next part below

Maan what are you doing here.
Geet:came back to world. "woh mien book dekhe rahi thi
Maan:let her free as his head was burning . "ouch "
Geet quickly hold hand slightly kissed it
Maan lostg here.
Geet:came back to world. "woh mien book dekhe rahi thi
Maan:let her free as his head was burning . "ouch "
Geet quickly hold hand slightly kissed it
Maan lost
to be cont
weekend special
my laptop is 😡

Geet : kissing his finger Maan pull her more close there was hardly any distance between them her hand rest at his chest . the room was full dark as he had drop the candle the heard foot step
Geet :Maan mujhe ko chora
Maan: kyu
Geet: koi dekha laga
Maan: dekha na do he place her hand around his neck
Geet woh aarha ha
Maan: aana do whisper . he could feel her heart beat
Geet :please as the foot step was too close
DEV: anyone there.
maan placed his hand at her lips slightly pick her & move behind cupboard
SErvent : sahab koi nahi ha
DEV: ok you light the candles it will take time to fix the fuse
they went back
Geet : felt bit relax she clutch him more tight... the candle reflection on Geet made her beautiful
Geet: thx wanted him to leave her but he was lost in her face
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww tht is sooooo cute!!!! U are an amazing writer by the way!! Ive read some of the parts from ur ff will comment on it too once ive finished reading all the parts!! 😊
but plzz do continue the scenes.... Ur writing is amazing and straight away creates an image of wht happens between maaneet!!
Edited by isha_95 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please update quickly pleaseee... god it gives me butterflies in my stomach reading it. what will happen if something like that actually happened in serial.i will die due to the hotness..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz continue!! can't wait for the next part!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx, it was very nice and sweet!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow hooooooooooh weekend special for maneet fans ,wht else do we need.🤗 a big hug 2 nadia for takin care of us

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