OS you are mine(weekend special) updated at page8 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww what a cute scene!!!! love maaneet sooo much! and hey once again u have done a great job! plzz continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh wow super idea ..........totally realistic ..........i am so happy to read this .......thnk you

nd love for ur awesum update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
love this happens...i really wish maan is just as smooth like this on mon!!! loved it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

oh wow super idea ..........totally realistic ..........i am so happy to read this .......thnk you

nd love for ur awesum update

i am adding 1 more scene in few mins hope you all like that too.
happy you liked my thought
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
that was awesome!! totally loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
😊 nice os, please continue. keep me updated.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
other scene from different angle
Geet enter room without thinking...." yeh maan sir bhi na every time follow me.where to hide chalo bathroom mein chup jati hoon.
Dev enter the room found no one he locked the door from outside. "why guest room door is open. With wind it is making noise."
Maan was in shower behind curtain wrap towel as he heard someone entering room." kon ha wahan"
Geet: oh yeh yahan uff kya karo mein.... try to seek out of bathroom.
Maan saw her and grab her hand"what are you doing here " turn her towards him .
Geet saw his bare chest wet hair water dripping from his hairs.. "woh mein" looked him till down
Maan: examine kar leya tum na mujhe .
Geet :felt shy closed her eyes with her other hand" someone was following me i thought you were that person i came in this room" maan saw her adorable lips moving he touch it with his finger. Geet moved back she just reached under shower her hand on her eyes . Geet mummer "I will not look at him"
Maan:heard what she said he open shower
Geet: yeh fuwaree kis na khula moved her hand
She was a strange kind of smile at Maan face as if a kid had done something naughty.
Geet: "uff i am all wet leave my hand i will close this fuwara " water was dripping from her fore head she sneezed her head hit Maan chest
Maan: closed it ... wait wait let me give you towel
Geet: nahi thought he will give his again closed her eyes
Maan: got what she thought? he quickly wore his pants" yeh loo" throw it on her head
Geet peep through towel he was standing in front of her wrap his arm around . geet saw him coming towards her he came very close took towel from her hand wipe her face ,her neck she closed her eyes he covered her with towel .saw her lips terrible with cold turning blue
Maan: whisper "are you feeling cold" his warm breath tickle her cheeks
Geet mummer"yes"
Maan move more closed to her lips touch it with his finger . his breath was brushing her lips he could feel she is shivering Geet felt weak in her knee feeling him so close to him she grab his arm to support herself. Maan "are you still cold "
Geet: open her eyes his was very close to her she could read it...she closed it again
Maan: against her suddenly the trembling slow down he wrap his arm around her waist.she enjoyed his soft warm touch at her lips. they broke up after few mins
Maan " are you feeling cold" touch her nose tip with his
Geet no
Maan:kya no Geet dry yourself Geet came back to life what she had dream ........ "uff babaji what i dream"he was standing staring her
she walk to the large mirror maan moved started looking for his shirt.
Geet still what she was thinking she pull her hairs at front dry it Maan quietly walk behind her watching her back he run his hand there she jolted with his touch she he softly kiss her on her neck turn her around took towel from her hand she was trying to take off the jewellery's
Maan Wait let me help you? he very carefully remove teeka she could feel his breath at her forehead .he kissed there. slowly removed earing one by one kissed her both ears. she starting feeling weak in her legs
grab the table he try to take off the necklace but he didnot notice her duppata stuck in with its chain it cover her face both stared at each other
Maan 1 min he took it out she was staring him he could feel her breath at his chest he bend down Kissed her both eyes over duppata started pulling away from her face very slowly ,kissed her nose tip when he reached her lips there was nothing between it he passionately kissed it .

bang she drop his brush
Geet SIR please give this to Dadima....
Maan; came back to his scenes" what I was thinking? ok I will give her you keep there.
Geet : move out of the changing room she was very confused passing Maan he was find something in his cupboard .he at the same time turn both bang
Geet Aah! as he hit her hard she was about to fall down Maan grab hold of her from her waist she grip his open shirt Mahi.........he very slowly pick her up his hand was behind her head the both stare at each other at a point they reached very closed to each other hardly any distance between them Geet closed her eyes Maan saw her adorable pink lips he could not resist any more he very softly kissed it .got a positive response from other said .those hand which was resting at his chest suddenly hug him. He too closed his eyes to enjoy ,to feel that precious moment. Stayed like that as long as they could. This reunion was expected for long. They both listened their heart for the first time


It is my second scene dear readers I will not cont as I have a FF *SIMPLY LOVE *this was just a one shot to enjoy weekend
NH

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
thanks babe...shower scene is so HOT!!!! Loved it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
WOW!!! that was such a passionate scene. hahaha they both were dreaming about one another...

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